She's an eternal beauty.......

Moist and warm her touch
wet and prying her caress
I move my hands across olive colored beauty
dreaming of our undress

Moisture seeps from eternal heat
my touch beckons her on
And a warm soft glow within her liquid form
reachs far beyond

Orgasmic pleasures ......no other way
to describe her feel
She owns me now as I close my eyes
as all my layers peel

The warm glow of a drink
intoxicated mood of pleasure
How far will she take me
too far I know to measure

And finally it all comes together
the two meet and rub
Such are the guilty pleasures of me
and my beautiful hot tub!

Comments 25 comments

cleaner3 4 years ago

This is poetry !!!

Words are used with eloquence and detail.

Nuff said!!


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cavallo 4 years ago from Newmarket,UK

You had me dreaming. Until I got to the end ! Well written.


Ghaelach 4 years ago

Hi ahorsebck.

A super hub had me going. Loved the end and I totally agree with you.

LOL Ghaelach


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

LOL This made me smile so wide. I've always like the scenes of people in hot tubs with bottles of wine or glasses of martinis.


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sligobay 4 years ago from east of the equator

This is a sensuous poem and a great image of a hot tub. I understand your love affair.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

This is a hoot...Love it...


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Cleaner , Thank you very much! Thats really nice...:-}


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Ghaelach, Hey Im glad I got you going !, It happens to me all the time , too imaginative ,I guess! Thank you.....:-}


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Gypsy Rose , Im just a micro brew kind of guy though , not too sophisticated!LOL....:-]


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

SligoBay , Gerry! Greetings my man, Yes I was looking at wooden hot tubs online and thinking about .......well lets just say I was thinking!...lol...:-}


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Always , Too Too much time and imagination on my hands !lol, Thank you ....:-}


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

A brilliant poem and I loved it.

Take care my friend and have a wonderful day.

Eddy.


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Eiddwen , When I think of Ireland , England and Scotland , my roots ! I think of my new found friends like you.....:-} Be well!


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sligobay 4 years ago from east of the equator

She's a bit like a "wood nymph" from the look of her.


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Cardisa 4 years ago from Jamaica

You are certainly getting very naughty....you almost had me there...lol


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Hi Sligo , yes ! I was actually looking at wood tubs , and got lost with my imagination ,Thanks Jerry !...:-}


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Cardisa ! Who ? meeee? No ,this is all about a cedar tub ........what were you thinking?Hmmmm?.....:-}


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Fennelseed 4 years ago from Australia

Oh you took us to the edge with this, who would have thought??... a hot tub!!! It's funny, but when I re-read this knowing the context I feel the warm, liquid soothing, orgasmic pleasure you speak of, but not quite in the same way as the first time around :)

Magic erotic words any which way!! Brilliant and sneaky Ahorseback.


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Hi fennelseed ! Thats me , sneaky !I hope you are well my friend . Glad that it Gotcha!lol.....:-}


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Ruchira 4 years ago from United States

haha...good one ahorseback!

I thought this was some valentine special...lol


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

I gottch Ruchuria , lol...:-} I was looking at hot tubs online !


Flickr 4 years ago

nice, makes you think about things a little different. thanks for sharing.


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Flicka , Thank you for caring ........:-}


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F5487laura 4 years ago from Yorkshire

Saw your whole poem as a vision from the first line, well done!


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

F5487Laura, And loook everyone , another young and beautiful writer that we must catch up with !Thank you Laura!......:-}

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