Stonehenge I Became ......

Poetic Explanation.....

Just like so many granite piers standing
poetically braced against any
feelings at all
Yes I became Stonehenge .....Or it
became me
self preservation
I suppose
And yet ....was it not my choice
as if looking out at the mass's
somehow gave me hope.......
And Hope .....
there was none
I should
have ended up in jail or worse
Yes .....those boys who become like
stone are never right again
Never .......
And yet , I can say without hesitation
none whatsoever .........
Once a stone
always a stone
And so ....forgive my haunting stares
It's just the echoes within
that plague me yet
Some sound like stones rolling
downhill and bouncing
one to another

Comments 14 comments

Sunnie Day 5 years ago

Wow Horseback..this was really my mind thinking..Was the stone always there or did it take years to create this harden stone like structure..Winds and rain pushed on its core..sort of like us..we were not born has a way of making us like stones, created from lifes hard knocks..tearing down the hard surface is not easy but it can be done over time..I would think love can chissle this stone little by little until there is a sparkling gem inside..Self presererance..a strange takes on so many differnt forms..some a stone others a hand full of jelly like substance..only wanting to be more like a stone..very very profound..sorry to go on so..Thank you..


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Hi Sunnie Day , You are right about it all! No one is born a stone , I don't know ,some children internalize and some extravert it all ! I went in! No one can do that for long , but I tried. No longer though now, I can be a babbling fool if I have a beer or two! lol. You "go on" just fine ! by the way......:-}

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FitnezzJim 5 years ago from Fredericksburg, Virginia

Love lost, love betrayed, friendship betrayed, trust betrayed, betrayal by family, real-life lessons in hypocrisy, knowing unknown truths; any of those might drive a person to a facade of stone, and all most certainly will if they happen too close together. No one is born that way. But then again, that's life.

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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

FitnezzJim, Yes , I think that some men become like stone in life experiences , but a beginning of stone is perhaps the roughest on the sychy....Be well my friend :-}

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Cardisa 5 years ago from Jamaica

Ahorseback, you don't fool me one bit! You are no are my Ahorseback, my wonderful poet!

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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Mahua , Thank you kind friend ! I'm glad ......:-}

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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Cardisa , Once long ago in the beginning , yes I was like stone . Now though....A romantic fool! I should have known that you were wiser to my attemps to show how macho I am ! He He ......You are truely a sweet person!

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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

I like to sit and listen to rocks tumble down a cliff. Were you doing that when you wrote this? Somehow i think of you as a loner who would enjoy the solitude... Enjoyed..

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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

Well thanks to whoever it was who chiseled away that stone. Or we might not be here now enjoying your poetry.

Macho Ha Ha he who runs for the door when confused by a woman ....:-)

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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Always Exploring. Me too ,people forget that there are so many simple wonders in this world all of them in nature!......the next time you hear the stones be reminded of friends!.....:+}

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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Rosemay , You just think its funny dont you! Women sure do enjoy that power over man , No ? You just wait . Its not nice to pick on us inferior creatures!.....:-}

jami l. pereira 5 years ago

Stone? ummm... beautiful wishful thinking here Mr .ahorseback , maybe in a differant life or something , but you my friend are a true poet and one that is as tender as a ...(trying not to say flower) ok ..tender as sandalwood with its lovely manly man scent :) You craft your poetry beautifully and im sure you have a heart to match, although your a "stones throw" away from being a little bit of a romantic nut , in which ALL of "us' women seem to Love :)voted up ,awesome and beautiful because it is just that!:)

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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Jami , Hah ! Ok you got me , Thank you in humbling me ! Im a stones throw away huh ? That hurts Jami .He he ......Thank you .....:-}

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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia

Simply wonderful

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