Silent Surrender (tanka)

Silent surrender

Kisses of another day

Racing through my soul

With each heartbeat yet unheard

Calling me once more to you


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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

How I know this feeling. Beautiful and not surprisingly so as you have such a wondrous way of painting such passionate feelings. Angels are on the way this morning. ps


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kidscrafts 3 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

Very beautiful! Thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry!


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Very beautiful ... I love your "Silent Surrender" tanka. It is good to surrender and sometimes maybe not even silently. : )

Voted up +++ and sharing

Hugs and love,

Faith Reaper


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kashmir56 3 years ago from Massachusetts

Very beautiful tanka thanks for sharing this !


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Another beauty, Martin. Your passion and way with words are truly a gift. Thank you for sharing your gifts so freely with us.


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Nellieanna 3 years ago from TEXAS

Perfect, Martin: the poetry, the emotion expressed. Just beautiful!


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

SEX-Y!!

i love your passion my friend.

Your pix are always perfect - any idea where i can find a 'free' uncopyrighted pic??

thanks M..

sharingxx


lovedoctor926 3 years ago

Beautiful poetry so full of deep, strong emotions


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Laurinzo Scott 3 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

MMMMM.... very nice... so few words; but such strong meaning and beautifully expressed... I am pinning it to my Beautiful poetry page...


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

I love this and the picture is beautiful...


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

I'll never be able to fully comprehend how it is you can say so much in such few words! In awe, always.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Only one words needed here:- Beautiful.

Eddy.


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Memorable and beautiful.


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Very romantic.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

This should have been in Godspell. Remember Day by Day? It gives me the same sort of feeling.

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