Silken Road (poem)

She

Came

Near

Me

-

And we

This flame

Appear

To see

-

We wouldn’t be

Ever the same

As flames would sear

Our destiny

-

As kisses flowed from well so free

And passions held no hope to tame

A mist would shroud we held dear

And saved our hearts no place to flee

-

Oh silken road to fantasy

Such dreams to claim

No fears no shame

No fee

-

Let all tomorrows start from here

Each memory

Each melody

Each tier

-

Yet calls the sea

And sleep’s to blame

To why we veer

Complacently

-

Truly

A frame

So clear

Are we

-

She

Came

Near

Me


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Rosemay50 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

Love this poem and the music set the tone perfectly


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christin53 4 years ago from UK

I love this poem especially the line "Oh silken road to fantasy".


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phoenix2327 4 years ago from United Kingdom

Beautiful. Like fire, love changes you.


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LABrashear 4 years ago from My Perfect Place, USA

I don't want to be redundant with the other comments, but this is beautiful. "Let all tomorrows start from here - Each memory - Each melody - Each tier"...my favorite part. Voted up!


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Another beautiful breathtaking poem from you. You did well with this, as always.

Thanks


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

I like the music, the poem was beautiful and you really create some amazing poems quickly.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Wow, The video, the pink sheets your words, very beautiful..You have a gift...


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Loved the flow of the poem and the video was great.


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Very, very nice.


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DFiduccia 4 years ago from Las Vegas

Beautiful music and poem. Your ability to say so much in so few words is amazing.

voted up—DF


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leigh anns page 4 years ago from New Jersey

Nice writing....Beautiful and passionate.


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moonlake 4 years ago from America

Very beautiful. Loved it. Voted up and Shared.


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA

Very nice. Voted beautiful, interesting, and up. Well done!


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SweetiePie 4 years ago from Southern California, USA

Very good poetry!


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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

I sense to have seen the beauty of the silken road which you have described with utter poetic brilliance


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

mmmmmm...lovely...


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Angelme566 4 years ago

I find this very romantic ! Love this line- Oh silken road to fantasy

Such dreams to claim

No fears no shame

No fee


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

M, very sensuous. Voted up and beautiful.


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

So beautiful, romantic and yummy!!

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