Scattered images in my mind

At first glimpse

Two yellow flowers in one
Two yellow flowers in one
Thick and sticky spring clings to water as well
Thick and sticky spring clings to water as well
water is back in this dry country
water is back in this dry country
Spring is back
Spring is back
Night is back again
Night is back again
 Love means trying to bring the best in each other not to try to change each other
Love means trying to bring the best in each other not to try to change each other
I have a right to be me and to be loved for myself
I have a right to be me and to be loved for myself
 The problem with the past is that  it is just that - the past
The problem with the past is that it is just that - the past
It does not relate to the reality of the present
It does not relate to the reality of the present
 Move on
Move on
Friendship means to take on the friend's hat and wear it with a pride
Friendship means to take on the friend's hat and wear it with a pride
And return it willingly when time comes to enter the unkown water leaving all the worldly possesion behind
And return it willingly when time comes to enter the unkown water leaving all the worldly possesion behind
Love means to let go and not to be afraid exploring alone. Enter your dark tunnel leaving all your passion for others to share
Love means to let go and not to be afraid exploring alone. Enter your dark tunnel leaving all your passion for others to share
You manage to get across many obstacles with vehemence and your inner strength will surprise you
You manage to get across many obstacles with vehemence and your inner strength will surprise you
Finally you reach your lonely tower, the ultimate goal of your destination, where no one and nothing can follow you
Finally you reach your lonely tower, the ultimate goal of your destination, where no one and nothing can follow you
Spring ended, summer passed and autumn waits for a winter to come. You don't wait, you have already left. People who don't let you go, make a symbol in your memory, your only mark...
Spring ended, summer passed and autumn waits for a winter to come. You don't wait, you have already left. People who don't let you go, make a symbol in your memory, your only mark...

FOLLOW ME...

Forget

Winter's grey skies,

biting winds and heavy rains.

Spring descends.


It brings its warmth and colour

hiding the red and rusting rocks

as sea of yellow flowers

envelopes the landscape

and us


Thick and sticky

the pollen clings to you

just like me

it is all too hard to resist...


Laying down

amongst it all,

a gentle warmth

of your breath...

a cloudless sky

only the sound of birds

and YOU on my skin


The perfect spring day

until the night time comes

again...


The night

takes us back

to the heart of human darkness


Hypnotic, gripping and disturbing

world of TV news

while we eat take aways

getting ready for work

recreate in our dreams


The memories of our perfect spring day

are gone...


LET RECLAIM OUR PERFECT SPRING DAY ...

Let start the journey back again...


Let wake up the inner child

within me...

be out in the wind

feeling the crushing waves

on my face


Swimming in the ocean

sitting in the sun

I am who I am

a girl or a woman

or a dying star...


I live in the past

but look at my son

and I know it is time

to leave beauty

and a sorrow

to leave everything behind...


Let move on

Let prepare for a journey

into the unknown

when my time draws to a close

what will be

what I regret leaving most?



LET MOVE ON


Let move on

Let prepare for a journey

into the unknown

when my time draws

to a close

what will be

what I regret leaving most?


Love, relationship with my man

spiritual connections

with my friends?

Does everything end up

out in the wind

under the stars

on the face on the moon?


Everything ends up

my life

my ups and downs

all my frustration

my exhilaration

all my emotions

I need so much

to report about

I am after all

a reporter of the human condition,

in all its variations

adding words to the art

in the space of the sentence

I describe my loves

I describe my life.

















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lmmartin 6 years ago from Alberta and Florida

What an absolutely lovely set of optimistic, spiritual and uplifting poems! You write beautifully. The pictures go well with your words.

Thanks for sharing.


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bayareagreatthing 6 years ago from Bay Area California

Very deep and emotional. You are truly a great writer. Are you published yet?


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you so much my soul mate for your praise. I have published some poems in newspapers and won some encouragement notes, but I feel not confident to write in English as it is my second /third/ language. But I am very sick recently and battling on and I need to write to keep my 'depression' away. It is three a'clock morning and I have finished another poem.

If you have time I would be happy if you can read it. Thank you again.


ralwus 6 years ago

Wow! this is really something. The story in words so well crafted giving most wonderful images in my mind and then the pictures on the side telling stories too for my mind and eyes.

Very talented. Thank you so much. Love the hat.


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annie laurie 6 years ago from England

I loved the poems and the photographs you write incredibly well for someone for whom English is not their first language, I admire you very much for how accomplished you are


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

thank you so much for your encouragement Ralwus, I try my best to keep writing ...I have so many images in my mind that I had no time to put them all on the paper and I am happy that is someone there like you, who can feel them, see them and experience them with me. Welcome in my world, my new soulmate.

I am so happy that you noticed the HAT. It is very special hat I borrowed from a close friend, who I see once per ten years but we are connected for life. It is one of the mysteries of life that you meet someone and than he/she disapears from your life, but then your paths cross again by a coincidence and you know that he/she is there for you no matter what. I have to return the hat after another ten years, that is a PROMISE.

Thank you so much for your encouraging comment Annie. I am trying hard to work on my English when I am writing, but my images just pop in my head that I rush to put them on the paper without thinking, sometimes I mix all the languages I studied and then i have to go back ...I admit I don't like to go back and edit my poems or my stories which is my weakness.


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wyanjen 6 years ago from Wyandotte Michigan

Hi Beata

You seem to feel like you are struggling with English, but when I read you I get pure images and thoughts. Your ideas are coming through loud and clear!

;-)

Jen


Beata Stasak 6 years ago

Thank you Jen for your kind comment. My first language is Slovak language, I am a teacher of Russian language / I have studied it in Russia at Uni long time ago/ so sometimes I feel that I mix all three languages together and I am not good in any of them any more. Furthermore I am seriously ill and under many medications recently so my brain does not work the best all the time. I have scribbled a lot for all three my blogs but decided not to publish it. But you gave a strength to continue, thank you.


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Kenny MG 6 years ago from A Child of the Universe

just absolutely stunning sceneries, and the poems are so beautiful. These should be framed and placed at strategic points, at entry point to every school and colleges, every work places and in the corridors of power. They are so uplifting, just what the doctor orderd for our sick minds and the world we face each morning


Beata Stasak 6 years ago

Thank you so much Kenny for your kind words, I don't know if my poem is really so good, but if it helps at least one person

to get through another day...I will be satisfied. I have scribbled it down after my another visit to doctor who told me another bad news...I felt that I have to quickly write something down, something more profound, in the case it would not be any more time to write something else.

Thank you again, Kenny for your kind words.


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Lady_E 6 years ago from London, UK

A very lovely Poem. It's like you took me on a Journey and the poem gave one food for thought. I enjoyed it and look forward to reading more. Thanks.


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you Lady_E for your kind response. Thank you for joining me on my journey...our thoughts have to be made of the same 'star stuff'.


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stricktlydating 6 years ago from Australia

Great Poems!


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Chuck 6 years ago from Tucson, Arizona

Thank you. Reading this was a great way to start my day.


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you my dear new readers for your kinds comments.I will try my best not to disapoint you next time. It is time to write about Summer time, many summer images scatter in my mind...just need to write them down.


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commisioner 6 years ago from florida

there are many comments of the beauty of what you write. and i agree with them mostly, but maybe an answer to what you leave behind. it is yourself in many small parts, that of your children, of the friends you've impacted and the enemies you have made.good and bad is what you leave behind and the strongest of the two in your inner self will prevail through time. as far as where you will go when all this comes to an end, well for me it is a dream or maybe a vision i have regularly. i awake, naked and unashamed, near a brook. by it's shores is my lodge where my first wife awaits. she has waited there now for many decades, passing at a very young age. she holds for me a quiver with many arrows and a bow, and smiles while saying we do not need the meat, but our smokehouse is a little low. as i look to my right, great grandfather has just kissed his wife and starts my way to go hunting. the women have caught much fish and the sun is warm, the ground soft, and the trees greener than any i have ever seen here. this will be my next step in the ever changing ways of life after life


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you commisioner for your beatiful response. Your dream is just like a breath of fresh air after long and dry summer we are experience right now in Australia. My poems are created on a spur of moment and reflect how I feel in one particular moment...I wake up next day and those feelings are gone and sometimes never return again ... just 'scattered images of that moment' stays with me through my writing. And also lovely comments, just like yours help me to feel more optimistic and more happy about my future as there are in our big wide world so many passionate and caring people that one never feels alone. Thank you again. All the best from Beata


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H P Roychoudhury 6 years ago from Guwahati, India

Hi Beata Stasak,

It is a wonderful way of expressing your thought to impart the pleasure of heart in a lucid manner. You are a great writer. Take my salute. Thanks.


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Every day I doubt myself in my writing abilities, but I love writing even if I have no time for it, I will scribble something during the night and people like you keep me going. Thank you so much in believing in me. All the best from beata


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billyaustindillon 6 years ago

Wonderful - a great start for a new morning :)


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mintinfo 6 years ago

Thanks for the invite, I am glad I came because your words describe scenes of bliss from a memory overflowing with the richness of life. Keep writing and sharing.


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you my new hub friends for taking time to visit me. I am very happy you enjoyed it. All the best from Beata


Sweetie 6 years ago

Beta, I enjoyed your poem, it was most " Beautiful "

yet " Heartfelt ".

Have a Beautiful Day :)


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you Sweetie, I think it is both 'beautiful and hearfelt' poem because this is how I experience and absorb life around me: as beauty and sorrow in one, my bitter and sweet life. Thank you for your beautiful comment and wish you all the best, hope you come back to visit me again. Beata


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Moulik Mistry 6 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

Great imagery, strong metaphor - I feel the words of your heart...


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you my reader, there is no point in writing poems that no one reads, the poem's existence depends on connection between the writer and the reader...my heart talks to your heart and the poem comes alive...all the best from Beata


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Mr. Happy 6 years ago from Toronto, Canada

Those are some gorgeous photos!


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sarmack 6 years ago from Washington

Very insightful! Thank you for visiting my HubPages, Beata! I have enjoyed visiting yours in return. May God Bless!


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you my dear hub friends for visiting me and I am happy that you like it. All the best to you. Beata


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pinkhawk 6 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

...splendid poem! great words!.. thank you for sharing! :)


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you for popping in and reading it, poems are personal words which need to be shared and if the words resonate in you, then the poem comes alive...wishing you all the best and come back again. Beata


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you suggest one 6 years ago from NOTTINGHAM ENGLAND

HI BEATA,such a wonderful collection of thoughts,personnally I do not think it would matter what language you use the sentiments would still make a way into the world,I wish I could use a camera with such great effect,love the hat,got one just like it,aquired it the last time I was in Canada,never stop passing on your thoughts and experiences,take care my friend.


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

My dear friend, 8 months ago when I have written this poem /the first after very, very long time/ I felt at the end of my strength /physical and mental/. I thought there are many, many people going throgh rough time just like me, i need to connect with them, so they know they are not alone...the net is magic place, it is a modern communication tool which help us to help each other, think about each other through space and time...

Thank you my friend, your thoughts and best wishes keep me alive...Love from Beata


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tony0724 6 years ago from san diego calif

Beata first off thank you for freinding me on FB. And second the poem was outstanding , you are quite a good wordsmith.And I loved both " Follow Me " and seeing it is Spring I like the concept of moving on and starting anew. Great job !


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you Tony, as a writer you understand me, I love writing and feeling that through my words I connect with people all around the world feels me with excitement and warmth I can not describe....thank you for connecting my fellow writer..all the best from BEata


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Lisa HW 6 years ago from Massachusetts

Beata, as your first commenter said, you write beautifully. The photographs are beautiful too.


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you Lisa, it means a lot to me, coming from so experienced hubber like you, hope you come back again to give me more advice...all the best from BEata


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C.S.Alexis 6 years ago from NW Indiana

Be out in the wind feeling the crushing waves...so many of your words express the way I feel, my inner child dances to your drumming and I call to you hello my friend,

Regards.


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you my friend, I dance back to you meeting you on your hub...


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Haunty 6 years ago from Hungary

This poem is very touching, Beata. Your words are beautifully complemented by the photos. Thank you for connecting with me. :) Hope you are feeling well today!


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Shalini Kagal 6 years ago from India

What a wonderful poem Beata - it reached out and touched my heart! Thank you!


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you Shalini, I can only reach out but someone has to be there on other side to meet me somewhere in the middle...thank you for meeting me...all the best from BEata


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lxxy 6 years ago from Beneath, Between, Beyond

Nice to meet you Beata, and thank you for bringing your poetry to my attention.

While I enjoy reading and writing such things, it can be hard to describe them with the very words they're written from.

"in all its variations

adding words to the art

in the space of the sentence"

One of my favorite lines in this mix--but there's so many, it's hard to pick out the best.

Great talent, nice to meet you. =)


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Anamika S 6 years ago from Mumbai - Maharashtra, India

Very Nice!I liked it...


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you my dear new friends on FB and on hubpages for your warm words of encouragement, you made my day...love from BEata


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SEM Pro 6 years ago from North America

Testimony indeed that the best has been brought out BEata! Thank you for bringing this to my attention via our new connection on fb - it is W-O-N-D-E-R-F-U-L! Tickled pink to find another "reporter of the human condition" (great line!) I look forward to reading more of your eloquent and descriptively woven sentiments :)


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

Spectacular


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you my dear new friends for taking your time to connect with me...all the best from Beata


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epigramman 6 years ago

You are a true and chosen child of nature and it's obvious that words love you and that you have a love affair with words!


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Just trying to be someone with an individual competent style, to find my own handwriting style...thank you for your kinds words...words are my love and long life affair that is for sure...all the best to you...


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anjalichugh 6 years ago from New York

and I know it is time

to leave beauty

and a sorrow

to leave everything behind...

Wow! What a beautiful expression. You're an incredibly gifted writer. Adversities do make us wiser. Please keep writing. Your words bring peace to the aching hearts. Love your hubs.


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you Anjalichugh for visiting me and connecting with me through my writing...all the best to you...love from Beata


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you Anjalichugh for visiting me and connecting with me through my writing...all the best to you...love from Beata


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Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

From dieing stars we arrive and through dieing stars we enter... a very inspirational poem Beata:)


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you Mentalist acer for visiting me...all the best to you and your own poem writing...Beta


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wavegirl22 6 years ago from New York, NY

Beata - after reading this I feel honored to have received your friend request on fb. This Hub truly touched me . . bookmarking it for this one is a true treasure. . Rated upwards and awesome.


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you my dear new FB friend, I am happy I was able to connect with you through my words...


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lxxy 6 years ago from Beneath, Between, Beyond

Just stopping back up to add my tag votes. ;)


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you Ixxy, feel very honoured you have done that form me...love from Beata


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Liz Kirsten 6 years ago

Beata-an excellent myriad of words to describe an inner depth. Thank you for sharing.


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you Liz for visiting me and spending time with my poem, it was the first poem I had written for very, very long time 9 months ago and it keeps inspiring people which makes me feel very humble and honoured at the same time...thank you ...all the best from beata


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Wayne Brown 6 years ago from Texas

Beata...your poem struck me as a very graphic representation of spring conflicted with the demands of life. Kind of a fracture between fantasy and reality in which the reality makes the fantasy look so appealing yet the fanstasy makes the reality so undesireable that you long to return to fantasy of spring. That's just me...very good poem. WB


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you my dear Wayne, it was the first poem I have written after very, very long time after I was diagnosed with the incurable illness I still struggle to deal with even today...English is not my first language so I was really scared to write it down, but not I am glad I did, because the message is universal and so many you great writers have found so many wonderful interpretations that I feel really honoured that I managed to write something meaningful to so many people...THANK YOU...all the best from Beata


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oliversmum 6 years ago from australia

Beata Stasak. Hi. What a beautiful poem, some of which we have all experienced at one time or another, but (I personally) do not have your talent and could not write it as you have.

The photo's are absolutely beautiful.

I loved your poem, Thank you for sharing it with us. :) :)


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

My dear Oliversmum, we all have talents in different areas...the important thing is to share...my writing is not perfect especially not in English (my workmates would back me up on that one), but I just love it and don't care any more:)


Apostle Jack 6 years ago

Your poem is a well cook piece of meat.

It really show your outlook on life and a

very well put together message.

Keep the flow going.


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you Apostle, although I never cook meat properly (just ask my husband:) at least I can put some words together...thanks for this flattering comment:)


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skgrao 6 years ago from Bangalore City - INDIA.

Beta Beata,

Beta in Hindi language means child.

I saw all your Hubs it was confusing to me which one to select to read so I picked this one.The mind remembers what you want to remember.Why should it be scattered because you did it that way.

Next is your own uploads to your mind,why did you do it.

What is our brain doing.it just opens on what you click.

Why cant you click on happy memories or your ups rather than downs.

Life has ups & downs for all.

Some more ups & Some more downs,Some nodowns,some noups,some only downs & some only ups.

Memory is always scattered and it does not stay for ever or as long as you want it.It jumps from one place to any place,anywhere & anytime.

How do you stop it.

Can you stop it.

You can stop it.

How.?

Ask me.!!!!!!!!!!


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you for your insightful comment my dear hub friend, as you cleverly recognized my mind is full of images and memories from past, present and dreamt future as well, maybe therefore I need to write them down so I can sort them out:)


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you for your insightful comment my dear hub friend, as you cleverly recognized my mind is full of images and memories from past, present and dreamt future as well, maybe therefore I need to write them down so I can sort them out:)


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Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you for your insightful comment my dear hub friend, as you cleverly recognized my mind is full of images and memories from past, present and dreamt future as well, maybe therefore I need to write them down so I can sort them out:)


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inspiredbydg 5 years ago from San Diego Ca

Poetic, beautiful layout of pictures that describe your emotional connections.

Enjoy the moods of experiences.

Thank you for the ride your good at connecting with your self!


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Beata Stasak 5 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you 'Inspiredbydg'...we are all good at something, writing helps me to keep 'sane'...and I am happy if people find it useful to read:) thank you for visiting me...come back again:)


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lotuslove19 5 years ago

Beata ,from your poem it seems you are facing hard times ,If I am not wrong,If you want any help regarding your health ,will definitely do so.If everything is fine I apologize .


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NP.QUEEN 5 years ago from Dubai

HI BEATA,

Very nice poem.Expecting more and more. Thank you.


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Beata Stasak 5 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you 'Queen', I am happy you liked it, when my inspiration kicks in again...there will be more:)


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jantamaya 5 years ago from UK

Beata, thank you for the moment of love I felt in your poem. Diving in it, I forgot everything around me. By the way, I am also a language mix (like you): Polish, German and English. :) Maya


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Beata Stasak 5 years ago from Western Australia Author

Nice to meet you Jantamaya, happy to meet another 'trilingual' friend...welcome on my page:)


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

What wonderful words of nature. Loved it,I am so pleased that I found this poem.


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Beata Stasak 5 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you Acaetnna for your kind words, it encourages me to write more:) God bless you my new friend...


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Extinct Soul 5 years ago from 14°35'N 121°0'E

No, I don't think you're a dying star..^_^ I see you as a shining shimmering one..

nice hub!


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Beata Stasak 5 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you 'my extinct soul'mate, who shines on my path:)


alberich 5 years ago

Thank you Beata I especially love these phrase:

"Does everything end up

out in the wind

under the stars

on the face on the moon?"

Well I ask myself the same question and know the answer as you surely do too.

Cheers!


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Beata Stasak 5 years ago from Western Australia Author

Yes, we know the answer dear Alberich, but it doesn't stop us from trying to 'reach the stars'....so just keep going and dreaming on...love and peace from Beata


alberich 5 years ago

Love and bless!


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Genna East 5 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

Very well done! I love the imagery you create with your words. The questions you ask, the doubts; leaving your past, and what we truly leave behind are part of your fascinating journey.


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Beata Stasak 5 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you Genna, when I was writing this poem I had no idea it will talk to so many wonderful people:)...thank you for your beautiful comment...love and peace from Beata


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Maggie-May 5 years ago from the Island of Cape Breton to the Eastern Shores near Halifax, NS

How very genuine and truthful. A very enjoyable read with great images conjured as well as your photos. Thanks for this very reflective piece,

Your new follower,

MM


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Beata Stasak 5 years ago from Western Australia Author

Happy to have you among my followers, dear Maggie-May and very happy I had a chance to connect with through my words:)...love and peace from Beata


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mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

Beata Stasak: Your poetry has touched the hearts of people all around the world. Your very deep poetic words have a very long reach indeed.


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Beata Stasak 5 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you dear 'mckbirdbs', that is all I wish for ...to speak up and to be heard....


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chamilj 5 years ago from Sri Lanka

Nice poem Beata. Thanks! I enjoyed it.


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LVidoni5 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

Wow I love this poem. Beautiful!


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Beata Stasak 5 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you dear chamilj and LVidoni5 for taking your time and leaving comments of your approval, very appreciated and happy you liked it:)


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Angelique Newman 5 years ago from Canada

Beautiful poem, you're a gifted writer and your pictures are absolutely gorgeous! Thank you for sharing :)


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marcoujor 5 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

Hi Beata,

I wanted to check out your first piece of work on Hub, and I am grateful as I have also read through your journey via your comments. It is beautiful to see the gift you have with words and accompanying photography. It is even more beautiful to see how you have become so beloved in this community.

I truly understand why, and I thank you for finding me. I look forward to reading much more of your inspiring work.

Voted UP & AWESOME & BEAUTIFUL, mar.


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Beata Stasak 5 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you, my dear Anelique and dear Mar, being a part of this beautiful creative hub community helped me to overcome my own health and other personal obstacles and I am on never ending quest to look for genuine fellow hubbers who are on the same 'wavelength' as me....so happy i have found you my lovely ladies:)...all the best with your hubbing and keep in touch...Beata


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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

The poem is so touching , it is SUPERB !! You are a Very Very Good Writer , a lot more than what I can say in words.

Best Wishes to you,

Kamalesh


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Beata Stasak 5 years ago from Western Australia Author

It is my first writing I have ever done for on the hubpages and it amazes me how many people it keeps inspiring...hope it will never stops...thank you dear Kamalesh for your response:)


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful poetry. Glad to find you. Thank you for the fan mail. Happy to follow.


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Beata Stasak 5 years ago from Western Australia Author

Glad to find you too, my new HP friend...keep in touch:)


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Beata Stasak 5 years ago from Western Australia Author

Glad to find you too, my new HP friend...keep in touch:)


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Lita C. Malicdem 5 years ago from Philippines

I wasn'r reading you in your poem, I was wallowing in it like I was the character in that journey- and when I reached "Let Move On"- you had me real on!

"What will I regret leaving most?"- Now I'm having scattered images, Beata! Haha! Very vivid poem and beautiful photos to go along with. Congratulations and Cheers!


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Beata Stasak 5 years ago from Western Australia Author

My dear Lita, when I write I just see images in my head that I try to capture in photographs first and then I have an urge to write them down...English is my third language so there is my 'uniqueness or my own writing style', but English is very flexible and great language to use...(hopefully I don't spoil it too much with my foreign way:)


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blondey 4 years ago

I like the journey into the wildlife and I feel unfortunate for the tv dinners and back to busy life. If only we had time to cook a healthy meal and let the natural life stay with us...


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Maybe once it will be possible, dear blondey...once we change our lifestyle and our living choices all around:)...thank you for stopping by:)


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Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas

I had not seen this poem before, Beata. You paint the magic of love against the coming of spring and perhaps a new emergence of love too well known. The suggestion of a new start with all the excitment of beginning...I like it! WB


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you Wayne, it is my first poem on the hubpages and it never ceases to catch attention so I have done something right there:)....I keep writing and practising to catch that magical moment again....hopefully I will:)


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Peanutritious 4 years ago from Cheshire, UK

Beautifully written and magical. It makes me want to get outside and take in the texture and smells of nature. Voted up and awesome.


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you my new follower, I am honoured that my words touched your sense in such profound way:)...lots of love from Beata


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mckbirdbks 4 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

The beauty in your words draws readers even now.


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you 'dear mckbirdbks', your kind words mean a lot to me:)...lots of love from beata


Ghaelach 4 years ago

Morning Beata.

So many lovely comments. I counted 48 comments and all thanking you for sharing these wonderful words.

It takes a special type of person to write the way you do and i'm going to enjoy reading your other work.

Two years ago when you first wrote this hub you say you where very ill, well i hope that you have the illness behind you now and are healthy and enjoying life to the full.

Take care Beata and have a nice day.

LOL Ghaelach


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you my dear Ghaelach, I am still struggling with my illness but I am ALIVE and much more content and happier than 2 years ago...two great things helped me to get through: creative writing/photography and hub community who embraced me from the start and let me be who I am.....I can not be more grateful than I am to all of you for encouraging me to keep writing and keep fighting to stay alive....:) ...all the best dear Ghaelach for stopping by and hope I hear from you again...


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carcro 4 years ago from Winnipeg

You have a way with words that truly brings out the emotions. Nicely done, I often think about how lucky I am to be alive in this wonderous world, among all the chaos and stress of the day, I remind myself to take stock of the fact I am here, which is a miracle in itself. The people I have known in the past and that are dear to me today are all gifts, everything I sense is a gift, we are truly so dam lucky to be able to experience the journey of life...Thanks so much for sharing your gifts too!


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Your beautiful words urge me to write another poem, dear carcro' and so it is like you said, we are lucky torchbearers of the light and as we pass through this miraculous online world we enlighten, without even realising it, thousands lives...we inspire each other and bring the best in each other...what a beautiful world to live in:)

THANK YOU...


september girl 4 years ago

Well, I finally made it to your side of the world...: ) Great poem and great photos! I'll be back to read more of your work!


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you lovely 'september girl' for visiting me and leaving me this beautiful message...all the best in your part of the world:)


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you lovely 'september girl' for visiting me and leaving me this beautiful message...all the best in your part of the world:)


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gailalovesbijou 4 years ago from Wyomissing, PA

Beautiful! You are indeed "a reporter of the human condition," and a very good one at that. The beauty of your soul is apparent in your rich,thought-provoking hubs. Thank you!


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you for this beautiful comment, my fellow hubber, we are all 'reporters of the human condition' in our own rights, good luck with your hubbing and see you soon:)


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Pearldiver 4 years ago from Tomorrow - In Words & NZ Time.

I read this way back and meant to comment, but had to go to work. This is awesome and I am lucky to be able to read your works and take in WA through your pics. Thank you for your talent and your heart, that lets you share it with us. Take care Beata.


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tammyswallow 4 years ago from North Carolina

What a grand adventure! You have some beautiful and unique work.

I am of Slovakian decent and have found some relatives of mine in Slovenia. (Maticic). What are your other languages? You are an amazing individual and I hope you will keep writing, writing, writing..!


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

thank you my fellow hubbers for your encouraging comments, this is the first poem I have written for hubpages unsure of myself and my skill of mastering English...I have got my first comment from 'Immartin - now my friend Linda', who said: 'Keep writing, you are on right track and I have never stopped ever since:) Hubpages are just great and I am so grateful to all of you, my fellow hubbers because I have a reason to write...and there is someone somewhere reading it....

Dear Pearldiver, I am the same...we need more time out of work to write and comment on hubpages...maybe in our other life, ha,ha..happy you managed to come back:)

Dear Tammy, I have studied for two years in Russia but it was long time ago...so I understand Russian, but not so well anymore...used to read and write my own stories in Russian language, have to try again:)


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qlcoach 4 years ago from Cave Junction, Oregon

Well I couldn't find your "down under" Hub,but this poem and your pictures are amazing. I relate to the power of Nature and to the search for a spiritual connection within. Yes to faith, hope, and unconditional worth and value. I will follow you! Peace and Light...Gary.


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Kathleen Cochran 4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

You are incredibly prolific and the art adds so much to your words. Completely impressed by the volume of comments your work illicits! Envious actually. Looking forward to reading more and more.


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Sorry, dear Gary for confusing you, it is just a slang we use in Australia...'down under' means 'big island at the end of the world, down under the Europe, America, Asia and so on...it means Australia' so what I meant was visit my hubpage and that I am from Australia:)...you are on the right hubpage:)....thank you for popping in and leaving your beautiful comment....I am happy my fellow hubbers do not give up on me....I love to meet new inspiring people but I speak two other languages and 'my English'

is just 'mine':)

Don't be envious my dear Kathleen, I often feel I am lost cause and my use of English is not efficient enough so I think people on hubpages are very kind and big-hearted to encourage me on my writings...I love writing but I write 'my way' and I am happy my fellow hubbers have embraced me for who I am....THANK you for being one of them and come back again:)


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Pixienot 4 years ago from Clarksville, Indiana

You were not kidding, Beata. Your passion shows through in your work. And the hat.. how awesome that you wear it (my hat collection is full of fun!), and even more awesome that it symbolizes such a connection to your friend.

Great job!

Voted up, awesome and beautiful if I were not too late to vote. :)

Thanks for sharing.


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

thank you my fellow 'hat girl'...love hats too, only recently my friend gave me red one, and she had one too, so we walk around, two red hats in the grey line of rushing crowd...thanks for voting, I don't know too much about it...I am not very good in following rules so I click everything everywhere and the most of the time I am disqualified, but I don't really care too much...I don't believe that winning any competition would make me better writer or better human being...the connection with my readers is what is important for me:)


Hubertsvoice 4 years ago

Scattered images in your mind, yet, so connected like life and death.


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

...and everything between..yes...thank you Hubert, your voice resonates in me:)...all the best and hopefully hearing from you soon:)


Hubertsvoice 4 years ago

You have many more hubs to read. I'l have much more to say.


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

So true, Hubert, but some of them are long, long...a lot of time spent reading and responding...:)


Hubertsvoice 4 years ago

I'll take care of what I can


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

So then happy reading:)...will wait for your response...


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Ercolano 4 years ago from Vancouver, BC

It's all been said before me, but I'll add that I really enjoyed your introspective of these pieces and the correlation to the photos. Very lovely.


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Beautiful comments can be said over and over again...they never loose their power:)...thank you and all the best with your hubbing my fellow hubber:)


bolt1951 4 years ago

Wow!! Beata,

your not an ordinary person, Your an extraordinary person, your perseption and interpretation of life appears to have taken you to the realms of the beauty that most couldn't even with 20/20 vision, for most nowadays have that problem, I see you've been given a gift and you share in return that is excatly what this world needs. Thank You so much.


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Dear my fellow hubber I think you are putting on a pediestal, where I don't really belong, I just like writing and reflecting on life around me...I think my vision 'cleared' after I was diagnosed with incurable disease...suddenly all those small everyday troubles that occupy 90 per cent of our time stopped bothering me and I started to focus on a bigger picture...I think it is the cost of realization that our lives are just such fragile and one minute you are here and another minute you are gone...and you want to leave at least someting behind...even if it is just few footsteps in a quickly disapearing sand...


bolt1951 4 years ago

Dear Beata,

I had sensed that, within your writing was an adventure

and a beggining, If i could switch places with you I would.

for within me is a soul that feels trapped in a world of much sorrow and dispear, in my eyes the there is an unbalance which is very unconforting, we don't belong here. I am a man that has witness the side of man that is not so beautiful and it makes me feel shameful of the things we as people are capable of doing. I don't know if you have read my hub on the surrender I hope you get time to read it. I am writting a hub right now that has to do with my smallest granddaughter and I hope you read that also, I know not of your beliefs, however I do know you are open minded. My Friend take care of yourself.


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Dear Raul, I will surely will read your hubs as I know we are on the same wavelenght...sometimes our spirit is too big for our bodies and we often take the sorrow of the world on our shoulders but they are not big enough to carry all these sadness around:)...dear Raul, we can not save the world but we can write and reflect on things that trouble our minds....and hope for the best outcome...:)


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

You know I love the flow and how careful your words are used.. great write-- :) FRank


stessily 4 years ago

Beata Stasak, Such a gift you have for flowing words accompanied by images which fuel the imagination! Wisdom and its companion, compassion, are evinced throughout this journey which you have shared and continue to share. Thank you for this gift of a poetic heart attuned to the universe.


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Dear Frank, every day before I start to write, I think about the wisdom shared by many writers before me: 'Words can kill or heal, use them wisely'...thank you for your viist and your beatiful comment.

Dear 'stessily', in spite of many shortcomings and difficulties in my life I bless every day because if there will be nothing left I still have my imagination to carry me on...thank you my fellow hubber for following my journey and expanding on the wisdom hidden in my words....


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Night Magic 4 years ago from Canada

Thank you for inviting me to read your hubs. I couldn't decide which one to read. Scattered Images in My Mind caught my attention so I decided to read it and am sure glad I did. Your poem is so true to life. I just love poetry like that. Look forward to reading more. You'll be in my prayers.


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you 'Night Magic' and you will be in mine:)


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Social-eyes 4 years ago

Thank you for this insightful poem. I especially love where you identify as a "reporter of the human condition". Looking forward to reading more.


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you 'social-eyes' for stopping by, all poets are 'reporters of the human conditions' one way or another...looking forward to hear from you again:)


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven

Beata breathtaking poetry. Your hubs always take me to a very deep place to think. I also love your taglines underneath your photos. My favorite:

"Love means to let go and not to be afraid exploring alone. Enter your dark tunnel leaving all your passion for others to share"

Very beautiful. Voted up. Also, I always appreciate your heartfelt comments on my hubs. Your photos are always gorgeous. I am waiting for the day when I visit Australia!


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

You would be welcome in Australia with open arms, dear Caroline, I feel your free spirit flying gently in summer breeze on these endless sun soaked and empty beaches:)


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ilymsvicky 4 years ago from Long Beach

your imagery in this piece is amazing. It allows the reader to take the journey through spring with you.


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

thank you for following my footsteps...hope you join on my journey sometimes somewhere on hubpages again:)


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ruthclark3 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA

While reading "Follow Me" I traveled backward to a time when my soul mate and I sat on the banks of a river, idling our time away. There was no need to speak. We were always comfortable with the peace found in silence. He is gone, now, to a better place and I wait. Thank you for the memory.


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

...thank you for visiting me, my fellow follower, thank you by keeping my words alive...wishing you all the best and hope your memory will never fade:)


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TheWhisper 4 years ago from Macomb,MI

Your words are beautiful and powerful. The story crafted in this poem will stay with me throughout my day and brighten my mood. Thank you for writing this and I hope to read more of your works soon :)


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you, dear 'whisper' for your beautiful comment, there is nothing more exciting for author than to hear that his words haven't been wasted, thank you for making my day:)


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Bella Nina 4 years ago from USA

How beautiful. Your words took me on a journey. Voted up and beautiful!!


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Happy you liked it, Bella...happy travelling through my imaginative landscape:)


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teacherjoe52 4 years ago

I love the flow of this work of art.

The photos are magnificent.

Great work


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

My dear teacherjoe, those photos tell my life story in visual way...we all have a couple of images in our heads that represent our place, our indentity and us specifically...I am very happy that my personal images talk to you....:)


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NightFlower 4 years ago

You have so many people commenting I thought I would never get to the point I could lol. Your poem is very emotional and moving. I read a lot poems and it is nice to know that each poem has something unique to offer which is what i like about reading the poetry of others. This peice is breath-taking.


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you 'dear flower who blossoms at night', I would assume that you love poetry with your romantic name, I love poetry...to read and write as well...each individual poem allows us to enter 'the personal and creative world of the creator'....welcome to my world, happy to share it with you...all the best from Beata


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Charu Bhatnagar 4 years ago from India

You are such a great writer. This poem is so deep and at the same time very positive too. N i looove spring! :D


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Great to know, Charu...spring brings new beginning, new hope and new friends too...looking forward to hear from you again:)


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Ruby H Rose 4 years ago from Northwest Washington on an Island

Love the images and the poem, how you weaved them together is beautiful. Thanks for posting on my fan page so I can keep in touch with you.


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you, Ruby, happy you liked it, it means 'you are on the same mind-wave':) Stay in touch:)


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ginjill ashberry 4 years ago

Hey, Beata..

Thank you for letting us a glimpse of you:) Clever use of

pictures too. Looking forward to read the other hubs you write!


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you 'Ginjill' nice to meet you and happy you stopped by and visited my 'place of scattered images in my mind'.


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J. Frank Dunkin 4 years ago from Foley, Alabama

Methinks I've discovered (for myself, as others have already discovered you) in you, a great poet. I love the imagery of thick and sticky pollen, have even used similar imagery in my novel, "Bones of My Brother" (as yet unpublished) Will read more of your inspiring work. Thanks also for following me at jfrankdunkin.hubpages.com. (short stories and travelogues) You might like my s.s. "Recess, the Podium Light". Keep up the great work!


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

Thank you so much, dear Frank for your encouraging comment, will be happy to read some of your work as well:)


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

I have read some of your writings as well and I am humble you like my work, as you are a great writer:)


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Amanda Gee 4 years ago from Cameron, Missouri

Very nice. I enjoyed it very much.It's beautifal!:)


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Beata Stasak 4 years ago from Western Australia Author

thank you, Amanda, happy you liked it:)


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Markie W 3 years ago

What a wonderful, beautiful poem.


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Beata Stasak 3 years ago from Western Australia Author

thank you, Markie, happy you liked it, my first poem on the hubpages:)

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