Summer Storm (Love Affair)

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The sensual decadence

A hot steamy storm

Melts everything away

From the earth

They together can play

The rain pours and washes

Lightening and thunder

Strike just at the right time

A heated love affair

A passion filled fest

So natural

Beautiful

A sexy test



Comments 23 comments

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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Wow, a steamy sexy poem... sounds sweeping and dramatic... I love the way it glides... um, the hub I mean... :D


BigEd 4 years ago

Nice, very nice. Voted up, awesome, interesting and beautiful.


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

yeah girl you got me voting up.. loved the passion!


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debbiepinkston 4 years ago from Pereira, Colombia and NW Arkansas

Beautiful and amazing what you can convey in very few words.


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Barbara88 4 years ago from New york

Very Enticing, love it!


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DFiduccia 4 years ago from Las Vegas

... a beautiful and smoothly executed poem—the photo is perfect.

...voted up—DF


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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

My yes! Wonderful, sensual images. Up!


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

very nice, Caroline. as usual !

hope all is well , thinking of you always .

Michael


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Curiad 4 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

Very sensual, the merging of energies and spirit. The reference to nature, which is what spirit comes from!


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Minnetonka Twin 4 years ago from Minnesota

Love your romantic and steamy poem. One can only hope for that kind of relationship with a loved one. A connection that is rare and hopefully you have that with someone.


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The Frog Prince 4 years ago from Arlington, TX

Very passionate use of words.

TFP


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

I am always fearful when a storm appears, but your rendition puts a whole new meaning to a stormy love affair..Loved it..Cheers


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

What a storm! thanks


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shruti sheshadri 4 years ago from Bangalore, India

beautiful, simple and elegant. creates a great feel while reading!

voted up :)


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

mmmmmmmmmmm.....And, MMMMMMMMMM.....


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

One hot and sensual poem.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Hi Astra thank you. :)

@ Hi BigEd thank you. :)

@ Hi Frank thank you. :)

@ Hi Debbie thank you. :)

@ Hi Barbara thank you. :)

@ Hi DF thank you. :)

@ Hi XStatic thank you. :)

@ Hi Michael thank you. :)

@ Hi Curiad thank you. :)

@ Hi Minnetonka thank you. :)

@ Hi The Frog Prince thank you. :)

@ Hi Ruby thank you. :)

@ Hi Mhatter thank you. :)

@ Hi Shruti thank you. :)

@ Hi ImKarn thank you. :)

@ Hi Gypsy thank you. :)


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mckbirdbks 4 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

you have redefined thunder and lightening


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you MC :)


IntegrityYes 4 years ago

I voted up for sure.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Integrity. :)


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raciniwa 3 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

mind tickling...


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carolinemd21 3 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Raciniwa. :)

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