Solo--Sail in Storm

I sail in storm---lightning, hails, and waves

Dragging me through edge...for I near death---no one be heard my cries

Dark clouds churn and twine to monstrous nature made---swallowed me alive

To I left lonely in thicken mist


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bearnmom 4 years ago from Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania

This is too close to home right now but wonderfully written. I applaud the mood you have captured of a sailor's inner being during storms.

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ImKarn23 4 years ago

Brrrrrr...definitely NOT my idea of the best way to go! Maybe if the water were

awesome vivid imagery, Chanroth!

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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Wonderful poem you wrote so well.

Voted up and beautiful, Joyce.

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mlittle 4 years ago

That was very deep, and dark I like your ideas

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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York

This touches many emotions and some fears I would imagine. Lonely is the loneliest word...beautifully done.

Voted up.

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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

A sailor's greatest dilemma. Churning dark seas and stormy skies. Well written.

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chanroth 4 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi everyone, thank you very much for reading, commenting, and voting. I appreciate it so much. Your comment mean so much to me! Lots of blessing! Cheer! :)

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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

don't worry there is always someone out there...

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