Water Dreams......

As she slips silently from her silken
robes and wraps her arms together
Her arms beneath her breast's
and raises her leg to test the
warmth.........
Just her toes into the
suddsy
water
My eyes take on a new
purpose in life .......
I watch as she lowers herself
slowly into the tub
and relaxes.......
One thing comes to
mind ..........
I wish that I was the water
that caresses her
for this morning.........
for Every morning.....

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jandee 5 years ago from Liverpool.U.K

Very sweet and lovely to read,jandee


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Thank you Jandee , hope you have a great day.


SilverGenes 5 years ago

What a lovely sentiment! Romance is alive and well, after all :)


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Oh , Silvergenes , can you really imagine a man who wasn't a romantic ?......:-} Nice to see you.


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Hyphenbird 5 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

WhooHooo! The heart of horseback is gentle and romantic. With your love of words and the human soul I am not surprised to see you write a love "song".


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California

Whoa!! Ahorse this was great and very teasing I wanted to read more jinkies!! You have to write more to this I am calling an Encore...

smiles :)

bella


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Hyphenbird , thank you , I am all things including gentle and romantic , and moody and edgy and kind and distant , I am a conflictive man , much like them all , No?......:-} :-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

BellaWritter, thank you so much , I had a vision actually , they say take one word or one picture and write a poem, so there it is. I will do that Bella ! By the way congratulations on the book , how is that going for you ? Well I really hope.


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California

wow amazing one vision and ya ran with it well I loved it!! Uhh book sales are not so well but I will see and give it time I will be publishing my second book buit this time an illustrated childrens book with William huff aka bbnix! Well I cannot wait to read more...


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Paradise7 5 years ago from Upstate New York

Lucky lady whom you worship in her bath.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Good luck Bellawritter , I hope it all works for you! :-}.....More later! LOL


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

A gentleman would worship all ladies in a bath! :-}....Thank you Paradise.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

There's just something so mysteriously beautiful about a woman taking a bath. Men are always fascinated by it.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Hey Will, to tell you the truth , I just like about everything they do! LOL


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Maggie-May 5 years ago from the Island of Cape Breton to the Eastern Shores near Halifax, NS

How devine! Tub-time is best shared with the right one!

Great tribute ahorseback!

Take care, and have yourself a very nice night,

MM


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Hey Maggie May ,True....True, I recently put in a Jacuzzi in my wifes bathroom , now we're talking about an outddor one.....Hmmm they are nice. Especially when I can do the work myself. Imagine ,summer or winter outside ......:-} have a nice day


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samiaali 5 years ago

Hey ahorseback, You are a true romantic! This was beautiful! :)


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

Hi ahorseback, sounds like a magical moment...


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Cardisa 5 years ago from Jamaica

This gave me goosebumps, in a most sensual way! This is what I absolutely love!


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Thank you Samiaali Oh don't know ,part of me is , and the other 99% ?....:-} nice to see you Sami. Along time ago I knew a Sami, her name was Samantha and she used to tease the heck out of me , she was cuter than a button though , are all you Sami's so cute.LOL


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Movie Master , Thank you , Ahh, the imagination is out of control! just once in a blue moon.:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Cardisa , Thats a good thing right? I'm glad you enjoyed it ! :-}


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SilentReed 5 years ago from Philippines

Forget about being the water.just jump into the tub with her :)


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Silentreed, The imagination must play out first, come on now be a romantic LOL.....sometimes it's just the dream ,like image of things that truely is the motivater.


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SilentReed 5 years ago from Philippines

This is giving me a wet dream LOL. OK,I'll take your advice. Guitar strumming music in the background,dim lights,scented candles,rose petals floating in the water.....then I'll jump into the tub.:))


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Fossillady 5 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

Sizzling and delightful, enough said


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Silentreed, Now you've got it , sounds like fun!


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Fossillady , Thank you , one of those "I can't help it poems.!


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thebluestar 5 years ago from Northern Ireland

Whoop whoop, this is a lovely read left me tingling. You old romantic you, the only observation my other half would see is how long I spent in the bath and how much the electric had cost ha ha, If only someone wrote poetry for me, ahhhh get the violin's out, such a sado!!


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Blue Star, I'm not really a romantic just a peepin Tom. lol...He wan'ts to ,He wants to ! He just is all toungue tied!...:-]


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Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

Wow! Oh Sorry, Dad. I don't mean to peek. I'll closed the door now. ;D


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Freya , Now there you all go ! Take the tender side of a mans romantisism and make fun of him!....:-] :-}


Marina Lester 5 years ago

As a woman, that moment is perfect. A warm bath and an adoring man looking on in love... *sigh* ;) Very nice... an embrace of water and the heart of a man... I'm going to let this one soak in my mind for awhile... :)


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Marina , Such is the truest beauty of a woman! The sensuality of every ounce of a womans movement is what drives a mans passions, if he is so lucky! The problem is this, we never should have revealed the secret ! Truely there is no finer beauty than a womans inner beauty. And her outer appearance as she moves in the dance of her life....:-}


Marina Lester 5 years ago

Whoa, hub that! "there is no finer beauty than a womans inner beauty. And her outer appearance as she moves in the dance of her life..."


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Marina , Yes!, and mix the two together , wow, Only the most beautiful thing in the world ! And there is awesome beauty in every woman. five to ninety five. Maybe thats why it burns me to see anyone put a woman down ........Thank you for sharing.....:-}

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