Sneaky Pete (A Poem)

Sneaky Pete

He ain't no cheat

He skulks around

The midnight street

Where the neon sign

And the murky deep

Blink upon

His soft white feet



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Eldon Arsenaux 15 months ago from Cooley, Texas

Brilliant atmosphere with such short verse. Eerie rhythm.

Dug the Hub!

-E.G.A.


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Wrath Warbone 15 months ago from Cleveland, Ohio Author

That's very useful feedback, E.G.A. Best kind to get. So it is good when atmosphere is built vividly and quickly. Thanks. I'll remember that a long time. And use it too.


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ladyguitarpicker 15 months ago from 3460NW 50 St Bell, Fl32619

Different and brilliant, I like it.


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Wrath Warbone 15 months ago from Cleveland, Ohio Author

I like different and brilliant too, ladyguitarpicker. Thanks!


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Jodah 15 months ago from Queensland Australia

For some reason I like these short verses of yours Wrath. Very catchy and different.


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Wrath Warbone 15 months ago from Cleveland, Ohio Author

I've decided, Jodah, I'll keep writing them then thanks to your encouraging words. Maybe we hit on something here. Thanks for the tip.


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manatita44 14 months ago from london

Short and sweet, Terry.


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Wrath Warbone 14 months ago from Cleveland, Ohio Author

Sure thing, manatita44. Thanks.

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