Sudden End

Like rusted iron sliding across dirty granite, the pain.

Slow, deliberate, relentless.

Stop. End.

Alive I feel it. Crushing me, wringing me out, like the sinew on the slaughterhouse floor, sluiced into the drain.

If only for a moment, to be as it was.

What was real, to end this way? To go away as quick as it came.

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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California

"What was real, to end this way? To go away as quick as it came."

the only thing I know that leaves as quick as it came is money. lol

Short and heart wrenching!!

bella


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MordechaiZoltan 5 years ago Author

Thank you for reading it, i wish it was money.......

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