Sunrise Sunset - Haiku

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Sunrise


New day beginning


Rising glorious colors


Forecast Promising


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Sunset


Nightfall to begin


In the wings darkness awaits


As the sun goes down

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Raymond Bureau 3 years ago

Never been to Dunedin, but we have resorts all over Florida's coasts.


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Just Ask Susan 3 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Raymond, The second picture above was taken close to Dunedin Florida. My mother in law has a place there.


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Raymond Bureau 3 years ago

We have a vacation club resort in Marathon. That's where we saw the sunset. We also drove to Key West while down there. What a beautiful place! I have written about why we like our vacation club so much.


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Just Ask Susan 3 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Raymond, I've been Florida many times but have yet to visit the Keys. I would love to though.


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Raymond Bureau 3 years ago

I had heard that the Florida Keys had the most beautiful sunsets. In 2012, my wife and I got to see it there, and we agree!


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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Thank you teaches.


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teaches12345 4 years ago

There are some glorious colors in these photos. Very lovely poem, wish I could sit and view the sunset/sunrise everyday.


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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Thank you Sophia.


Sophia 4 years ago

just have to say were they haiku? PLUS i loved it


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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Lady_E, Thank you, glad you liked it.


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Lady_E 4 years ago from London, UK

Short and Sweet - I love it.

I love watching the sunrise and sunset too. :)


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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Thanks Linda. They are fun to do.


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Minnetonka Twin 4 years ago from Minnesota

Great haiku Susan. I love writing these as their short but say so much with so little. I also love the photos.


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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Sky, I enjoy writing haiku's and love the responses I get from them such as yours. Thank you so much.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

Beautiful Susan! I will love to have a Haiku teacher. The simple way in which those like you, that are, none short of professional at writing them.

The effects it has on others , it's just amazing!

It's beautiful, and touching , thief a smile off your face regardless of what you are thinking.

I guess the description that fits the most , is a prelude to beautiful Haiku.

Bless.


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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Vincent, Thank you so much dear friend.

Sue, Thank you. Today I wishing I was at the beach in Florida.

raciniwa, Thank you.


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

love the contrasting times of the day...the pictures are awesome as well...


Sueswan 4 years ago

Hi Susan,

These are wonderful. Love the pictures. So calm & serene.

Have a good evening.


Vincent Moore 4 years ago

I am going to have to start calling you the Haiku Queen. Yes indeed you are getting better with each published Haiku. Loved the photos to match the mood. Great job my talented friend. Voted Up, awesome and beautiful like you.


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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Ruby and tlpogue, Thank you both and yes I am so ready to feel that warm sun too. A few more months to go :)


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tlpoague 4 years ago from USA

I love the photos! What a beautiful poem to read on such a cold blustery day. Thanks! I am ready to go sun bathing.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful description of the sunrise and sunset, perfect pictures..Loved it Susan..


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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Cardisa, Thank you.

MM, I would be honored for you to link this haiku to your sunrise/sunset hubs. Thank you so much!


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

Absolutely fabulous Haiku's Susan, I'd like to link this to my sunrise/sunset hubs if that's ok.

Voting up, best wishes Lesley


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Cardisa 4 years ago from Jamaica

Haaaa! Such beauty in your your words as in the photos.


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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Tammy

Audrey

Hmrjmr

Capadium

drbrj

cat on a soapbox

Thanks everyone. drbj, I was actually going to add a video with the song Sunrise Sunset. Maybe I still will.


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cat on a soapbox 4 years ago from Los Angeles

nice imagery, lovely haiku!


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drbj 4 years ago from south Florida

Sunrise, Sunset. These lyrics would make a great song. Oh, wait, it is a great song. And a great haiku, Susan.


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Capedium 4 years ago from Texas.

Beautiful!


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Hmrjmr1 4 years ago from Georgia, USA

Love it!


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Beautiful Susan!


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tammyswallow 4 years ago from North Carolina

Gorgeous! I love these beautiful nature poems and photos on a bleak January day. There is nothing better. I hope you will write more original poetry. Awesome!


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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Ruchira

Deborah

Rebecca

barbergirl

Frank

RH

Thank you everyone for reading and for all the awesome comments!


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RealHousewife 4 years ago from St. Louis, MO

Now you've done it - a perfect Haiku for day or night:) lol


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

Sunset sunrise both perfect :)


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barbergirl28 4 years ago from Hemet, Ca

Very beautiful!


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rebeccamealey 4 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

Pretty Haikus and love the pictures!


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

so awesome so beautiful... you are so good at this..

bravo Susan.. always love your poems..

i voted way up

debbie


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Ruchira 4 years ago from United States

wow...awesome!

beautiful message being conveyed in simple words.

voted way way up with awesome!

You are rocking it, susan :)

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