Shining Thoughts (a Haiku)

Setting sun, divine...
Setting sun, divine...
To give us all peace of mind...
To give us all peace of mind...
For us reminding...
For us reminding...
Hello brother moon...
Hello brother moon...
A fond creator... in tune...
A fond creator... in tune...



Fair well to the sun,

At your setting, bid adieu.

Thanks for your shining.


Hello brother moon,

You display your soulful tune.

Your silver lining.


Lonesome Loons to play,

As in their songs to convey...

Partners, combining.


Soon the dawn to light,

Shining rays escape the night.

Bright thoughts divining.


Brightest world does shine,

Providing a peace of mind.

Joyful days, finding.


Morning dawns...sun sets...

Memory never forgets.

Beauty of light, defining.







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Our souls... all spirits, binding.
Our souls... all spirits, binding.

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manatita44 15 months ago from london

Truly exquisite, Bro. I think that you have recently started, no? You seem to have a knack for this. Continue, continue ...


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whonunuwho 15 months ago from United States Author

Thank you my friend. whonu


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MsDora 15 months ago from The Caribbean

Your haiku verses are beautiful. Thanks for sharing.


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whonunuwho 15 months ago from United States Author

Thank you so much my friend. whonu


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cat on a soapbox 15 months ago from Los Angeles

Each one is lovely , and together they have such a beautiful lyrical flow.

What a treat!


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whonunuwho 15 months ago from United States Author

Thank you for your nice review my friend. whonu


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bravewarrior 15 months ago from Central Florida

By the light of the moon or the brilliance of the sun, life is good!


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whonunuwho 15 months ago from United States Author

Yes my friend and blessings. whonu


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aviannovice 15 months ago from Stillwater, OK

And may the sun shine tomorrow, too.


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whonunuwho 15 months ago from United States Author

Bless you my friend. whonu

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