Poem: Spiralling dust

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Love me

Kill me

Take me to Hell

Take me to Heaven

As long as it is forever

If death is the neutrality of feelings

Then I'd rather be dead

Than know nothing

Live

Cry

Die

Why?

Chanting a hymn

Wanting to sing a ballad

Being with you

Wanting to be with him

Happy

Sad

Sometimes being bad

Almost going mad

And wishing to be dead

To be dust

To be something

Wanting someone to trust

And just feel like flying...

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shamelabboush 4 years ago

Truly a very nice poem there.


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algarveview 4 years ago from Algarve, Portugal Author

Hello, thank you for reading and commenting. I'm very glad you liked it. All the best! :)


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alocsin 4 years ago from Orange County, CA

Quite a deep poem -- I believe it's about love transcending death? Voting this Up and Beautiful.


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algarveview 4 years ago from Algarve, Portugal Author

Hi, Alocsin, actually it's sort of a fight against being scared and lost, it's about trying to have some certainty in this world, whatever it may be and to hold on to something, instead of feeling adrift. Love can be a sort of certainty, that's why love is so important and it can be a way to find ourselves and to stop feeling scared or threatened. Thanks for reading, commenting and voting. :)


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Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

Deep writing which I loved reading. You are highly talented with expressing sincere emotions and I enjoy your work. Voted up, awesome, and interesting :)


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algarveview 4 years ago from Algarve, Portugal Author

Hello, Olde Cashmere, thanks a lot for your kind words, I really appreciate them, and also for stopping by, reading, commenting and voting! All the best and have a nice night... :)

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