Stardust (poem)

Did stardust exist before our eyes met

So funny the things I just can’t recall

I wonder if world existed at all

But song in the air I’ll never forget

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It sang to my heart let pale reason fall

And enter a realm where dreams never set

It’s just passed this kiss yet far passed regret

Where wishes are free and senses enthrall

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Then time held its breath to moment so dear

As eyes spoke the words of lovers so new

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Then flowers enchanted this passing so near

As stars up in heaven gathered to view

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Then all I once knew would soon disappear

As stardust like rain proclaimed I love you

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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

Mh - this is such a very lovely poem - so magical, and the video is perfect and enchanting. Voted Up awesome and beautiful In His Love, Faith Reaper


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lrc7815 4 years ago from Central Virginia

Another beauty.


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Valleypoet 4 years ago

A nice write...a new love....loved the first stanza especially...wondering if anything existed before the lovers met...great line:-))


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Janhorner 4 years ago

What a beautiful hub. Just love the first image; those fabulous clothes; such class! Nat King Cole; brought up with this music! Just fabulous and voted up.

Jan


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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

Mh -

Great one, sir! Romance to enhance. Loved it!


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Bravo - One of my favorites from you!


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Excellent!


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Another masterpiece from HP's poet !


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Nat Amaral 4 years ago from BC Canada

A lovely hub. Quite a romantic piece. Beautiful.


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

You are so romantic.. and the poem so beautiful.. Every poem I read you write I think it only gets better.. Love to read your poems.

hugs to you

Debbie


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

I loved this as i always enjoy reading your beautiful words of unrequited love...


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heavenleigh707 4 years ago from The Invincible Heart of Neverland

Thank you for this! Gorgeous words, beautiful song...


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Just beautiful the words, pic and video. Passing this on.


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

i even love the word 'stardust'...it's just...sexy, for some reason - as is the picture, and the poem!


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

Briliant!!!


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

Beautiful!!

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