Star Dancers (poem)

He searches for his love into the night

She calls to him mid flowers’ gentle scent

He answers with the dreams of sheer delight

She leads to wonders of a time well spent

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He reaches forth to hope to take her hand

She promises forever does exist

He hears her song and tries to understand

She casts a kiss they vanish in a mist

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The days go by in emptiness and tears

Some sit and wonder where their hopes now lie

Who now would light the path from all their fears

Who now would turn their wishes toward the sky

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For there we were now dancing mid the stars

To prove there never was a love like ours

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AudreyHowitt 3 years ago from California

This feels sad to me Martin--and that took me by surprise a bit


Vincent Moore 3 years ago

Tis a sad piece, two lovers meet between the starry night. To share their hopes and dreams and in the end eternal bliss. I felt your words and that's important. Voted up and shared.


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janshares 3 years ago from Washington, DC

Sounds like being awakened from a lovely dream. It's always hard to return to that dreamy moment of bliss.


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Melancholy, especially coupled with that song. Aw.

Voted up +++ and sharing.

God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Oh to dance among the stars.. I know you have.. blessings my friend

debbie


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Keep on dancing, Martin, no matter where you are.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful, beautiful! The video swept me away...


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

So good thanks!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. So lovely. Sigh...true love. Passing this on.


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web923 3 years ago from Twentynine Palms, California

Yes the feeling really found it's way out. Sad but beautifully done!


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shiningirisheyes 3 years ago from Upstate, New York

I stunning and mystical waltz between two star crossed lovers in the night sky.

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