Silent Sea (poem)

Oh silent sea I feel your endless waves

They’re earning ever turning at my shore

With promises my soul can scarce ignore

What do you bode which once was me now craves

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A pathway to the lost and evermore

Is this the treasure hidden in your graves

The Joyous dancing fond among love’s slaves

Confused enticement leads me to explore

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Oh silent sea what music do you mourn

Which causes you to search this sand of time

Do teardrops pierce the depth of mystery

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Oh silent sea can losses be reborn

Some rift between the meaning of life’s rhyme

Where music and lost lover wait for me

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DanaTeresa 3 years ago from Ohio

Beautiful. I feel the depths and mystery of the sea in your words.


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Moms-Secret 3 years ago from Central Florida

Very beautiful indeed. The sea and I have a long history. Possibly similar. Love the violin piece you paired with it!


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Strong emotions of the sea so well wriiten


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

The sea also fascinate and inspires me. This is beautiful, evokative with a touch of sorrowful yearning. I loved it.


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida

Mhatter99..The mysteries of the sea are so deep and secretive..yet the waves crash against the shore removing all debris and all is clear again..

Such is our minds as we write our thoughts..very poignant..loved it..


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

Your words are beautiful. I am very drawn to the se. When I walk along the shore, I feel great emotion which is exactly what this poem did for me. Voted up and beautiful.


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

A beautiful story...


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

Please pardon my typo. I meant to say I was very drawn to the sea.


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Minnetonka Twin 3 years ago from Minnesota

The sea does bring up much mystery and emotion. Your words capture that.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Oh silent sea can losses be reborn

Some rift between the meaning of life’s rhyme

Where music and lost lover wait for me

Powerful yet beautiful !!

Eddy.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Definitely mysteriousness moves the waves here. Great work, Martin.


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Beautiful and compelling. Can losses ever be reborn?

Great Job, Martin.

DJ.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Poetically and sentimentally wonderful.


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thost 3 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

A very nice poem Martin, thank you.


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stars439 3 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

You're writing is beyond the stars, and you're words are the medium of you're art. God Bless You.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Beautiful and mysterious!

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