Smother Me

Source


I ask your lips to marry mine

Be with me all the time


You

look

at

me

our souls

already

entwined


The way you moved last night

I

cant

forget

fire of current

raging

all

my

veins


My hands

itch

to

rip off

your

clothes


but


you’re

bare

already

out

of

lingerie


I ask your lips to marry mine

Be with me all the time


Undeniably

you

are

the one

for

me


Your soft voice

humming in my ears

like

a

rolling

thunder

chasing

the

sexy

wind


I

can’t move

babe,


I

can’t move


Smother me


I

want

to

taste

your salty lips...


Brown colored iris

your

heart

belongs

to me


Fingertips explore

my

secret

sea

I

moan

your

name…


softly

like

the mad

wave

kissing

back the

C

Source


© Copyright 2012 by Fehl Dungo

To my Sexy Otter, Cathy Nerujen

^_^

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writer20 profile image

writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Wow! I hope you've cool down. Great alive poem. Loved it.

Voted up and beautiful.


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pbwriterchick 4 years ago

Awesome write, Blaise! Very sexy and the longing intense! Loved it :)


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful! I loved the letter C for the word sea. Awesome..Thank you..Cheers


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Cre8tor 4 years ago from Ohio

Very intense. Great photos too. Did I say intense? They don't have a "I need a cold shower" button so, guess I'll go with awesome.


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echoe0021 4 years ago from Conway, AR

Wow, that was awesome. As previously stated, it was intense.


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Samantha;] 4 years ago from Oregon

Loved it!


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Alastar Packer 4 years ago from North Carolina

Sexy Otter will be a happy otter,and thus a happy blaise.


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Hello Writer20. Thank you for being the first here :) hahaha I think I’ve just started lol I’m glad you guys loved it. Thanks for the votes too. You rock.

Hi there Pb! I am waiting for your next poem..I miss your words but I’m so happy to see you here. :) Thank you.

Hi Ruby :) Oh you are beautiful. I kinda changed the C thing to draw more meanings..and yes it rhymes and they match :) Always glad to see you. Cheers! Thank you.

Cre8tor wow yeah the photos were hard to find but worth it :) Oh yeah you said intense twice and I believe that so much lol Thank you.

Hi echoe0021 wow you’re a double 00. Thank you for the awesome comment.

I’m so happy you loved it Samantha. Nice to meet you here. :)

Hello Alastar. Sexy otter is surfing into the blue right now and will be surprised to find this. :) Happy you dropped by and read my new hub. Thank you.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Hy baby.... Sexy Otter swims up to you and swims with you... hehehe... This is the most beautiful and candid poem you ever wrote... and yes now I really am floating... LOL. Oh Fehl, what a beautiful Hub Page. Brimming with love and sexy images. Mwaaaaaaaaahh. Yes, I want to smother you in kisses. Okay I am saying that here, please don't faint. :P

Even the humming... oh Fehl, this is just so beautiful. Thank you for this gorgeous poem....

I love you so much. :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Hi babe.. I love it when you float like that..LOL Oh thank you for loving this. *kisses you back* Oh I wont faint. I am an otter..your Otter :) I love you lots :)


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Mmmhhh.... oh wow... the telepathy is so strong here in this... I just melt when I am with you, baby... *Kisses your nose* Hehehe... :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Mmmmmmhh...either you melt or roll like an ice cube, I'd take you in.. *pinches your nose* :)


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Hehehe... ice cubes... oh straight out of my head you pluck these thoughts... I wonder how you are doing that, honey? Remember the other place I melted it? LOL (Hint, it was not your nose...)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

How am I doing that? I just know what's on your mind when I logged in to your 2 strong wifi routers.. LOL No no it wasn't on my nose... ^_^


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

H'mm... you are magic... and that wifi signal is so strong... hehehe... routers... LOL. Oh Fehl, that is so funny. :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

yeah LOL Oh I'm so hungry. I'm craving for cheesecake and muffins. Wanna go eat with me, Sweety? :)


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Um... yes, sounds tasty, Fehl.... lets go.... :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Treat me for coffee :)


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Yes, my treat in appreciation for your poetic endeavors and delectation. :) I know a certain Mocha Latte ...


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A.A. Zavala 4 years ago from Texas

I love these moments, very electric and addictive.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

Ooh so completely sexy - oh what a treat! Awesome in every way - what a treat!!!


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Cheeky Girl 4 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

This is awesomely sexy to the very last drop like a cool milkshake! LOL! Dang! Fehl, you are amazing - I think this is the best you have written so far! "Kissing back the C" has several possible connotations to moi ears! :D Fehl, you are very inspired! Passion bursts out of every word! I think Miss Mocha Latte will be putting an extra few sugars in her coffee today! XOX

And I love the Otter bit too! :)


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Funny, I am having coffee right now... :)


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nighthag 4 years ago from Australia

A beautiful sensual poem that sizzles off the screen,

A fantastic read that heats the blood with each passing word.


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Hi Cathy. Wow, thank you for the coffee treat. Hmm I know a certain Mocha Latte too.. :) hmm I remember the last time I had it. A volcano suddenly erupted..

Hello Augustine. Oh you are one romantic man. I know you love those moments. Your hubs are so electric. :) Thank you for reading.

Hi Acaetnna. Girl you are so in love. Thank you for visiting. :)

Hi there Curly Cassy. Wow, to the very last drop of a yummy milkshake. I guess you want another one? Hehehe Thank you Curly. You are so amazing. Yeah the “kissing back the C” is my favorite part here actually. It expresses a lot of meanings. I need more rounds of milkshake to spill it LOL Miss Mocha Latte inspire me so much. She is my hubs. :) XOXO

Take care of my Otter :)

Hi again, baby. Coffee right now? Please don’t put too much sugar ok. :) Mwaaaah!

Hello Nighthag. You always say the most beautiful comments. I’m glad you felt that way. Thank you so much.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven

This was so amazing Blaise. Love the words, love the pics, love how you wrote it line by line. Awesome and so passionate.


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lionel1 4 years ago

I'm a long time watcher of your posts, and one good and beautiful day I'm going to express my true feelings and appreciation of your amazing Hub posts.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Oh wow, that volcano...um... hehehe. :)

Only sugar I want is right here. You are so sweet. :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you Caroline :) It just flows along... :)

Hello Lionel. Yes I know you're one of my usual visitors who really read my hubs and I'm so thankful for that. :) I guess if I wont find you to any of my new hubs, I would be worried coz Blaise has grown to your presence :) Thank you so much.

Hi, Cathy. :) Volcano is silent now..I know if I crossed that curve line again..I um..could wake it up.. hehehe :)

I will be your sugar and cream ;) Mwaaaahhh..


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Nikkij504gurl 4 years ago from Louisiana

Beautiful, sexy, chilling poem. A couple lines I believe were from a song, and you kind of made them your own. Changed em around, added words.."Like a rolling thunder chasing...the wind." Really good song too by the way. Loved this poem :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Hello Nikki :) I wasn't thinking any song except someone's hum LOL If I explained the rolling thunder part, you'd go crazy LOL Thank you. Always glad when you visit. :)


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Nikkij504gurl 4 years ago from Louisiana

This is a link to the song here.. Lightning Crashes by Live http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xsJ4O-nSveg&ob=av3e

Great song. Haha and I can only imagine what you mean by the rolling thunder part. ;)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Damn that song gave me goosebumps thank you for sharing. I loved it. It's so powerful. My rolling thunder was a mix feeling of climax, love and longing. Do you remember that baseball scene from Twilight? Supermassive Blackhole was playing and the ball strikes when thunder rolls chasing the wind. I was feeling like that but more wild and electric


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Nikkij504gurl 4 years ago from Louisiana

Nice! Glad you liked it. and that must have been one amazing feeling..Hmm...Orgasmic, out of this world.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Snap. :) I loved that song too. That was intense and I felt every vibe. Waking that volcano can be so nice.... :)

Okay I better not say too much. Hehehe.... :)

Oh wow that rolling thunder... *Puts a gag over my mouth to shut myself up* LOL. :)


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Nikkij504gurl 4 years ago from Louisiana

haha astra you are Bad! lol


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Yes Nikki it is the most amazing feeling in the world. hehe

Oh Cathy we are so bad, babe. Should we not talk about Volcano here? heheheh Mwaaaaahhh. Thunder, volcano, lightning.. oh wow, save me for a lava cream will you? :p


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Yes Nikki I am so spankable for saying that. LOL. The volcano thing we keep the lid on it. Heh. Oh Fehl, we are so funny. Lava ice cream.... mmmhhhh... sounds very nice... ;) You are so teasing now. :P


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

you are spankable even if you wont say anything lol Hmmm what would you do if I'm so teasing now? :p


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Hehehe.... I better not say here... LOL. If you tease me more, I will have to um.... *whispers in your ear*


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

smother me...


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Exactly..... but in a very nice romantic way.... :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

^_^ mwaaaaaahhh.... :)


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

You are telepathic, Fehl... Mwaaaaaaaaaahhh. ^_^


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

you are Astranomical ^_^ mwaaaaaaaaaahhhhh...


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Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

Oh you two are unbelievable. Such intense mutual love. Beautiful poem, though I must admit I also got lost in the comments. Whew!


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Oops. :) Dim, you are correct. We should get a room. LOL.


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

^_^

---- /--- (@

mwaaah


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Mwaaah. I love the flower. :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

mwaaaah. I love you :)


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Oh Fehl... I love you too. :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

^_^ *kisses your soft sexy lips*


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I'm glad you love the new romantic poem on my Hubs I wrote for you....

Oh wow.... I want to melt now.... :) ^,^


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Anything that is YOU, I love it... Mwaaaaahhh.. ^,^


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Sharyn's Slant 4 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

Well that was awesome entertainment! Not just the beautiful poetry, but the comment thread as well. Really great Fehl, I especially loved the ending as well.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Wish you could see your score now baby, it's "69". LOL ;)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Oh wow, I am so red now.. I'm glad you loved the poetry and um the comments :D Thank you Sharyn :) xx

OMG even my score is going in that direction.. LOL You have that magnet, baby. :)


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

So have you, Fehl. You are a traffic magnet and you magnetized even me.... :) XOXOX


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

I only want you... :) xoxoxoxo


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

You have me now. :) xoxoxoxoxoxox I love you Fehl :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

mmmmmmmhhhhh.. I love you, too :)

Why is my score 69 again? LOL


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I will whisper it to you.... gently...over breakfast.... Hehehe... XOXOX :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

mmmmmmhhhh..... when you whisper something to me, I...

xoxoxo :)


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Hehehe.... you told me today... I know, Fehl... xoxoxo


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

baby.... :D

xoxoxox

*kisses your neck*


mitch 4 years ago

now im a fan of ur writings. :) and it was so hot in here :D


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Wow thank you so much Mitch :) Cool down, have a Magnum ice cream :)


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

The intense passion overwhelms me.


KatrineDalMonte 4 years ago

Sensual, passionate, full of deep desire, LOL I'm lost for words...love your poem :-)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

thank you Vinaya I always love your pictures :)

thank you Katrine :) I just wrote my feelings about a very beautiful person I love so much


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

*Melting now reading this..*


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

I want you melt in my lips..


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Oh Fehl...... that is so yummy... Heh... :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

cant get enough of you Darling :)


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Docmo 4 years ago from UK

Oh wow. This is steamy,sexy and sensational. I love the way the words flow with feelings. Awesome!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you Docmo. It's a steamy sexy time lol


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

HOT HOT HOT! I love it how you constructed the poem, alluring and captivating HOT HOT HOT!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

One more reason why I put the blue beach there hehehe

Thank you Max gosh you are so nice!


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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Wonderfully sensual and erotic! Max said it, "Hot!"


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SanneL 4 years ago from Sweden

Oh, wow this is sensual. . . and I'm not just talking about the poem here, lol!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

xstatic thanks for the hot comments :)

Oh wow yes I am blushing now.. lol Thanks SanneL :)


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

Intense fire hot sizzling poem!!


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Wow, blushing.... yummy... Hehehe...


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Flashmakeit glad you like it. Thank you.

Hi, baby! *hugs you in my arms now* heheh


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epigramman 4 years ago

I need a cigarette ........


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epigramman 4 years ago

and I don't even smoke.

lake erie is steaming over .....after this one - and so is me - 11:09pm and I will never be the same again.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Oh Colin.... hehehe.... :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Oh wow :)


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Angelme566 4 years ago

reading it again..GRRRRRR...can't say a word.. Blaiseee..


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Oh why can't you say anything? Grrrrrrrr.... LOL


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

... Because it is so hot.... LOL. :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

I need an iced cold tea and a no-bra woman..... ^_^


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Angelme566 4 years ago

OMG:)


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Oh wow.... why does this remind me of a conversation we had, Fehl....?

It's okay, Angel.....

We are butterflies..... :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

hehe because it is us :) mwaaaaaaaah! I love you babe


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago

What else can I add. Sultry, superb, and amazing read! Take care, and cool down Blaise!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

hehe Thanks so much Lord De Cross


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epigramman 4 years ago

Please smother me with a sequel aka Smother Me part 2 so I can go to BLAISE 25 heaven ... with a smile on my face (and the other one too)

Sending you my warmest wishes to you and your 'sweetie' from lake erie time canada 11:09pm from Colin, Little Miss Tiffy and Mister Gabriel


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

Hmmm my new hub is so special I hope you like it too Colin :)

Oh another face smiling? LOL I have to ask my other half Cathy what do you mean... I'm still sleepy and my brain could not process things correctly hehehe

We ladies send our warm hugs for the Poet of the Year :)

BTW, who is Miss Tiffy and Mister Gabriel? Are they your adorable cats?


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SiberianWolf 3 years ago from MidWest

You definately put the sexy in poetry... goodness... poems like this have to be slowly and savored... and i love how you made the reader do that... the candle wax drips like sweat here :)


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

I can't always hide strong feelings...someone who I wrote this for melts me always. :) So happy another reader felt my words especially a very great writer like you Wolf. Thank you so much :)


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Yearning for the one you love beautiful poetry here, and I voted up!


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

Yeah yearning so much...

Thank you for reading and voting up too :)


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frankieonfire 3 years ago from Eureka, CA

Hot, sexy, sweet. Poignant and written with an undercurrent of exclamation points; every word seems traced

with

each

sweet

tender

moment

growing

louder

as

you

lose/find yourself

in/at

each

turn

and

touch

yearning

evermore.

I adore this.


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

Wow you almost made a twin hub of this one here my friend :p I love your definition here. It has so many sparkles :) Have a sweet day! Will read more from you tonight. TC


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frankieonfire 3 years ago from Eureka, CA

What can I say - your words are so playful and fresh I found myself delighted and inspired. :-)


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MichaelJohnMele 3 years ago from Seffner, Florida

After reading this...I think I need to go take a cold shower.


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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

Sensual , captivating and nicely done.I voted up


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denden mangubat 3 years ago from liloan, cebu, philippines

naks!haha great!


King Kano 12 months ago

eyes, smile, and honesty, give me a better climax than any other way...Gives me the power to be strong, to control, to dominate, but, also to allow a woman to care for me...

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