Poem. Sometimes you/I just need a Huge Hug

Sometimes my poetry is deep,

depends on my mood,

and the secrets I keep.

Sometimes my mood goes away,

drawn out by the pen,

with the words that I say.

Sometimes darkness comes down,

an image of doom,

turns my smile to a frown.

Sometimes my heart seems to cry,

tears drip in blood,

yet my spirit flies high.

Sometimes I’m unable to ask,

words in a scramble,

becomes such a task.

Sometimes my work is a drain,

the title may put you off,

or the content cause you pain.

Sometimes life can't always be joy,

although I smile when I can,

when its hard to get by.

Sometimes you can't see the light,

covered by a mist of despair,

while trying to make everything al-right.

Sometimes I blame my Bipolar,

its like living in the dark,

when I desperately need solar.

Sometimes still waters run deep,

beyond the depth of my soul,

and the memories I keep.

Sometimes my life seems so calm,

upbeat and happy,

far away from the harm.

Sometimes when I find the time,

my pain onto paper,

I release with a rhyme.

Sometimes all I request,

is a little bit of love,

to help me become my best.


Thankyou..............

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Mark Psychedlic 4 years ago from Birmingham UK Author

TThankyou......,{{hugs}}


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toys-everywhere 4 years ago from That little rambunctious spot in the back of your mind :)

Awwwhh, I feel all warm and fuzzy ^-^


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Mark Psychedlic 4 years ago from Birmingham UK Author

Thankyou Rachel for your lovely comments (hugs)


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toys-everywhere 4 years ago from That little rambunctious spot in the back of your mind :)

Hugs are so lovely, indeed, and they do wonders for one's mind and mental issues; I wish I could get more :''( But I enjoyed reading this amazing poem. Voted up, and beautiful.


~*Jlr*~ 4 years ago

Wonderful xx hugs(:


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Mark Psychedlic 4 years ago from Birmingham UK Author

Sorry it's awkward using my smart phone to enter text as the keypad is quite small and my thumb to large! So I end up hitting more letters at the same time...


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Mark Psychedlic 4 years ago from Birmingham UK Author

TThankyou ,,{{hugs}}


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suzettenaples 4 years ago from Taos, NM

What a beautiful expression! Yes, we all need a hug as you describe above, once in a while. I enjoyed reading this and I wish you many huge hugs in your life!


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Fiddleman 4 years ago from Zirconia, North Carolina

Great write and a lot of truth. Sometime a good old bear hug goes a long way to making one feel better.


Sunnie Day 4 years ago

I understand..Sometimes when I write something sad, someone may think something is wrong but we can draw from many areas for inspiration..Hope you have a great day.


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Mark Psychedlic 4 years ago from Birmingham UK Author

thankyou sunnie i just think my usual poetry is dark and deep and im not always miserable just wanted to explain to my followers and readers that I have 2 sides to my persona.


Sunnie Day 4 years ago

Thank you Mark,

Such a deep poem with much meaning and heart.

Sending you a big hug this morning!

Sunnie

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