Spring Tribute(Haikuish approach)

Haiku


Winter's coat is shed,

Its whitened locks are all gone.

As warm sun greets dawn,

A warbler sings its happy song.


Flowers twirl about,

to breezes, giving a shout.

Announcing truth, lifts hearts,

Reminding each, we are a part.


Lifting heads in glee,

Tomorrow brighter to be.

Rains are sure to come,

As the Honey bees all hum.



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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

Beautiful yet sad. SF is still struggling to get our bees back.


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Angelo52 3 years ago from Central Florida

This is a nice poem. It expresses your thought well. However, it is not a haiku. I like to write haiku and this does not follow the haiku form.


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

I just really love spring, and your lovely haiku tribute to spring!

God bless, Faith Reaper


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whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States Author

Thanks for stopping in, and blessings to you. whonu


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kathyjones1952@at 3 years ago from Jasper, Alabama

Beautiful poem :)!!!!


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whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States Author

Thank you much for stopping by. whonu


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Ah, yes, the throes of nature. All of these things are in my heart of hearts, and you captured it perfectly.


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whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States Author

Thanks for stopping by my friend,aviannovice. whonu


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kathyjones1952@at 3 years ago from Jasper, Alabama

Spring is also my favorite season, Faith Reaper :)!


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SilentReed 3 years ago from Philippines

Sadly, where I live

two seasons, the wet and dry

Spring, briefly I glimpse

from your lovely Haiku tribute


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whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States Author

Glad you stopped by my friend. whonu


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whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States Author

Let's relish in the Spring and absorb its warmth. whonu

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