Some Luck Is Better Than… Well (limerick)

Each night game of lotto I’d play

Till finally luck came my way

Although just a token

For me luck had spoken

The machine was broken that day


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

You are, indeed, a winner!


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sweethearts2 4 years ago from Northwest Indiana

If you didn't have bad luck, you wouldn't have any luck. Just saying, you got lucky with this winning limerick.


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eHealer 4 years ago from Las Vegas

Hey Mhatter, looks like the luck I always have in any kind of gambling! I gave up a long time ago. Great limerick, as usual, you are a very creative guy! Voted up!


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coffeegginmyrice 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

Hehehe! Winning that easy, eh!


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lrc7815 4 years ago from Central Virginia

Great job, rotten luck.


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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

Mh -

The numbers that came up that night

didn't match those he'd believed right

exhaled relief

instead of grief

try again tonight he just might.

Great job, sir! Enjoyed!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

hahaha used to try my luck with lotto too..when i won, (well only 3 numbers)..all the outlets are closed because of heavy rains.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

The Lord works in mysterious ways! another gem.


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LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

Lol, lol, wonderfully funny!! Enjoyed it, MH..... Keep it up :)


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

A great limmerick and thanks for sharing.

Eddy.


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Redberry Sky 4 years ago

Love it as always, mhatter99, you keep making me giggle :)


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

Lotto machines never works for me!


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

If I'm sad, I know how to cheer up my self: Reading your limericks!


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MarleneB 4 years ago from Northern California, USA

Ha! For me, the machine is always broken. So funny. I really enjoyed it.


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

Always look forward to your limericks! Can't loose with a broken machine!!


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b. Malin 4 years ago

Cute and this Poem/Limerick, is a Winner!


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wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

That's one way to hang on to your money. Very Funny.


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jhamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

Always entertaining and I am in need of a little cheering this evening. Thank you. Jamie


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

Poor guy - must be named Lucky.


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suzettenaples 4 years ago from Taos, NM

Great limerick! At least you can't loose any money! LOL These are so entertaining and creative!


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

And it happens!


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Anthony Binks 4 years ago from Northern Ireland

Crikey, that would be my luck right there... Another good one.

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