Shooting Stars


lying on the grass

tonight

without minding the world

it’s just me

stargazing with you


cold breeze

and rose petals in the air

I feel godly

tonight

only you can take what’s mine


baby, do I take your breath away

like a night sky slowly turns to day

would you still be here

even if I have to walk away


shooting stars…

when are you fallin…


in a certain blink

the clock would stop…

you ought to know

just don’t let me go…


lying on the grass

tonight

without a care to the world

it’s just me

staring at your stunning face


your profile

mesmerizing being

I just forget

how to breathe

don’t care if I’ll be broken again


baby, I’m in love with you

it makes me cry

and I can’t tell you why

perhaps it’s not the time


shooting stars…

when are you fallin…


in a certain blink

the clock would stop…

you ought to know

just don’t let me go...




© 2010-04-26    b l a i s e

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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 6 years ago

Ah, just getting wrapped in this moment can leave on feeling breathless... and the song so symbolic. :)

Love it, blaise!


poetlorraine 6 years ago

love is sure in the air. nice


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Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

Mesmerized by the peace you send in words, enjoyed your hub blaise..


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wesleycox 6 years ago from Back in Texas, at least until August 2012

This poem is fantastic, it has a wonderful quality to it that may be beyond words for me. Lovely.


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Dark Heart 6 years ago

You're on a roll lately with your fine work.

I'm loving it.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

@Invictus - ow did I just take your breath away? ;p The lovely song, perfect for what I've been feeling in the moment..

One, 21 guns

Lay down your arms

Give up the fight

One, 21 guns

Throw up your arms into the sky,

You and I

**silly 21 guns shoot me, while I'm waiting for the shooting stars LOL THANKS, glad you love it :) XO

@Poet L - Yep it's always where we are... Thanks lovely Poet :)

@Mentalist Acer - glad you enjoyed it. Wonder if it has your acer effect ;p Thanks

@Wesleycox - Wow, you're back Superman! Nice to see you :) And thank you for the wonderful comments.

@DH - Hai Mr. Joe! You always dazzle me. Thank you :)


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carolina muscle 6 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

very sweet- very visual!!


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Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

Lovelyyyyyyy!

Wow. You really know how to fluttering heart with your words.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

thank you CM :)

Freya Cesare, it's nice meeting you. Thanks for the praises! :)


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

When you write we are all with you!

Maybe it's me- but that's what I see!

Thank you Blaise!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Aw thank you my sweet Mik..you always see me.. :)


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Cheeky Girl 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Hy Blaise: I love this poem. Your themes of love and romance are always well worth reading. I love your take on romance. It's always spoken in a universal language in a very accessible style. Great, as always! : )


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Hello Cheeky :) Yep it's my style casual yet deep meanings :) I'm frank and hate puzzling the puzzle more LOL Glad you love reading me moi friend :)


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

Very Pretty And

Heartfelt.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Hello Awful Poet :) Your pretty comments mean a lot. Thanks for the fan mail, too :) TC


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Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

Fabulous.!!!!!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

=) So are you. Thanks ;)


Graham Bretton 6 years ago

in one word: flaccid. I just don't get any real emotion from it, a fleeting sentiment, some superficial details, but that's it.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Thanks for reading and commenting, Graham. You didn't get it because you've never been there...Someday you will...wish you luck for the one who would bring you in there.


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Entwinds 6 years ago

I love the way your words flow FANTASTIC


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

thank you Entwinds :)


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heart4theword 6 years ago from hub

This music video was intense, yet had some soft wording? In the end, we all need love, even when we feel we want to be alone. "We were created to love, and be loved." Great Poem!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

well said Heart4theworld :) Thanks a lot


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Words that flow like water flow best. I loved stargazing as a kid. I still like to look at the stars, wondering what life has in store for me. This is wonderful. You have so many great love poems here. Please publish them, Blaise. I will buy them gladly. Take care.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

I am myself when I look at the stars..I've made series of hubs bout that. Take a peek ;)

http://hubpages.com/literature/Higher-than-the-Roo

I am trying to compile my poetry stuffs to publish. I'll let you know when it's done. I'll be glad to share 'em with you and Cass. ;) Thank you. TC XO


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kaltopsyd 6 years ago from Trinidad originally, but now in the USA

Aww, what a sweet poem! I enjoyed reading that.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Hello Kaltopsyd! Glad you enjoyed :)


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Denise Handlon 6 years ago from North Carolina

Beautiful poem. I felt it was the lyrics of a song...if it isn't already, it could easily be set to music. Thanks. Very provacotive hub. Touche to Graham-a cynic of sorts, obviously. Thank you.

I have a poem you might want to read on my hub: Soul Work: JOY


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Nice meeting you Denise. Yup, it's lyrical poetry. I'd be glad if someone set it up to music :) Haha, Graham is Graham..it's thrilling reading his comments though lol Thank you. I'll be on your page :)


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Kavita Trivedi 6 years ago from London

This is so beautiful with such wonderful imagery and it takes me on a journey through each stanza


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sofs 6 years ago

Blaise, you have set ablaze the fire within you.... let it burn ..the world, leaving imprints of beauty and love.

Lovely!!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Hi Kavita! Thank you for the warm words. :)

Hello Sofs! Yep letting it sparkle while the fire lasts LOL Thanks for the pretty message :)


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

Stunning, I loved every bit of it.

Romance, lost in someone's presence

A feeling I miss more than anything. You have a unusual way with words, and it's beautiful and intensely real.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thanks for the stunning comments Ben. You're great yourself :)


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Enigmatic Me 5 years ago from East Coast Canada

youthful take on an ancient quest. Loving the fact I get lost in the details of your soul...the words you share tingling memories almost long lost. Thanks


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Enigmatic..that's what you are :)


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Bella Nina 5 years ago from USA

Beautiful. I enjoyed this poem very much. It took me some place else ~ just where I needed to go. Thank you.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you Bella. Have a lovely night :)


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Exquisite, you gave me wings with these romantic images, ah, so breathtaking!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

shooting stars I love them.. Thanks for reading Max :)

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