So It Was Said, So Shall It Be ( Updated )

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Could this be the way

it ends and begins?

Could your eyes render me

any more helpless

in the wind?


A fateful kiss

from inside a storm.

I could never forget it,

a fire was born .


I never had a reason

to believe this was real.

You never told me

that I was awake…

I made a mistake,

threw it away.

God, not again,

please not today.


Beauty hides in the shadows

unveiling revelations.

I unraveled a nightmare.

Yet you dare

to stay here in this world

that ended long before.


Floating in a jagged ocean.

Drawing blood

with every fluid motion.

Collapsing the lungs.

Fear can be so persuasive.

I waited for you.

Your end is belated.


So it was said,

so shall it be.


Roaming freely

in undetermined fashion.

Connecting the dots

to fulfill untamed passion.


Obsession was never so innocent,

so dangerously well-intended.

I would have done anything to defend it.

To send it

far beyond anything

you could have imagined.

Into the depths,

into the caverns.



© copyright Ben D.A 2011

Comments 15 comments

ralwus 5 years ago

One day, many years from now; long after I am gone, you shall be among stars in literature. Keep it up and pain, death, love breaks, will make you better. We all need storms to survive. Some just can't understand that and are lost. I think you are on the right path son. Peace and ever learning to you. Charlie, rated up and beautiful


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee Author

acaetnna - I am shocked and very pleased to hear that "everyone is talking about me"??? I really didn't know that word was going around haha. Thank you very much for that comment, and for following me :]


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

I forgot to say what a beautiful choice of picture too!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

I popped over here to find out what everyone is talking about: a new outstanding writer. You truly are and this is such a passionate, inspirational poem and you clearly have so much talent. Poetry is a way of releasing our innermost thoughts and emotions. Your words are music to my ears. I am so pleased that I found you.


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Nellieanna 5 years ago from TEXAS

You are real. Make no mistake about it.


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee Author

Phoenix - interest...lol. I have a 60's soul huh? I'll remember that ;]

Thank you!


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee Author

Sligo - thanks for all your support :]

Randy - This wasn't written directly after a heartbreak, but heartbreak is a lingering, and contributing factor in many of the things I write and feel. Thanks very much

Saddle - I am very happy and honored by everything you, and others have been telling me lately. It means the world to me. Thanks for being here to boost my confidence


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saddlerider1 5 years ago

Ben you are a very passionate writer. Continue to let it flow from your heart and soul, you have many followers reading and watching you grow.

Bring it forth young man and the soul will heal itself with each write. I agree with sligobay about being astounded by how much you have written in such a short period of time. Bravo.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean

I like you Ben, write because I must. Another good one. Did someone break your heart then?


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sligobay 5 years ago from east of the equator

I am astounded by all you've accomplished in a single week.

Keep up the great work.


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee Author

Emotions being stuck inside is a terrible feeling

I NEED release, in this form, otherwise I would be even more insane

Thanks very much for that comment :]


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Elizabeth99 5 years ago from Milwaukee, WI

You are a truly amazing writer. I feel a connection with your writing, it is so beautiful and full of emotion. If only I could write half as well as you, all my emotions wouldn't be stuck inside me. :) Very good!


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

When reality seems too much like a dream, is it real? Can one ever really know? they say all good things come to an end, so it must be so.

Obsession can cut like a knife when you confuse it with love.


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winepress 5 years ago

Nice pic, clear ...setting the mood while my mind takes me wide and afar.

Thanks for sharing.

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