Switchblade Kisses - An Alternative Love Poem

Inspiration for This Poem

This poem was inspired by one stanza of verse I was hired to write for a client. I thought the topic of "A modern day romance/love in a street gang" a very interesting challenge and decided to write an entire poem around it.

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Switchblade Kisses

Guns and switchblades

On every street,

Gang wars rage

But love cuts deep.

Ω Ψ Ω Ψ Ω Ψ

Take squatters' rights

In abandoned buildings.

Interracial love,

And drive-by killings.

Ω Ψ Ω Ψ Ω Ψ

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Plan the hit

Before you fall.

Life in a street gang,

You must stand tall.

Ω Ψ Ω Ψ Ω Ψ

Let's play tag

With the police,

Or hide and seek,

It's war and peace.

Ω Ψ Ω Ψ Ω Ψ

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Race means nothing

On the street.

Look out for yourself,

Avoid the heat.

Ω Ψ Ω Ψ Ω Ψ

Hispanic, Asian,

Black, or White,

Who gives a shit,

All people fight.

Ω Ψ Ω Ψ Ω Ψ

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Theft and muggings

In the mall,

Sex in an alley

Against the wall.

Ω Ψ Ω Ψ Ω Ψ

You sell your body

To make a buck,

I deal in crack

And push my luck.

Ω Ψ Ω Ψ Ω Ψ

Form an alliance,

Make a pact.

I'll protect you,

You watch my back.

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Kiss me now

For life is short.

Choose your poison

Sharps or snort.

Ω Ψ Ω Ψ Ω Ψ

Is this the love

We've never known?

Both of us

From broken homes.

Ω Ψ Ω Ψ Ω Ψ

Switchblade kisses

Will do this man.

Short term pleasure

While I can.

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cheaptrick 2 months ago from the bridge of sighs

Hats off!What an effort jodah!Loved it!


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Gina Welds-Hulse 2 months ago from Rockledge, Florida

Such powerful imagery! You've captured gang life...and love...in all its street glory. Well done!


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks for reading my poem, Cheaptrick. I am so glad you love it.


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Gina, thank you for the great comment. Glad it worked. Much appreciated.


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billybuc 2 months ago from Olympia, WA

You had me with the title of the poem...after that it was just frosting on a delicious cake!


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FlourishAnyway 2 months ago from USA

Raw and fabulous


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you for the great comment, Bill. I always add a notch to my gun when I impress you.


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Hey, Flourish. I like that comment. Cheers.


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ChitrangadaSharan 2 months ago from New Delhi, India

This is so powerful!!

Your ability to weave words shines through your poem and what a wonderful first picture to complement it!

Brilliant indeed!


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

I had a feeling this was going to be special as I was writing it, but the comments so far have blown me away. Thank you Chitrangada, and glad you liked that image too.


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always exploring 2 months ago from Southern Illinois

John, your rhyming words cut like a knife. I guess the streets are poison all over the world. You were able to capture that in your real-life poetry and pictures. Bravo!!!


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Larry Rankin 2 months ago from Oklahoma

And sometimes you say I'm too dark;-)

I enjoyed the poem. It certainly made me think.

I don't ever want to be too intrusive concerning one's art, but I didn't really understand the correlation of interactial love to a violent lifestyle?

I do know Australia has had its fair share of problems with racial issues. Correct me if I'm wrong, wasn't it 1990 before you guys were completely desegregated?

Are you suggesting that interactial couples are pushed to the fringes of society where you're at? I know for years that's been the plight of homosexuals here in the states. Things are finally getting better.

As for my wife and I, we're interactial. We live in the heart of Hicksville here in Oklahoma and it's all well accepted. I'm a teacher and she's a nurse. No gang affiliation needed, lol.

Sorry I ramble. I always like to understand the climate of different places, and my family and I want to go to Australia and see the Crocs one of these days. I'd like to know we wouldn't be treated poorly.


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manatita44 2 months ago from london

Very interesting one, Bro. One with a difference, as they say. Goes to show. I never really finished Murder on the Mountain, but I wanted to add Love and intrigue.

A bit tough in some places, but I guess that is how it is. Life! Great Poem!


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Abhimanyu gaur 2 months ago from India

John, you can write a poem on any topic and you have proved this once again. I enjoyed reading this poem. The pictures also compliment the poem well.


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lambservant 2 months ago from Pacific Northwest

Interesting topic I've never been in a gang but seems you've captured it well.


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savvydating 2 months ago

You gave yourself quite a challenge and did the topic justice. It was easy to envision the lifestyle. But what a way to live---knowing each day may be your last. Nice job, Jodah.


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clivewilliams 2 months ago from Nibiru

interesting. Captured what the streets are all about.


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Cheers, Ruby. I like the pun about my rhyme :) glad you enjoyed my insight into gang life.


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The Stages Of ME 2 months ago

Jodah,

Yes, these words cut deep, but very truthful depiction of the brokenness in our world. I pray for the hearts of man. I pray for children everywhere, especially those on the streets. I pray for the light that is still very real and it will cover the darkness. Hang in there World, the streets he writes of are cold and harsh, there will be comfort one day. Hang in there!


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Dana Tate 2 months ago from LOS ANGELES

This is a powerful and strong poem.


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Hey, Larry. It is good to get an in depth comment from you. Yeah, one of my darker ones. We are a bit behind here down under as our equal treatment of our indigenous Australians and I think it was the 70s when they were allowed to vote. We have recently been struggling with some racism issues that have surfaced in sport and in regard to the Muslim situation etc but basically we are are accepting nowadays, so don't worry. One of my sons is married to a Filipino and another to an Indonesian and I have a nephew married to an Aboriginal lady...and no problems. The reference in this poem is due to most of my research involved 70s street gangs.. So that is the era it is really set in. Oh, and crocs aren't prejudice either...they'll eat anyone. In fact they prefer unwary foreigners. :)


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks, Manatita. Had to make it tough to represent the lifestyle appropriately. Thanks for the kind comment.


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you for saying that, Abhimanyu. Glad you enjoyed this.


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

I have never been in a gang either, Lori..so it's all my imagination.


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Hi Savvy. Yes, it was an interesting challenge that I enjoyed for a change of pace. Yep, a tough way to live for sure.


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks Clive. I did my best.


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks for reading, Stages of ME. Your words are spot on, and I pray that too.


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you, Dana. That is what I was aiming for. A long way from my kid's stories isn't it?


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Jackie Lynnley 2 months ago from The Beautiful South

Wow, John, very well done! You became an actor and played the part splendidly!


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks, Jackie. I think being a writer IS much like being an actor, especially if you write fiction.


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shanmarie 2 months ago from Texas

Impressive. You captured the scene well. I can clearly see it as I read. It reminds me of a modern day telling of Romeo and Juliet.


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faith-hope-love 2 months ago from Richmond, British Columbia, Canada.

Very Very Poignant and so very true. Good Work.


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Faith Reaper 2 months ago from southern USA

Wow, John, this is fabulous writing. Love the creative title, which intrigues the reader to read on. Great choice of imagery, but your words set the scene in one's mind. Seems Frank is incognito at the moment and you have given him a run for his money here, as your poem stands right up there and then some.

Maybe you can make this into some kind of series somehow?

Enjoyed the read for this Friday night.

Blessings


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suzettenaples 2 months ago from Taos, NM

Switchblade kisses-what an oxymoron and what an image. This is well done, John. I felt swept up in the gang life of the inner city; you portrayed if so well.


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Shyron E Shenko 2 months ago

John, amazing hub about

Inner city gangs

None care who it bangs

Switchblade kisses

Teeth extracted

Switchblade kisser

No longer attracted

******

Blessings my friend


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Shanmarie, I am glad I successfully conveyed a picture through the words of this poem and that you could clearly visualize it. I guess it is Romeo and Juliette in another guise.Thanks for reading.


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks faith-hope-love. Much appreciated.


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Very encouraging comment, Faith. It is a compliment having my writing compared to what Frank can produce..especially in this dark crime type genre. I'd like to make it into a series of sorts but I hadn't thought of that. Thanks for the idea. Glad you enjoyed this. Blessings back.


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks Suzette. I sure had trouble finding a suitable main image....finally stumbled on this when I was about to give up. Glad you liked the title too.


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Those are some very good additional lines, Shyron. Thanks for the read and kind comment.


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janshares 2 months ago from Washington, DC

Very original to say the least, Jodah. You gave the reader a look through a window we rarely peer into, either because we are afraid to or don't care to. Well done. Love exist everywhere, even in the darkest places. They say at the core of gangs is the need for love and a sense of belonging. Great poem, great images.


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Jan, I think you certainly explained why young people join gangs. They need a sense of belonging and what they see as a form of love. Yes, it is a side of life we don't often delve into. Thank you for the kind comment. I am glad you found this poem, and the images, enjoyable.


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Shyron E Shenko 2 months ago

Add the lines if you wish John, I give them to you.

Blessings my friend


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks, Shyron but they are your lines and they just add value to the comments.


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Faith Reaper 2 months ago from southern USA

You are so creative, John, that I know you could somehow make it into a series if you had the time...Switchblade Kisses: etc. I'm glad you like the idea of a series.

Maybe along the lines of focusing on the love between two characters and their internal struggles of not wanting to bring a child into their gang life but still having the desire to have a child ... Or just detailing daily life and one of their members killed...or fighting over territory. Well, you get the idea. Having each new poem zero in on a specific struggle or trial and ending still with love somehow LOL

Maybe it will come to fruition. If so, I know it will be amazing and I know all will enjoy reading.

Blessings


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks for sharing that idea, Faith. Sounds interesting and possible.


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herownwings 2 months ago from Oregon

What a wrenching piece. Wonderful stanzas, clipped with razor precision. Covering numerous aspects of street/gang life in mini internal vignettes was an impressive feat. I thoroughly enjoyed reading, though the content was realistically grim. Thank you for sharing. :)


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you for that very informed and encouraging critique, herownwings. I appreciate you reading and commenting.


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Nadine May 2 months ago from Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

You are a very creative writer and have a way with words. Loved it.


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Jodah 2 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks for that wonderful comment, Nadine.


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bravewarrior 7 weeks ago from Central Florida

John, this is powerful and very well written. It flows across the page and through the mind.


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Jodah 7 weeks ago from Queensland Australia Author

Hi Shauna. I enjoyed writing this poem, glad you enjoyed reading it. I appreciate that comment.


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teaches12345 7 weeks ago

What an emotional read on the topic of kisses. Your title was a draw for sure but the poem was electric all the way.


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Jodah 7 weeks ago from Queensland Australia Author

Well, thank you Dianna, that is a wonderful comment. I admit this poem was something a little different.


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mckbirdbks 6 weeks ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

Hi John - Waves of accolades pour in for this piece. Tough life on the streets. but you have done it justice.


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Jodah 6 weeks ago from Queensland Australia Author

Hello Mike. Yes, I have been blown away by most of the comments on this hub. I was pleased with it but it still surprised me.


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Vellur 6 weeks ago from Dubai

Powerful words portraying love in the dangers of the street world, great write.


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Jodah 6 weeks ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you, Vellur. Much appreciated.


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fpherj48 6 weeks ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

Jodah.....WOW! Love this. This is powerful in a very awesome way! You give the perfect image of street life & love....struggles & hardship kisses & knives. One of your best!. Paula


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Jodah 6 weeks ago from Queensland Australia Author

Paula, I love it when you love my writing :) I tried to capture the gang atmosphere as best as best I could. I must admit that I was quite proud of how this poem came together. Thanks.


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fpherj48 6 weeks ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

LOL.....Well, we all love it when someone loves our work!! That's at least 50% of our reason for this crazy passion, yes? Otherwise we could write all day and night locked in a room and stick all our work in a box!! LOL

This poem really brought me to the streets...so, obviously it's a great work.


Faith-Hope-Love 6 weeks ago

It was well put together John. I have been back to it on mre than one occasion. It portrays the gang life as it is seen through the eyes of youth. But puts it in a perspective as to cause them to pause and take stock. I find it very helpful and informative. Great Piece. Keep doing this worthwhile work. You have my support and respect. God Bless.


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Jodah 6 weeks ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you for returning to read this again, John. This came about when I was asked t write a slogan for a clothing brand that had to incorporate "gang life and love." I dearly want all my writing to make a difference and help inform and make the world a better place. The problem is getting those who need the message to read it. Feel free to use it in your ministry.


Faith-Hope-Love 6 weeks ago

The piece is very well thought out and it has increased my understanding as I relate it to experience. Keep up this good Work. In this world we have a great need for it. You are the best My Friend. Thank you and God Bless.


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lawrence01 5 weeks ago from Hamilton, New Zealand

John

Great work, the title alone drew me in, then the poem was great.

Lawrence


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Jodah 5 weeks ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you Lawrence. Much appreciated. I am about to check out your latest hub too.

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