Soft Moments (poem)

Soft were those moments I would drift with you

You took my hand to change our destiny

And in that dance we sparked a dream come true

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You taught me steps to see those rough times through

Yet as I stumbled oft my heart told me

Soft were those moments I would drift with you

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You guided me to see a world anew

Those hours spent to mold those two called we

And in that dance we sparked a dream come true

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There in the dawn of moonlight’s special hue

Our mist was drawn that all the world could see

Soft were those moments I would drift with you

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But jealous eyes weren’t happy with our view

They wanted things just like they used to be

And in that dance we sparked a dream come true

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Sweet as the flowers blessed by lovers’ dew

Were those who shared this special memory

Soft were those moments I would drift with you

And in that dance we sparked a dream come true

Cha Cha Cha - My best dance (This is not me)

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wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

Great words. I enjoyed the dance.


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Brandon Martin 4 years ago from Colorado, USA

Awesome, Nice. I wish I could dance.


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lrc7815 4 years ago from Central Virginia

Sweet! Love the photo and video. Great copliments to beautiful poetry.


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Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

Your words are beautiful. I wish I could dance also. Perhaps we all have our gifts. Yours is poetry.


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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

It is a beautiful dance when dreams come true, if that is the case . . .

Lovely video and dramatic black and white imagery ---reaching for someone who may or may not be there Voted Way Up as always

God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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btrbell 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

Beautiful! Loved it!


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eHealer 4 years ago from Las Vegas

You took my hand to change our destiny, implies that one has the power to influence the other, how beautiful and empowering!


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

This is beautiful so is the video. I have this feeling that you love to dance? Cheers


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

A beautiful villanelle, flows like soft music. Loved the dance, are you sure that wasn't you in the video? Hot or what?


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

As usual, another work of fine art.


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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

Was never much of a dancer. Could carry rhythm with no problem, and was coordinated, but thought it looked silly on me. Oh well. You present a beautiful picture. Great Job!


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

Yet another wonderful gem from you Mhatter;keep them coming.

Eddy.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. So romantic.


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PHILLYDREAMER 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

I love dancing poems. There is something about a dance between two people that has the ability to make everything around them cease to exist.


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

Cha, cha cha one of my favourite dances! Loved the poem and voted up!


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

I so enjoy watching the ballroom dance competitions and I thoroughly enjoyed this lovely ode to dancers everywhere.

Glad you stipulated it wasn't you. I already know you fence and I would not have been surprised to learn you ballroom and cha cha as well!

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