Still She Dreams (poem)

And still she dreams off into night

What shapes this hope which holds her sight

The streams that flow were once delight

Gone is the one who held her tight

And still she dreams

And still she dreams

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What does she see in nothing there

What secret wish commands the air

What whispered spark now holds her stare

Just why he left she’s unaware

Amid her streams

And still she dreams

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Fair princess searching realms of why

She searches as her flowers die

Just emptiness to hear her cry

He didn’t even say goodbye

And so it seems

And still she dreams

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He’s there to hold her in his arms

His kisses take the place of harms

What he made cold his tears now warms

To bring her back to all his charms

Tomorrow gleams

And still she dreams


Comments 21 comments

chrisinhawaii 4 years ago

That was nice. I'd say something more profound, but I'm afraid I'm not much of a sophisticated poetry/lit kind of guy.

But I know that I like it! Voted up and shared with my FB friends. =)


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Voted awesome and up. This was so well done and very deep.


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Rosemay50 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

This is simply beautiful, sad but beautiful and the video compliments your words.

Awesome


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

So Bittersweet and beautiful. This stirred some memories.


Lakepoet 4 years ago

Very sad, but not without hope, a great piece of writing


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Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

Touching and emotional writing, this was a superb poem with a lot of depth. Voted up, shared, and beautiful :)


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Gottabegod 4 years ago from Southern USA

Voted up, beautiful and awesome! Great poem with much feeling. I could actually 'hear' her sighs as she dreamed! Loved it!! God bless!


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lorlie6 4 years ago from Bishop, Ca

Gorgeous photos, poetry and sentiment. Thanks so much!.


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Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

Deeply emotional poem. Very beautiful. Voted up.


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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

Love it! Very emotional


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

Beautiful! Voted up!


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Wonderful poem, I could hear her crying.

Voted up and beautiful, Joyce.


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RBJ33 4 years ago

A touching piece of writing - well done hatter so mad


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Profoundly beautiful..Thank you..


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

truly beautiful, M! it touched me..


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. This really warms the heart.Love the picture and video. Passing this on.


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

wow this is so beautiful... gypsy said it was a beautiful poem and she is right

voted up and awesome and beautiful and everything..

Debbie


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Diane Woodson 4 years ago from Evansville, Indiana

You are a gifted as a poet and I hope there is a market for this because this poem is priceless, yet worth so much in the hearts of those who read it. Beauty and speechless now.


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epigramman 4 years ago

...love this title Sir - and the words which follow.

You also have a BA in something else - writing great poetry - and I have a music/cinema group on FB called LET'S TALK MUSIC OR CINEMA that you are invited to join if you are so inclined - lake erie time ontario canada 1:23am


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

Made me want to cry, but it is really beautiful.


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IsadorasThought 4 years ago

Feels very gothic to me. Darkly beautiful.

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