Shimmering Brook (tanka)

Shimmering brook

Which so often filled her glass

With your melody

Fill my glass with some refrain

For I find myself thirsty


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Sam Tumblin 16 months ago from Eunice, La.

Thanks for sharing Shimmering Brook on Hubpages...Looking forward to read more of your work.


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bravewarrior 16 months ago from Central Florida

Awesome! You've said so much in so few words. I really like this one Martin.


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Faith Reaper 16 months ago from southern USA

Lovely and sweet!

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