Halloween Short Story: Be My Valentine

Alicia

She noticed him first when she wandered down the Library aisle looking for “The Lord of the Flies”. As she worked her way down G section, her fingers tracing down the dusty spines of the books she had a funny sensation on her nape and she turned around. He was sitting at the far end of the oblong table looking at her. She quickly turned back and continued searching for the book. Her heart missed a beat. She felt her skin going clammy and hot. Stop it Alicia. Stop being nervous and fidgety and shy.

She couldn’t help it. She knew her hair wasn’t done well today and she hated its mousy color anyway.Mom wouldn't let her use highlights or go to the salon.

She wished she wasn’t wearing this dowdy coat her mom had made her wear. It’s freezing out there girl. We don’t want you catching pneumonia.

Who’s we mom? She wanted to ask. It’s just you.

She found the William Golding and picked up the book. She half turned around once more. The cheek! He was still looking at her. He didn’t lower his head or turn it away like they do when you catch them staring. He smiled. She felt herself blush. Warm hands travelled up her neck and caressed her cheek. She was deathly pale and she knew one could spot her blushing from miles away. She walked quickly back to the Librarians counter without giving a second glance at the table. Sweat was breaking out on her top lip. She wiped it hastily and checked the book out.

It’s not often men looked at her. She knew she was dull and inconspicuous. Her clothes were terribly out of date, skirts too long and tops too frilly. She had no friends because she knew secretly they all made fun of her. She heard someone in her class referring to her as the little gray mouse once. She went home and cried. Her Mom and come into the bedroom and shouted at her. What’s up with you silly girl? Is it a man? I told you they are up to no good. They only want you for one thing Alicia and you know what that is.

Mom

She wished her mom wouldn’t barge in like that. There’s no privacy in her house. No room for herself. No place to put posters up or hide a book mom wouldn’t approve of. She knew her mom went through her things when she was at College. She often noticed things tidied up. Books stacked and her panties taken away to be washed. She had to wear those horrible granny ones which were thick and big and looked like they were made in the 19th century. She couldn’t wear proper bras. Her mom made her clothes. They were tight and squashed her breasts painfully. She saw some of the girls in the class not even wearing bras. She would often blush looking at their nipples pointing through their flimsy tops and she knew boys liked that. Her mom would never let her wear proper bras. She told they were sinful, attract men to look at your breast as if they were on display. That’s what leads to trouble and temptation.

She went home and went up to her room quietly. Her mind kept wandering back to him. He had a nice smile. He didn’t look too attractive. That was alright because she wasn’t either. He had close-cropped hair and a pale face. His glasses were thick but not too thick. He had nice smile, she remembered. His teeth weren’t straight but that was kind of cute. She giggled. Something she doesn’t do very often. She had a funny feeling around her belly button. She imagined sitting across from him and talking. Maybe he would ask her out. She hasn’t had a proper boyfriend but she had an imaginary one. The Prince. She had read a dirty fantasy by Ann Rice once. She had sneaked the book in from the Library. It was a bit too much. Not at all romantic. But they did get up to some serious sex. She had imagined the Prince making love to her. She lay there and her hands had crept down to her front. She had a curious, wet sensation and it felt good. She had opened her eyes to see her mom looking at her through the crack of the door and she almost fainted. She looked at the thin scar on her palm where mom had burnt her hand.

Never do that girl. Never give in to horrible thoughts. That’s how I got into trouble and I don’t want you to do the same. You don’t want a bastard child.

She shivered silently.

Jack and Alicia

She saw him again the week after and she determined herself to be bolder. She picked up JD Salinger and sat on the same table as him. Maybe he’ll be impressed at her literary taste. He could feel him looking at her and there was nobody else in that room. She looked up, feeling herself blush. He smiled again. She smiled back. He waved a hand at her and mouthed a Hello. She felt her heart palpitating.

She bent her head down and started reading. Half of her wanted him to walk up to her and have a hushed conversation. The other half didn’t. She knew she wasn’t ready. She’d probably stammer and sweat. That wouldn’t be a good start.

To her disappointment/ relief he didn’t come to her. She saw him get up and walk away. He had faded jeans and a threadbare wool jumper. He looked cute from behind too. She smiled secretly and sneaked a look at his tight bottom.

The only free time in the house is when mom goes to the church in the evening. She cleans the pulpits and sweeps the floor. Alicia lay on her bed reading and dreaming of her Prince. It will be nice if he would rescue her from this prison. For the first time the Prince had a face. Close cropped hair and glasses. She giggled. He beckoned her from his horse. As she ran towards him he bent down and swept her off the ground. Strong hands gripped her and placed her on the horse. She sat coyly, arms draped around his shoulders. He rode the horse and she bounced gently against him feeling his strong chest on hers. Alicia fell asleep with a smile on her face.

He wasn’t there the next time she went to the Library and she sat hunched over her book, nervously twisting her hair in her index finger. She was so immersed in the book she didn’t notice him behind her and almost jumped out of her skin when he bent and whispered in her ear. Hello.

She jerked her head up and found his face so close she could see the acne scars. His glasses misted from her breath and he removed them and wiped them with his sleeves. She sat there looking at his puppy eyes and her heart beating wildly.

Can we talk outside?

She nodded dumbly and gathered her books. It was cool outside and she walked hugging her books to her chest. She felt comfortable with him. Not as nervous as she thought she would be. They exchanged names. He was Jack. He talked mostly, in a soothing tone as if he understood her shyness. She nodded and listened. He was a medical student. His parents lived in another town. He lived alone in a converted warehouse he had modified. She should come around sometimes. He had hundreds of old books she would like. It was nice talking to him. She didn’t feel odd. She wasn’t sweating which was a relief. Can he have her phone number? She shook her head violently.

It’s my mom. She wouldn’t like it at all. In fact she’ll go berserk if she knew I was talking to you.

He nodded as if he understood. Maybe they can meet in the Library again.

Next week perhaps. Have a coffee somewhere.

That would be nice, she heard herself say.

You’re being brave, girl. She heard her mom’s voice inside. Brave and stupid. It will only lead to misery. People will laugh at you. They'll laugh and spit on your face. You’re nothing but a slut. A whore. She felt her spine tingle.

Get away from me, mom. Leave me alone.

Alicia and Jack

They met again and a few more times. She couldn’t believe she was capable of such clandestine meetings. She felt good. She spent longer in front of the mirror. He didn’t mind her dowdy clothes or her nervousness.

It’s understandable, he said. You don’t belong there in your house. You need liberating. I’ll take care of you.

She held his hand for the first time when he said that. His grip was warm and dry. Comforting. She walked closer to him, rubbing shoulders. That night she dreamed that the Prince took her to his castle. Only it was a warehouse. He gently took her clothes off and kissed her from head to foot. Her breasts ached for his touch. He kissed her eyelids and whispered that he loved her. She felt him enter her and gasped. He made love gently, making her feel wanted.

She felt a splash of cold water in her face and woke up with a start.

You’re having dirty thoughts again girl. Her mom’s face was so close she felt her spit on her face. You’re groaning like a street whore. Get up and go into the shower. Cleanse yourself you dirty minx.

No, mom I don’t want a shower! she screamed. She felt her hair being grabbed and dragged violently into the cold shower. Warm tears mixed with freezing water droplets running down her cheeks.

She told him everything the next time. She cried like a baby. He held her close as she wept against him.

Look, he said. I’ve got something for you. She took the envelope and opened it. Her vision was blurred and she saw it was a Valentine’s card. She smiled and cried some more.

It's October, silly. Its not Valentine's day for another few months.

Its Halloween this weekend. It could be our Valentine's day. I want you to come to my place. You never have to go back to your mom again.

She was scared and happy at the same time. Her Prince has come to liberate her.

She was in a daze all week. She felt feverish and didn’t have the courage to look at her mom. She might find out. She might look at her face and know what she is planning. She hid the Card under the floorboards. It had his address and directions. It also said how much he loved her. She held it in her arms at nights, rocking gently.

Mom and Alicia

On October 31st it was snowing outside. She quietly stuffed a few clothes in her bag and hid it under her bed. She ate breakfast with mom who kept asking her if she was ill.

You look deathly pale, girl. You look like a corpse dragged out. Hope you aren’t having dirty dreams again. You should come to the church with me this evening. Pray to God to cleanse your sins.

Alicia bit her lower lip till it bled.

She felt something building inside like a volcano about to erupt.

I don’t have to listen to you anymore she screamed. I am going away and will never come back.

What are you talking you slut. Don’t ever think you’re leaving me.

Oh I am, you monster. She exploded. Her mom reached across the table and grabbed her arm. Alicia felt her face go numb as her mom hit her and her eyelid puffed up. She felt her hair being grabbed, pain expanding in her scalp. Her back scraped on the floor as she got dragged to her room. She felt a foot in her ribs and fainted as red-hot lightning struck her chest.

When she woke up it was dark. She stood up groggily and the house was silent. She ran to the door and saw it was locked from the outside. She screamed. She turned at looked under the bed. Her bag was gone. His card was gone. She felt blind panic and dashed to window. It was still snowing. She looked down and knew she could jump out, it wasn’t that far a drop.

Alicia, Jack and Mom

She ran in the deserted street. His house wasn’t far. She knew the directions by heart. Her mom must be in church. She reached the warehouse and climbed up the stairs. She was shaking uncontrollably as she knocked on his door. It was open. As she stepped in he was coming towards her.

Jack !

She screamed and clung to him.

It’s all right now. He said gently. You’re here and it will be fine.

He kissed her puffed eyelids and bathed her face with cold water. He took her to a long table and sat her down.

I was coming to get you because you were running late. He said. I was beginning to get worried.

There were candles on the table. And plates laid out. A bottle of wine was opened and ready.

I made you a meal my love.

She laughed and her chin hurt.

I love you Jack. I love you my Prince Valentine. My Halloween Valentine.

He served her steak and salad. She drank wine for the first time and felt tipsy. She felt her fear vanish and her blood warm up. She wanted him to hold her. To make love to her. He looked at her adoringly.

I’ve got a present for you, he whispered to her.

Oh no I haven’t got you anything. she said.

That doesn’t matter, sweetheart. You’re here with me. That’s the greatest present I could have.

He went to the corner and brought a big cardboard box. Wrapped in a red ribbon. There was a long stemmed rose on the top. She took it and smelled its heady scent.

You shouldn’t have, Jack.

Open it. I know you’ll like it.

She untied the ribbon with trembling hands and unwrapped the gift paper. She opened the box and looked inside. The light was dim from the candles. She put her hands inside and felt about. It was warm and sticky and she could trace the contours of a face. She could feel the eyes staring out in surprise.

Oh by the way, he said, twin candles reflected on his glasses. Your mom came to see me earlier.

THE END

© 2012 Mohan Kumar

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Comments 42 comments

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Thelma Alberts 4 years ago from Germany

Wow! I´m the first to comment. It´s awesome again Docmo. I like the story very much and I never thought that it will have a bad ending. I mean for Alicias mother. It´s really a Halloween story. Thumbs up and thanks for sharing.


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Becky Katz 4 years ago from Hereford, AZ

This is a chiller Docmo. Very well written and a surprise at the end. Hahaha


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

Well that raised the hairs on the back of my neck! Great ending. Worthy of a Twilight Zone episode my friend. Well done!


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jonmcclusk 4 years ago from Cinnaminson, New Jersey

Excellent, I couldn't anticipate the ending until, well, the end of the story! Great read by a great writer.


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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

Mohan - This, my friend, is an excellent story of love and victory, only to be celebrated at Halloween. It held my attention all the way through. You are truly a gifted writer. I bow to your excellence! Great Job!


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

Docmo!!!! OMG, Mohan......You had to know that your readers were itching to get their hands on that evil mother's throat! Great, spooky Halloween story......Now, who is going to caution this poor abused girl that she has two questions to ponder.....Is lover boy a Romantic Hero who rescued her....or a crazed, cold-blooded killer of women?? "Happy Halloween Valentine's Day, baby".......perfect combo of Death and Love.........BOO!! TRICK? or TREAT?

You are a story-telling genius!! This needs to be a movie on Lifetime TV.......SUBMIT it!!


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Janine Huldie 4 years ago from New York, New York

Docmo, glad I waited to read this chilling story this morning and not right before bed last night. Awesome Halloween story and loved the ending!! Have of course voted up and shared all over as always!!


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drbj 4 years ago from south Florida

I hereby dub you, Mohan, 'Master of the Merciless Macabre.' And they lived happily together ever after? Of course, this is a Halloween fairy tale!

Bravo and an Up to you, m'dear. Loved every sinister second!


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Happy Halloween Mohan--Poe would be proud--really really well done!


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Rosemay50 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

This sent chills up my spine. Great ending


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Docmo 4 years ago from UK Author

@Thelma: Thanks for being here first- Like Hitchcock used to do I should've said do not reveal the ending in your comments! Because as we know sometimes people come to the hub after reading the comment...glad you enjoyed the story!

@Becky- glad you liked the little halloween twist. Thank you!

@Bill - thank you for your appreciation, Sir Bill.

@Jon- thanks to your October Halloween series, I thought I'll join in on the fun. appreciate your visit, bro.


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Docmo 4 years ago from UK Author

@Richard- thank you my friend for your visit and comment. Really glad you enjoyed this tale.

@ Paula: I wanted to leave it to the reader's imagination and glad it worked. thank you Paula.

@Janine : It was nice to be able to provide some Halloween chills, Stephen King style.

@drbj- thanks for the nice title. I shall wear it with pride.

@Audrey: I love Poe. I'm proud even to consider that this is in his vein. thank you!

@Rosemay: Glad you like this story. Much appreciated.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Oh, I loved your story. It was so romantic. I could visualize each character clearly, your ability to take the reader along the journey is amazing. The ending was a total surprise, In fact, shocking! Well done..Bravo


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Docmo 4 years ago from UK Author

@Ruby- Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed the romantic undertones in this twisted little tale.


lovedoctor926 4 years ago

I absolutely loved this story from beginning to end. Alicia's mother is so mean and made her feel so much shame and guilt. I do like the twist in this story as well. Thank God she ran away from the evil witch to be with her Prince valentine/ Halloween valentine. Voted up!


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Amy Becherer 4 years ago from St. Louis, MO

I started to wonder if Alicia's mother really even existed. I was beginning to think she was a figment of Alicia's vivid imagination. Very scary, Docmo, and I'm still wondering if the Prince is a vampire!


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

Great stories. Thank you for investing the time for our enjoyment.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

You scared the living daylights out of me and the sun is still shining. This should say don't read in the dark. Awesome, spooky, scary and utterly fantastic. Well done. I want more. You could give Stephen King a run for the money. Passing this on.


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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York

OMG! Here I was wrapped up in this romance, wondering if he was stringing her along for some 'other' reason but hoping he was really in love with her....how sweet for her and then MOTHER hit! I was so happy when she escaped, still crossing my fingers that things went well for her...he had a lovely dinner and candlelight and BAM the truly surprising ending! When I yelled "oh my God" Larry asked what was wrong...it just came out that loud!! Great story Mohan, great twists and turns. You are certainly a Master!

Voted all the way across except funny. Shared and pinned. I"m still shaking my head...here I was thinking this is the kind of love story....


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suzettenaples 4 years ago from Taos, NM

Wow! Great ending! I was completely surprised by the ending. Great Halloween story, that is for sure. You are quite a talented writer!


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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Ohhhhhhhhhh.... what a perfect Halloween tale, with the added twist of a Valentine. This is delightfully scary. Mom was a monster, Jack is a different kind of monster pehaps, but capable of macabre and horrrific acts himself. Great story docmo!


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Docmo 4 years ago from UK Author

@lovedoctor: Thank you so much for your comments. I'm really pleased this story was to your liking.

@Amy.. that would've been another twist wouldn't it.. Thanks very much for your visit.

@Mhatter: thanks for investing YOUR time reading my stuff...


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Docmo 4 years ago from UK Author

@GypsyRoseLee- Thank you so much, for your appreciation. I'm really pleased this worked.

@Mary- perfect! what more can I ask than such a great reaction to the story. you are my perfect reader and I love writing storis for you!

@suzettenaples: I'm really pleased you like this suzette- Thank you so much.

@xstatic: you had me at ohhh. Thank you very much for your visit.


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Daisy Mariposa 4 years ago from Orange County (Southern California)

Mohan (Docmo),

OMG! I read this story at 1:30 in the morning. I hope I can sleep tonight.

As I've told you more than once, as much as I enjoy reading your poetry, I love reading your short stories even more. This one is no exception, polymath. It's brilliant!!!


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midget38 4 years ago from Singapore

Wow. The ending got me there, this was brilliant. Thanks for sharing it, Docmo!! (Though I think I'd be wary of accepting presents from now on.) LOL! a great write! Sharing.


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marcoujor 4 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

Oh wow, I just wanted to head to your place ... Realizing this is no way to get ahead... And now I'm head over heels in love with this story!

Macabre, Mohan and just the right shade of spooky...UP and ABI.

Hugs, Maria


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Rfordin 4 years ago from Florida

Voted awesome and interesting I enjoyed reading your short story with a twist!

Thanks for sharing....

~Becky


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weestro 4 years ago from Virginia

Yikes, great ending to a great, well written story! Stay away from those library types! Voted up!


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Docmo 4 years ago from UK Author

@Daisy- glad the story gave you some chills- it's always hard to judge as the author what response one's gonna get. Pleased with your response- thank you!

@Michelle- thank you! Endings are hard to get right and I'm pleased this one works... Thanks for sharing too.

@Maria you cheeky thing. You are always ahead of the game with a head start ... Glad you liked this!

@Becky - thanks for dropping by- glad you enjoyed this!

@weestro: yep, them library types are the worst. ;-). Thanks for reading this.


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Nyamache 4 years ago from Kenya

I have gone through the story and it interesting. It kept me engaged throughout. Moms are always protecting their girls, "What’s up with you silly girl? Is it a man? I told you they are up to no good. They only want you for one thing Alicia and you know what that is."

I have voted it up.


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MartieCoetser 4 years ago from South Africa

Wow! What a horror!

Voted up, engrossing, horrifying, shocking - perfectly Halloween!


KDuBarry03 4 years ago

My reaction at the end was this: "oh God!" Thank you for satisfying my daily lust for gore! You enticed me through all the suspense and psychological horrors in Alecia's life and then gave a great twist to the antagonist's death, truly shocking and brilliant. Voted up and sharing this! Kept me engaged and wanting to read more.


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D.Juris Stetser 4 years ago from South Dakota

Mohan you've outdone yourself on this one. They should have an option for something like 'awesome X 1000! Wow! I totally love this....delicious irony....mom begged for it. and I couldn't stop after reading the first lines...I was hooked. Awesome, Beautiful, interesting, and Dotti adds, Magnificent!! Happy Halloween, and Sharing for sure!


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Stephanie Henkel 4 years ago from USA

Oooooohhhhh...very suspenseful, and a great Halloween story! The ending was not what I expected. Voted up and scary and shared with followers!


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Sunshine625 4 years ago from Orlando, FL

Happy Halloween, thank you Doc for the eerily entertaining story!


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bravewarrior 4 years ago from Central Florida

Mo, I know it's mean, but I laughed at the end! Shame on me, I know, but what comes around goes around.....

What a lovely love story! But I'll think twice the next time I tell my son 'no'!


Lesleysherwood 3 years ago

I was completely glued until the end and definitely was not expecting that twist. I really enjoyed it. Voted UP


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Annemari 3 years ago from Tiny part of the World

Nice little piec of work!!!


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Daisy Mariposa 3 years ago from Orange County (Southern California)

Mohan,

I came back to read this very creepy, well-written story again. I'm going to post a link to it in the piece I'm writing about Halloween for one of my blogs.


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Nell Rose 3 years ago from England

Hi Mohan, Ooh, she deserved it! lol! what a great story! loved it, happy Halloween!


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Daisy Mariposa 2 years ago from Orange County (Southern California)

Mohan,

It's a few days before Halloween. I'm sharing your scary short story once again. It's terrific!


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Daisy Mariposa 14 months ago from Orange County (Southern California)

Mohan,

It's been nearly a year since I shared your scary short story.

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