Smash It To Pieces (Stop the Flow) Poem

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This is a poem from my teenage years as well like many of my others. An experimental piece it it quite cloudy at many parts. At the time I was very much at a place where I wanted people to find their own meaning in it. My poetry was always open to interpretation. For me it was a journey of seeing things from many angles and putting it to paper. I enjoyed the mystery and always found much to inspire me at the time. Anyway, hope you like it.


Black to white, and white to black

Colours, actions, take me back

Laugh to smile, cry and weep

Enter into, forever sleep

Present now, and days of old

I feel you now your so cold

Wish that you were truly mine

Thinking pulls me back in time


Recognize the face in glass

You can never change the past

Sands of time through the hourglass go

Smash it to pieces, stop the flow


Light to dark and dark to light

Which are you and which am I

See the sun, see it dawning

Soon again, it is spawning

Streaks of yellow flood the sky

Deadly danger watch your eyes

Final gravity, conquers all

You have no right to me at all


Recognize the face in glass

You can never change the past

Sands of time through the hourglass go

Smash it to pieces, stop the flow


Death to life, and life to death

Turning, slowly, with the rest

With you shackled to my heart

Crying, knowing, ripped apart

Won't they let you I'm not around

Quieting now I hear them sound

How much difference did I make

You want me now but it's too late


Recognize the face in glass

You can never change the past

Sands of time through the hourglass go

Smash it to pieces, stop the flow


Smash it to pieces, stop the flow...

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teaches12345 4 years ago

I had to vote this one up! It's a really good poem and has a great message on relationships. Got to be careful on what you say and do -- sometimes you can't undo the past.


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Great poem, don't change a thing in it. Voted up and awesome, Joyce.


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terrektwo 4 years ago from North America Author

teaches12345 - you are very wise :) thank you for commenting on my poem and for the vote up!


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MelChi 4 years ago from Cape Town, South Africa

This is a beautiful poem, very well written.


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cherylone 4 years ago from Connecticut

I liked this one, not only did it have a good message, it flowed really nicely. Great job!


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Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

Not only is this a good poem, it also has a truth about it. Yes we wish we could change what we have done, but we cannot. Voted up.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. Teen years go by much too fast and leave such great memories. Love these words

Recognize the face in glass

You can never change the past

Sands of time through the hourglass go

Smash it to pieces, stop the flow. Passing this on.


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terrektwo 4 years ago from North America Author

writer20 - Thanks, really reminds me of the past.


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terrektwo 4 years ago from North America Author

MelChi - did my best for the time :)


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terrektwo 4 years ago from North America Author

cherylone - glad you liked my teenage poem, it really is a big remembrance for me :)


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terrektwo 4 years ago from North America Author

Michele Travis - very true, the past is always solid something we can't go back and change.


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terrektwo 4 years ago from North America Author

Gypsy Rose Lee - thanks for reading it, glad you enjoyed it and thanks for passing it on :)


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

You were mature beyond your years, obviously! AND - you were willing to learn. I'm so impressed that you were able to convey your feelings like this at such a young age!


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terrektwo 4 years ago from North America Author

ImKarn23 - yes, those were my thoughts and feelings from my youth.


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Drtruthman 4 years ago from Harlingen, Texas

This is a very good, interesting, beautiful and well thought poem; as well as great construction. In fact my hat is off to you for writing this as a teen. An obvious preview of the talent to come. Great job. I enjoyed much. Voted UP all across. Lee


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terrektwo 4 years ago from North America Author

Drtruthman - I thank you for saying so, I do what I can an have always enjoyed writing in many forms. Thanks for the votes up as well I sppreciate it greatly :)


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

great poem, and nice play of words...


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terrektwo 4 years ago from North America Author

raciniwa - thank you did my best, glad you liked my poem, more to come from the vaults soon :)


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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Good poem here. Reading it, I hear a kind of hip-hop rythm to it, certinly a musical sound anyway. I hope you publish more.


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terrektwo 4 years ago from North America Author

xstatic, thanks for reading, more to come soon :)

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