So Hard To Find


you’re so hard to find


though I never searched

you came along

fell down

from the heavens


perhaps

the stars of fire

they sent

maybe

you just crept up


and took all my color blues

painted them with rainbows

so you


butterflies

partied up with

fireflies


anyhow

you’re so hard to find


the strands in your eyes

could kill me

but I floated

in the air and the sea


my love is not blind

you’re so hard to find

I see how beautiful you are


your lips

I’d crave their taste forever

your hair

brush them with my hands

your soul

lingers with mine


and I’d drink you

if only you drop in

the pouring rain


I’m so blessed…

you’re so hard to find.




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dswan9 5 years ago from Amsterdam and London

well I'm glad it wasn't hard to find your poetry : ) I really liked it, it had a lot of passion


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Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

Love's effect is more stable,I think,when it's rare and comes slowly with a creep....I got your book,so far so good,Marifel,but be patient as I'm a purposeful reader,and will read and re-read you passages to gain a critical take on your work.Don't let the word critical put you off,I've wouldn't be following and positivly commenting on your work if I didn't already find delight;)


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

Simply beautiful poetry. I just especially adore poems about love. Voted up and awesome.


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

Beautiful. You have such a way of reaching my heart with even few words. bless you xx


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you Dswan. :)

Hi Prof. A! Yup it's stable and deep when it crept up by surprise..I'm so glad that you read my book. You're Prof. A and you're freaking smart, talented and a very nice person. Glad you loved it and any critique from you is an honor :)

Hi Acaetna! thanks for the vote and rate ;)

Hello Dim! You're so lovely my friend. Bless you, too Xo


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epigramman 5 years ago

..well you are not certainly hard to find - I just follow one of the brightest stars up in the sky and it shines directly over this hubdelicious piece of writing .....


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Micky Dee 5 years ago

Here I am Blaise! Right here Girl! If only I were decades younger! I'd be a younger idiot! God bless you Girl!


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful poem.I hope you find that someone hard to find.

Cheers


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Neverletitgo 5 years ago from Minneapolis, MN

It very nice words,keep up your good job. Thanks for sharing.


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Cheeky Girl 5 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Wow, Fehl, so beautiful! I am so happy you are writing such wonderful poetry. Everything flows along so well. I can't wait for Book no. 2! LOL!

Not trynna pressure you or anything! Heh! Cheers, moi friend! :D XO


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carolina muscle 5 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

Simple and really meaningful to me!


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niceandcool 5 years ago from Philippines

great caz! i really love reading you.


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Enigmatic Me 5 years ago from East Coast Canada

You stick me in a hard place to come up with other original praises... so... I won't... you're great.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thanks guys! :)


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I really loved this poem, like all your poetry, it is easy like Sunday morning. The magic of love permeates it all, and you write so beautifully too. Sorry I missed this one, I love it, Fehl. Love your poetry, as always. :)


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

I was offline for five days and found this..Thanks Cath! You always bring magic to me :) Love your poetry!


astra nomik 5 years ago

Just magic. That is you all over :)


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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia

I really liked this, the yearning for love, for that elusive soul mate that we all desperately hope for, so very nicely portrayed here. simply beautiful


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lisadpreston 5 years ago from Columbus, Ohio

wow, so simple, so deep, so beautiful.


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daydreamer13 5 years ago

Oh, this made me crave love. What a wonderful poem! Excellent writing here!


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Awful Poet 5 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

A rather truely amazing piece.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

@ Astra - If I were magic, I'd do whatever I can't LOL Thank you. XX

@nighthag - hi! Glad you liked it. Thanks a lot :)

@Lisa - thank you. Looking forward to read you.

@Daydreamer - Crave crave crave! :)

@awful Poet - nice to see you. Thanks for the great comment


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Joy56 5 years ago

this is a wonderful piece of work, i enjoyed reading it.


shygirl2 5 years ago

I found it to be much different than I am use to writing, but profound. Thanks! : )


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Dark Heart 5 years ago

I admire how you combine a short,simple poem with such emotional depth and how you do it so often.I love reading your work.I think you're the best.


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

this is so beautiful to read, great writer. up/beautiful


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you so much guys :) Means a lot to me


kimberlyslyrics 4 years ago

I just got all mushy

thank you for this moment

you fucking rock!

kimberly


kimberlyslyrics 4 years ago

You mean so much to us

keep kicking ass you awesome artist

fuck man

stop actually

let me catch up

voted up and beyond!

kimberly


kimberlyslyrics 4 years ago

ps put this on my blog


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

thank you so much Kim :) you are frikin awesome! xx


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Mamadrama 4 years ago from Upstate NY

Whomever you wrote this about is one lucky person! Don't you love finding that special someone? Great hub!


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

You are a true lover, because you love without thinking about reciprocation.


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Hi Mamadrama. We are both lucky. Don't you love writing about that special someone? Thank you for the comment. :)

Hi Vinaya. I am a slave for love. I guess we all are. :)


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

The images that you painted skillfully with the magical words are just breathtaking!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

I guess they are not so hard to find :) Thanks Max!


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epigramman 4 years ago

...personally speaking - my last line would have been:

" you were so hard to find" what do you think?

Either way I just adore the way you express yourself so simply and clearly but yet so purely and effectively - much like my style I would say - and yes that is great for me to be in your esteemed company as a writer - lake erie time 12:30am playing some late night jazz here but after spending some time with you I feel like playing some rock and roll and turning up the volume ......


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

yeah that suits it too :) Oh you are a master!

Oh rock and roll, can Cathy and me be your guest now? hehehe We love Lake Erie


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Dim Flaxenwick 2 years ago from Great Britain

Couldn't help but read this one again. So, so lovely.


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carolinemd21 2 years ago from Close to Heaven

So beautiful and romantic.


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blaise25 2 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you Caroline :) Have a great day xx

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