Something In The Wind (tanka)

Something in the wind

Brushing across the flowers

How timeless a scene

Now rushing to this moment

The memory of a kiss

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DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Tender, soft memories of love's faded kiss.

Beautiful, as always, Martin.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

This is beautiful and gentle, Martin. I can just imagine the breeze of a kiss brushing the petals of the flowers.

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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

A lovely, sensitive poem. You write beautiful poetry with great imagery.

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kj force 3 years ago from Florida

Mhatter99....Spring is in the is Love...beautiful tanka....

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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

The wind blew your wonderful words to me. Enjoyed.

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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

So much said in so few words. Have a wonderful day Martin and keep them coming..


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Very beautiful Martin...

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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

And long may it last!

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