Short, Short Story - The Government Man

The Government Man


The old rancher sat on the porch and watched the stranger come up the road. He knew he was a stranger because he knew every man-jack in the county, and how they sat a horse. This here was a stranger, sure enough.

He’d finished his morning chores, and eaten breakfast, and now he was enjoying his last cup of coffee. The boys were out by the spring, cleaning it out and getting ready for the spring roundup. The next two weeks would be hard and dusty work, but he’d loved it since he was a boy. This ranch had been founded by his grandfather and passed down through his father to him. It was the only life he had ever known.

He pulled his pipe out of his pants pocket, and eyed it. The stranger was walking his horse down the lane and slowly looking all around. He got out his penknife and scraped out the boll. Satisfied, he refilled it with Bull Durham and tamped it down, lighting it with a match he'd scraped to life on the porch rail in front of him.

The stranger rode into the yard and drew up in front of the porch. For a long moment, the two men regarded each other. Then the old rancher spoke.

“Light and set, stranger. Ma will fetch you a cup of coffee.”

The stranger swung down, and walked closer.

“No, thank you. I’m here on official United States Government business. I’ve come to inspect this ranch for safety violations.”

The old man removed the pipe from his mouth and spat into the dust, landing just in front of the stranger’s boots.

“I’m J. P. Watson, owner and proprietor and this here ranch don’t need no inspection.”

“I’m Bertram Bartholomew, and I am here on official government business. My card sir.”

He handed the old man an embossed United States Government calling card, identifying himself as an official.

“That card, sir, is all I need. It is my authority, and not to be disputed!”

J. P. Watson studied the card for a long minute and handed it back.

“Well, I don’t want to go against the law, so I reckon you can go ahead and inspect.”

Half an hour later, the inspector returned with a list.

“Your branding irons have no labels warning about being hot, and the steps to your bunkhouse have no handrail. Those are serious violations sir! I will now inspect your fields.”

The old man exploded. “There ain’t nothing wrong with my fields! You just get on your damn horse and ride out of here!”

Bertram Bartholomew presented his card again, and smiled.

The old man sat down, and scowled.

Fifteen minutes later, he heard terrified screams coming from behind the barn. As he watched, Bertram Bartholomew appeared, running for his life as a giant, long-horned bull closed in on him.

“Help me! Please help me, I beg you!”

The old man slowly got to his feet, and cupped his hands around his mouth.

“Show him your card!”




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Pollyannalana profile image

Pollyannalana 5 years ago from US

I love it!


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AmaTainted 5 years ago from Texas

i see the government man cab dish out the bull but not take it...

thank you for the smiles! voted up, funny and interesting.


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

ROFL Good for that long-horned bull. Can I borrow him.

Loved it


femmeflashpoint 5 years ago

Guess the government guy forgot the rancher was his boss. ;)


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diogenes 5 years ago from UK and Mexico

Hilarious Will. Nice to get a good laugh on a miserable morning here...Bob


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dahoglund 5 years ago from Wisconsin Rapids

When I worked for DOD one of the most favored jokes was "I'm from the government and I'm here to help you." Government workers are ones most bothered by overblown government,at least where I was.Up and funny.


ruffridyer 5 years ago from Dayton, ohio

Loved this.


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ubanichijioke 5 years ago from Lagos

Funny, funny & funny. He should ve shown the bull his card. lol

N I C E

O N E!


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CMerritt 5 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana

I love happy endings!!!

I agree with dahglund.........the nine most terrifying words in the English language are, 'I'm from the government and I'm here to help...that is a great quote from Ronald Reagan.

I loved it!


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GNelson 5 years ago from Florida

Is is a funny story will, very good. But you didn't mention the fracking going on right behind the last good well.


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SubRon7 5 years ago from eastern North Dakota

I loved it, Will, and I loved that pic of the longhorn!


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Dexter Yarbrough 5 years ago from United States

Hi Will! Another masterpiece! A great lesson for the government today!


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Rosie2010 5 years ago from Toronto, Canada

Hiya Will, still laughing here. That was very entertaining. Doncha just love 'em longhorns? Cheers!

Have a nice day,

Rosie


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MartieCoetser 5 years ago from South Africa

Thanks! Had a great laugh. Excellent writing, as always.


Nan Mynatt 5 years ago

Great short story as usual. The moral of this story is that when it is all said and done, the government can't really help themselves without us! I marked you up!


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Cardisa 5 years ago from Jamaica

Will you are hilarious, where do you get your stories....LOL

I can't stop laughing as I imagine that darn bull chasing Dexter....er..Bartholomew..lol


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Amanda Storm 5 years ago

Had a good laugh at the ending ... voted up, funny, and interesting.


Lynn S. Murphy 5 years ago

I totally love your characters and the sense of humor. Made my day!


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pedrn44 5 years ago from New Berlin Wisconsin

Love your story! Funny!


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Debby Bruck 5 years ago

Terrific! This put a smile on my face.


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James A Watkins 5 years ago from Chicago

I love this story. You are one outstanding writer, my friend. I love the way you use the English language, such as:

"a match he'd scraped to life on the porch rail"

Awesome!

I also appreciate AmaTainted's hilarious line:

"I see the government man can dish out the bull but not take it"

CMerritt's comment is great:

"I love happy endings!" :D

But the funniest thing on this page is of course:

“Show him your card!”


Susieq42 5 years ago

Great story, Will, only I'd like to see Obama as the government agent! Now that would really make me laugh. Have a blessed day.


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VendettaVixen 5 years ago from Ireland

Will, fantastic writing as usual. The tone was lovely and casual throughout, but of course my favourite part was the ending. Brilliant.

Keep 'em good'uns comin'!


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Phyllis Doyle 5 years ago from High desert of Nevada.

I love it! This is an Up and Awesome hub, Will. Love that old farmer...what a guy!


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

HAHaHa, This is funny. Cheers...


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b. Malin 5 years ago

Loved the Ending and didn't see it coming, nor did "Bertram Bartholomew". Sometimes you just gotta kick Regulations to the curb! Good One, Will.


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FitnezzJim 5 years ago from Fredericksburg, Virginia

Phrases like "I'm from the government and I'm here to help" take on a whole new meaning if we ever recover that belief that "We the People" are the government.

Bull or no bull. :)


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Twilight Lawns 5 years ago from Norbury-sur-Mer, Surrey, England. U.K.

Lovely Will. You are a master story teller of the highest capability. I am always amazed how quickly I feel as if I am in a time and a place I have never entered, and then you come along, and it feels like home.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, Pollyannalana!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, AmaTainted, and I loved your comment!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Rosemay50, and yes, we should all own such a bull!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, femmeflashpoint, and you're right!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi Bob! Glad you enjoyed it.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, dahoglund, and I know what you mean!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, ruffridyer!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, ubanichijioke, and thanks for reading!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi Chris!

Thank you!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, GNelson, and I'm not sure what you mean.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, SubRon7, and thank you!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Dex!

The government will never learn!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Rosie2010, and thank you sweetie!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, MartieCoetser, and thanks for the visit!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, Nan!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Cardisa, and it was a man-eating bull!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Lynn S. Murphy, and thank you!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Amanda Storm, and thanks for reading me!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, pedrn44!

Happy to amuse!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Debby Bruck! Happy to make you smile!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, James A Watkins!

Thank you for your great comments, my friend!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Susieq42, and I can picture that bull!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, VendettaVixen, and I appreciate it!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, always exploring, and cheers to you!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Phyllis Doyle, and thank you!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, b. Malin,

Sometimes authority doesn't mean much.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, FitnezzJim, and that ain't no bull!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Well, thank you, Twilight Lawns!

What a nice thing to say!


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Hyphenbird 5 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

I love it! And I love your talent. Perfect ending WillStarr.


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drbj 5 years ago from south Florida

The denouement at the end, Will, is so good for a moment I thought I had written it. Heh, heh.


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G-Ma Johnson 5 years ago from NW in the land of the Free

Sounds familiar...like a joke I heard long ago...Great story tho...:O) Hugs G-Ma Wish it was that easy today....


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resspenser 5 years ago from South Carolina

"I'm from the government and I'm here to help ya!" Sure.

Great hub, voted up!


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia

Hey there Mr. Will. Another great classic my friend. I bet that will teach him! Voted up, interesting, and funny.


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Admiral_Joraxx 5 years ago from Philippines

Haha! When you take on a business, it will take everyone involved, including an angry bull who cannot read a card! Too bad, hehe! when you are at the wrong place at the wrong time. Disaster happens. Great post Will Starr! Voted up and funny.=)


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Genna East 5 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

Lol! This is great.

“The old man removed the pipe from his mouth and spat into the dust, landing just in front of the stranger’s boots.”

I can just picture this along with so many moments in this wonderful story. Loved it! Voted up and much more.


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Just Ask Susan 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

This was great! LOL.

Every five years or so our home owners insurance company insists on doing a walk through our house. All they ever do is up the insurance after the walk through. Next time they come through I think I'll let them deal with my 2 dogs rather than putting the dogs outside :)


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Storytellersrus 5 years ago from Stepping past clutter

Nailed it.


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homesteadbound 5 years ago from Texas

That was really a good one! Great read!


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attemptedhumour 5 years ago from Australia

A load of old bull is normally frowned upon, but not in this case. I loved how you set the scene with the old rancher lighting his pipe. It created such a vivid picture, something that you are a master at. Cheers Will.


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marcoujor 5 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

My face hurts from smiling so hard. You are a mental umbrella on this snowy day in PA...!

Voted UP & FAB-- have a great weekend, mar.


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Pamela99 5 years ago from United States

Wonderfully, funny short story. I love the ending.


SilverGenes 5 years ago

I didn't see the end coming and it put a big smile on my face when it arrived! Well done!


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teamrn 5 years ago from Chicago

Will, GREAT STORY, and THAT'S NO BULL!!


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suziecat7 5 years ago from Asheville, NC

Ha! Thanks for the chuckle - loved it!


Sueswan 5 years ago

Love it!!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Hyphenbird!

Thanks for reading.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, drbj!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, G-Ma Johnson, and thank you!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Ronnie! How about another great cop story?


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, thelyricwriter, and thank you!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, Admiral_Joraxx!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Genna East!

Good to see you.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Just Ask Susan,

Maybe you should hire a bull?


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, Barb.

I'm sorry to hear about your mom.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, homesteadbound!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, attemptedhumour!

I'm taking a shot at your world!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, marcoujor!

Hope you're doing well with all that early snow!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Pamela99, and thanks for laughing!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, SilverGenes!

Happy to make you smile!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, teamrn! I knew you'd like it!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, suziecat7! You just wrote a winner!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Sueswan, and thank you!


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ThoughtSandwiches 5 years ago from Reno, Nevada

Hi Will...

Thanks for the smiles on this one! The sad reality of branding irons needing to be labeled as 'hot' is just...sad. And that is what makes it so funny here! Because it's true...

Thanks,

Thomas


Sunnie Day 5 years ago

Go Longhorns! Great and wonderful story Will..and that is no bull..

Love,

Sunnie


ThomasRydder 5 years ago

Bertram Bartholomew? OMG, I can still see the Oxfords, flood pants, and skinny tie. TOO good, Will...you grab your audience with the first paragraph, and then shake'm like a rag doll...:)TR


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, ThoughtSandwiches,

McDonald's was successfully sued because their coffee was not labeled 'hot'!

OSHA demands such labeling.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Sunnie Day, and thanks for the great comment!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, ThomasRydder, and thanks for reading me!


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Zac828 5 years ago from England

Brilliant! Voted up.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, Zac828!


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WD Curry 111 5 years ago from Space Coast

Are you sure this wasn't a story about Old Man Platt in Fellsmere? They have longhorns on that ranch.

No . . . it was a gator that got after that Yankee.


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MizBejabbers 5 years ago

Just voted you up, Will. Love that western humor!


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

Hi Will,

Wow I had to go through what must have been comments from most of the population of HP before getting here.

Easy to see why so many loved this one.

A great beginning which made me feel I was there as well and then the oh so clever final twist ;amazing !!!

Take care and have a great day.

Eiddwen.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, WD Curry 111!

Could be!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, MizBejabbers!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, Eiddwen!


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feenix 5 years ago

Hey, Will,

One thing about bulls is that they don't stand for no bull shit.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

I agree, feenix!


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bethperry 5 years ago from Tennesee

ROFLOL! Will, I dearly love this one!!


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Clairepeek 5 years ago

Dear Will,

Ahahah! Tremendous... "show him your card", loved it. Your pencil is sharp ^_^


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Clairepeek, and thank you!


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weestro 5 years ago from Virginia

Loved it, like an Atlas Shrugged western! Voted up across board!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Ayn Rand has nothing on me!

^_^


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Sunshine625 2 years ago from Orlando, FL

LOL! Those cards come in handy, most of the time! :)


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WillStarr 2 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, Linda!


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suziecat7 2 years ago from Asheville, NC

Good one - thanks for the smiles.


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WillStarr 2 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, Suzie, for reading!

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