Sweet Death, Living Love

Living in Death

To love someone,

is to die.

With every breath,

and every sigh.

A new you is

reborn.

You do lose your heart,

so be warned.

It is a loss you will

not miss.

Especially when your lips,

touch in kiss.

Your two hearts now

beat as one.

It is at this moment,

new lives have begun.

Your eyes can see

each others soul.

To succeed together

is the new goal.

Yes to love someone

is to die.

Ti's the sweetest death,

and this is no lie.

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ikigaid 4 years ago from Hau'ula, Hawaii

Beautifully written! :)


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secondimage 4 years ago from From a place lost in time and space

wow, that is wonderful!! really pleased to have found your work and look forward to reading more. voted up and beautiful :)


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4elements 4 years ago Author

Thank you so very much ikigaid, and secondimage. I do love getting comments on my work, the good , the bad, and the ugly, lol. Reading them helps me grow as a writer. So I appreciate the time and comment. Blessings, peace, love, and light.


Debbie Dallas 4 years ago

Love this !! Awesome piece of work!


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Wonderful poem, voted up and beautiful.


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gregb4hope 4 years ago from El Paso TX

Nice flow of poetic reasoning having contrasting themes yet passionately harmonized together. Voted up...


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4elements 4 years ago Author

Thank you very much Debbie Dallas, Writer20,gregb4hope. I appreciate the comments and your time for rrading. Blessings


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Such a bold and unusual poem about love and death. It is about love felt at a very strong and deep level.


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4elements 4 years ago Author

appreciate the comment. This to was also bout my love. Blessings peace love and light.


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kittythedreamer 4 years ago from the Ether

Ohhh, Me likey!


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4elements 4 years ago Author

Thank you kitty dreamer appreciate the comment blessings

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