Spring Morning - Poem

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Spring Morning


The sun shines bright

But the cool of the night

Still clings to the morning air


The rustle of leaves

Signals a breeze

That chills my bones standing there


The glimmering dew

Kisses flowers anew

And blankets the grasses with care


While birds in flight

Sing songs of delight

And the sweetest of smells fill the air.


It’s the start of a day

And this joy fades away

As the world quickly fills with care


But just let me stay

Till the dew fades away

And burdens, I too, must bear.


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Nellieanna 6 years ago from TEXAS

Very pretty, miss_jkim. It captures the early morning freshness of just such a scene. Your lines ". . .the cool of the night Still clings to the morning air" arouses that exact feel of it! It's such a wonderful time of day and of year!


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miss_jkim 6 years ago Author

Spring mornings are my favorite time of the year. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it.


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Pratonix 6 years ago from Asia

A very sweet poem. I like the lines:

"the cool of the night/

Still clings to the morning air"

I noticed that you punned on the word 'care'.

Hope you will visit my poems too.


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miss_jkim 6 years ago Author

Thank you for your kind words. I will be happy to visit your poetry.


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Pratonix 6 years ago from Asia

Miss Kim, I'm missing your visit to my poems! :)


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Pratonix 6 years ago from Asia

Miss Kim, I'm missing your visit to my poems! :)


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miss_jkim 6 years ago Author

So sorry Pratonix,

I will stop by. I've been very focused on a particular project I've been working on. Thank you for your visit to my post.


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D.A.L. 6 years ago from Lancashire north west England

Hi nice to meet you, as a naturalist I really enjoyed this beautiful hub. Thank you.


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miss_jkim 6 years ago Author

Thank you D.A.L., I love the outdoors and all it's beauty.


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epigramman 6 years ago

..there are no burdens here for me - just the pure bliss of a reader who is moved by your words!


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miss_jkim 6 years ago Author

Thank you epigramman, I'm glad you enjoyed this post.

Your words of praise continue to humble me.


ralwus 6 years ago

Hello and welcome to HP. Thanks for the wonderful comment you left me. I like the beat and rhyme here. I could hear the birds and feel the morning air. Lovely. yes. CC


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miss_jkim 6 years ago Author

Thank you ralwus,

I am honored that you have read, and commented so kindly on my poem.


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glowingrocks 5 years ago from New York

Nice!


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miss_jkim 5 years ago Author

Thank you glowingrocks.


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Kamalesh050 18 months ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

Very sweet & Beautiful !

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