Sweet Friendship ~haiku~

A haiku about true friendship.


Two friends holding hands

Silent prayers on their lips

Friendship never ends


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Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

Now that is a Haiku poem. Outstanding and beautiful work M. Voted up, beautiful, and awesome :) These are fun to write huh?


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

M,

Congrats on your haiku! Awesome flow and use of words. Excellent job M!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hey James..hehe thanks a lot!! I dont know if it's right or maybe too cheesy.hehe At least I've written one!

Hi J. that;s my first try of haiku..thanks for the comment..i hope it's not that bad. hehe


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

M,

Yea, I thought it was your first try! No, it was not cheesy and it was right on, abiding by all the rules. Excellent! Kudos to you M!


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My Minds Eye53 4 years ago from Tennessee

Thumbs up - far better than my first try.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

J, hehe thank you so much!! I knew I could always count on you!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

My Minds Eye53, thank you so much! :)


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jonmcclusk 4 years ago from Cinnaminson, New Jersey

I enjoy the Haiku, and this one has become a new favorite. So much power can be packed inside such a small form of poetry.


Earl 4 years ago

Lovely picture... just by looking you can imagine lots of magic.


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LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

Beautiful...... Friendship is a deep bond between people! Awesome....


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Vellur 4 years ago from Dubai

True friendship never ends, beautifully expressed.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Jon, thank you so much for the beautiful comment.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hello Earl. Thanks for stopping by and for the read.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi Lathing! Thank you much for the message!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi Nithya.thank you for appreciating!


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snowdrops 4 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

Friendship is a beautiful thing.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thanks snow :)


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

True friendship never ends...unconditional love....and you are beautiful!


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Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

Awesome Job!! Great expression of true friendship!!!


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bravewarrior 4 years ago from Central Florida

Beautiful, hopeful, innocent and full of love. Great job, Spy!


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Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

Very nice Haiku; friendship is always a treasured thing.


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

So wonderful Haiku poem . Voted up and beautiful.

Where or how did you get the the swag flowers I love it, Joyce.


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Hi M. short, sweet and to the point= Awesome !

Vote up and more !!!


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Oh, so true!


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kj force 4 years ago from Florida

unknown spy....your Haiku's are awesome...." friends never having to say words "...

pisture says it all....nice job...


Larry Wall 4 years ago

Very Good:

You seem to be mastering all forms of poetry. Keep up the good work.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Hello Spy, loved your haiku. Friendship is wonderful and should never end..


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mary615 4 years ago from Florida

Hey, I admire you for trying to write Haiku. I couldn't do it! It was sweet, I thought.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi Billy, Patty, Brave, Genna, Joyce, Kashmir, Deb, KJforce, Larry Wall, Ruby, Mary,

Big big thanks to all of you my friends. Thank you for reading and for all the wonderful messages.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. True friendships are to be treasured.


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

Beautiful haiku, friendship is so precious...

Voting up


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Unknown, simply beautiful, well done. Voting up all the way


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hello Gypsy..Lesley, and Jo.

Big thanks to you all for appreciating my haiku (first try..)


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Wonderful haiku Spy! Smile inducing as well.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you so much Beckie!


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thelyricwriter 4 years ago from West Virginia

Awesome job Unknown spy!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you friend!


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dghbrh 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

lovely Haiku....voted up and all:-)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you so much Deergha!


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carter06 4 years ago from Cronulla NSW

Short but sweet:) lot's of votes...cheers


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teaches12345 4 years ago

So sweet and it does speak of all the necessary things needed in friendship.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Carter, teaches..oh you're sweet. thank you my friends.


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CrazedNovelist 4 years ago from Hampton, GA

Too sweet unknown! Loved it! :)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi Aubrey! thank you for reading!

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