Stargazer – Peachy’s Back Seat - a Love Story

Her fingertips across mine

They crawled gently in my hand

Tingles rising my spine


So close, I breathed her scent

I dunno what I was doin then

I finally

looked at her..

and I don’t wanna look at her..

Stacey grasped my head

Her lips glossing mine

Before I look away again…

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Monday seemed like a whole week. At least that was my first thought when I woke up. But really I was lying. Coz I could smell her lavender scent on me. Her bubblegum cherry lip gloss lingered on my lips. Stacey. I uttered without a sound.


It was already 3 pm. Obviously, I was the last one who got up. I found Peachy in her kitchen eating like a cow. “If for another five minutes and you’re still not up, I’d think you had sex last night.” She greeted me.


“You’re still drunk I think.” I said assuming casualness. Did Peachy see Stacey and me last night on the porch? I thought.

“Where’s Stacey?” I asked when I grabbed a bagel.

“She drove home to get her things. We’re going to the beach. We’re leaving tonight, Sleepy Jewel.” She said as if it was only a reminder.


I knew we had plans to go to the beach this month but I didn’t know it’d be tonight. I supposed it’s perfect because now Stacey would be with us. Besides, Peachy could take us anywhere anytime coz she’s got the Blacks. She’s got this Black and White themed condo unit and it has twins somewhere else . Got that fabulous black Audi. And that frickin Black Card. Ow, I wonder if Blackberry has given her a loyalty award.


I was about to finish my chicken pasta when Peachy opened the oven. “Wow, choco muffins!” I cheered savoring the muffinness aroma. She snatched a bite and left one on my plate. She hurried to the doorway. “Where you goin?” I called.

“Shower. Wanna join me and save some water?” She teased.

“No, I want these muffins.” I LOLed.


Peach and I were crazy besties. You must know that by now since you’re reading my Stargazer series. This is like the sixth one right? lol If you know, means you’re enjoying it..er loving my series and I thank you blazingly. So anyway, Peachy left me and went grocery-shopping. I packed up my things while she’s gone then showered then read some of my crush’s poetry while waiting for the two ladies. In the middle of a poem, Stacey crossed my mind. Flashback of last night has closed my eyes and swung me to trance…


I was brought back to room 908 when I heard some giggles. The girls were back. “Let’s go, Jewel.” Peachy hollered in. After some eight footsteps or so, Stacey embraced me. Her scent…yummier than vanilla. “Feels like I missed you so much.” She whispered to my ear.

“Likewise.” I told her. We then proceeded to the car.


Peachy was driving smoothly just like her mellow music. One of the best things about being on a car on a late night trip is listening to mellow music and watching the bokeh lights outside the window. I was sitting at the back seat, Stacey on the left side. I don’t wanna look at her coz I might lose myself again…So I tried to stick my gaze outside the car’s window. She switched a position. I looked at Peachy casually feeling my neck stiffed. Stacey’s high wedges almost touching mine now. I stretched out my arms hinting to nap. She moved closer to me. I thought she would snuggle down and sleep with me. But she just sat there…drooling over me. So close that our perfume mixed together. So close that I couldn’t think of anything else except one of the best things about being on a car on a late night trip…


Her fingertips across mine

They crawled gently in my hand

Tingles rising my spine


So close, I breathed her scent

I dunno what I was doin then

I finally

looked at her..

and I don’t wanna look at her..

Stacey grasped my head

Her lips glossing mine

Before I look away again…

Peachy was driving smoothly and I couldn’t remember what music was playing or what was she thinking. All I cared was Stacey…driving me insane. Her kisses were wild fire flaming all my engines. At that moment I knew I’d kiss what she leaks…


Peachy pulled over the car. I was kinda expecting she’d leave us or give us time or tease us and we all laugh it all off. But she unstoppably opened the door and kissed Stacey. Stunned, Stacey smiled at her and asked what was that for. “I wanna know what Jewel’s lips taste like.” She said grinning at me.


Stacey stared at me smiling like crazy. I looked at her…and I wanna look at her…coz then I found myself.


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Astra Nomik profile image

Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Oh wow. This is just totally awesome... I am so familiar with so many parts of this... why do I feel I know everyone, Fehl? LOL. Yes, this is fantastic. Oh Jewel is so kissable and amazing. You shine baby. I love this... and I am delighted I read this ...

I'm going to read it again now... Mwaaaaahhh. I love you Fehl. You take my breath away. :)


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

These three in the car together... I love this. They are always the best of friends.... :) Room 908.... hmmmmm.... Hehehe.... :)


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Someone's dream inspired me to make this one. hehe And my reality is mixing in with the story, I cant help it. :) I love you too,babe. Mwah!


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Oh Fehl this just pulls me along... I am a fish on your hook....jumping on that hook now. LOL. Mwaaahh. :)


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

I should kiss you if I pull you :)


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Kiss me then.... I want that. :)


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

mmmhhhhh...........


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Cheeky Girl 5 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

This is so amazing, Fehl. Why does so much of this Peachy Hub sound familiar to moi? LOL! Your Stargazer is bold and glows loudly with nice flavours and scents. She has mellow music. I like her! I like all of them! Turning down that opportunity to save water in that shower...damn shame I say. LOL. I think when the next time Peach drives the girls, have Jewel sit up front. I think Peachy would definitely want to kiss her. It's pretty obvious they have a thing for each other. But would Stacey like it...hmm? Heh! Okay, I am wrapped up in this waaaaaay too much! LOL!

Now if you'll excuse me I have some chocolate muffins to take out of the oven...

Stargazing...StarBlazing. You rock the Hubs, Fehl. I think I am hooked too! Can ya hook me there, babe? LOL. XOXOXOX


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Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

Amazingly Real Fehl.;)


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Hi, Muf-Muf! LOL Coz it was sparked from your dream. OMG (oh muffin gosh) you wanna shower with Peach? LOL Uhm next time have Jewel sit up front? OK.. Would Stacey like it? Hmm let’s see what she has to say :) I want her in my lap.. LOL..now I’m talking Fehl here not Jewel. Hehe

Oh jeez you’re baking muffins now? You teasing me, babymuff!

Thank you. I’m so glad you loved this. :)

Aw you’re hooked too? Um If I hook you, should I kiss you then? LOL XOXOXO

Hi Prof. A! Congrats again.. :) Thank you so much.


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Oh wow... the whole cast of this hub... this film... just spilled out on to the comment boxes... so cool... Fehl you are switching characters honey... Heh. Mwaaaahhhh. Stacey would totally approve Jewel riding "shotgun". Heh.

Oh wow, Cassy is really getting into this. :)

My cup overflows again... Heh. This hub is sexy. :) XOXOXX


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Hehe nah, people have no idea. LMAO Oh wow, Stacey riding shotgun..Uhm can we get out of here now pleaze.. :p Mwah!

She is. hehe Muf-Muf is baking more muffins. LOL

The 3 are sexy.. XOXOXO


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Hehehe... this hub is hot as anything. More muffins going in to the oven as I speak. LOL. We are so funny. :) Mwaaaahh. Okay, where's my skateboard? 3 skateboards maybe? LOL. XOXOXO


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

wow beginning of another great "threesome" hehe sweet and sexy and all things a-blaise! (ablaze) lol


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

I crave for anything hot tonight. The frickin typhoon is still here :c She's really baking muffins, hun? Mwaahh back! Wow skateboards.. I miss skateboarding.. LOL XOXO

Nikki yo! That's so funny! I thank you blazingly :) I want your Murder part 4..


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

You fascinate me. !! l just love your descriptive way of writing. Like l´m there with you.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you, Dim. Your comments always make me smile. :)


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I just had to sneak back for another read. I love this hub. Oh wow Nikki mentioned threesome...this could end up with all three of them in the back seat and nobody driving. LOL. Warm muffins sound like they will quench the appetite. LOL. I am so funny today, Fehl. XOXOX


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

hehe that's why the Peachy Muff had to pull over. LOL I kinda fell asleep in a muffin bed last night and it's about lunch time in London.. I always have this crazy appetite.. LOL We are so funny today, CattyCath. Mwah!


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

You are a great poet and storyteller.I found you when you found me. And now I'm beginning to love your writing.


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you so much for the great comments here in my hubs and my blog site. Means a lot and boosts me to write more. I love your writing stuffs too.


kimberlyslyrics 4 years ago

kiss me kiss me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

man you can write

so going up up up!

kimberly


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

*kiss*

lol

you're awesome Kim


kimberlyslyrics 4 years ago

yo blaise not as much as you

wooohoooo

loving great writers here, it's so motivating

thank you


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lionel1 4 years ago

blaise25, I love your hub posts and this is a fantastic hub post. Much thanks. Cool.


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

we both rock Kim :D thank you xx

Lionel thank you so much for not missing any of my hubs. :) *hugs*


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I love the comments here so much. ^_^


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

I love you, babylove ^_^


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epigramman 4 years ago

...hottest hub of all time - so says the epi-man - and the comments are even hotter ........

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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

I love the Epi-man! When they say best poets, Colin is on the first line :) We love you sexy lake Erie boy! xx


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Wow... I love poetry and I love poets. Such amazing writing and with such passion... Heh. I love that "babylove". LOL. Mwaaaahh. I love the comments in this hub. Your hubs have "Hotness". It's official. Heh. Mwaaaaaahhh. Love you pumpkin. :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you, babe. You add the 'hotness' in my hubs LOL *carving 'babylove' in your pumpkin ;)

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