Sunset’s Song (tanka)

When day fades away

And sunset welcomes the night

A song can be heard

In whispers warm to the heart

Of young lover's memories


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billybuc 18 months ago from Olympia, WA

I hear that song often. :)


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Vellur 18 months ago from Dubai

Beautifully expressed!


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bravewarrior 18 months ago from Central Florida

Beautiful, Martin. I can almost hear the whispers in the wind.


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The Examiner-1 18 months ago

(Shh. I will not wake anyone. It was charming Martin. I can hear the voices whispering in the wind. I voted it up, shared and pinned it.

Kevin)


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teaches12345 17 months ago

Very lovely thoughts!

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