She says I Love You dad ...and he feels it ..... a poem

Maybe there's not so much a stronger
lover than daughters
But truely when she speaks the words
it's a spoken word that matters

Ahh I love you too sweety
you're the reason I live
And the only reason I still know
how to give

Though I give you never quite
enough
How is it a fathers way of showing love
comes out rough

Oh know it ..... own it ....make it always
be what we need
I will always wish I was so much more
for you ! That's my creed

Your voice is like the wind.... whispering
pleasing gently it blows
You my dear girl are the meaning of love
your dad truely knows







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wayne barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

Thank you Ed. This is a piece that accomplishes the difficult task of describing that relationship between father and daughter. Great piece.


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shanmarie 3 years ago from Texas

Beautiful and sentimental. :)


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

This is so beautiful Ed......


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

Oh Ed, this is truly beautiful! I tried hardest for my daddy's love and it was there all along... just hard to see under that roughness. These are things we learn to appreciate when we look back.

You understand with your heart Ed and you write from it too, always so amazed!

Hugs,

Cat


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Wayne , as you know having daughters is a huge blessing , they can break our hearts and our minds ! LOL Thank you kind sir for reading !....Ed


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Thank you Shan ! I hope you are as loved as my daughter is ......well hell, I luve U !, thank you sweet lady !......Ed


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shanmarie 3 years ago from Texas

No, thank you, Ed, for that sweet comment! Hugs and love to you. :)


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Petra ! Thank you ,thank you Okay , you got it !.....Ed


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

What do you mean no Shan ! You are the sweet one ! lol........ed


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shanmarie 3 years ago from Texas

Okay, if you insist. :D


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

I do of course ! .....:-}


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Such a lovely poem. The love between a daughter and her Dad and vice versa is so beautiful. Loved it.


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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

I know this feeling. You painted it well. thank you


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

I have a lump in my throat that i can't seem to swallow, Cowboy. I can't tell you how - or why - this touched me..

Such a lucky little girl..

sharing..


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

all of you are soo beautiful , it actually hurts ,, thank you all !


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. A father's love for his daughter comes shining through. Loved this. Passing this one on.


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Michele Travis 3 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

Amazing and beautiful. Thank you for writing this one.

Voted up!

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