THIS LOVE WE OWN: A POEM


A thousand sparkling rills

Could never come close to the blue of your eyes

When the phone rings, my heart thrills

Holds me in ecstatic rapture, time fliies

But then, you leave me

To dreams and reverie

Your love makes me whole

Ebbing and flowing in great tides of joy

Your laugh enthrals my soul

Destiny holds sweet sway in its ploy

But you leave me

To dreams and reverie

Our love is a golden web

That not even the Fates can break

Splendour that none can stub

For love’s own sake

But you leave me

To dreams and reverie

To show that this bond transcends distance

Time or space

Till the day we wake up from this trance

And together embrace

No, never again leave me

To dreams and reverie

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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Awesome piece. Glad to see you back again.


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Great to be back again and reading your lovely comments! Thank you aviannovice! Great to see you again! :) have a beautiful day up ahead!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Yes it's better when we love and are together than when we love and are apart. Lovely poem.Passing this on.


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JKenny 4 years ago from Birmingham, England

Simply stunning, the words, the pictures and the sense of longing. You have such a fantastic skill with words. Totally awesome. I loved it. You are such a talented writer :)


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Ebower 4 years ago from Georgia

This is lovely! I love your word choice and how it captures the feeling of true love. I voted this up and beautiful. :)


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mary615 4 years ago from Florida

Beautiful words; beautiful poem. Well done.


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Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

Lovely writing and this poem had a lot of heart in it. Beautiful Work. Voted up, awesome, and beautiful :)


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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

Being in love is heavenly and living together the moments of love is divine

And your poem. it is ecstatically beautiful


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Love is a wonderful emotion..Beautiful...


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

what a beautiful poem.. I am so glad I can read your work.

wow can I relate to your poem

blessings and sharing

Debbie


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Oh Wow! Thank you so much for your kind words and support! Wishing you a good morning!


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Thanks a lot JKenny! Yes, love brings out the best in people, especially, when your love is with someone so much better and sweeter than yourself! Thank you for your compliments too! Good morning! :)


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Thank you Ebower for your votes and lovely comments!


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Thank you so much mary615! So glad you liked it!


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Thank you Olde Cashmere so much for your votes and words! Means a lot!


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Wow! Thank you so much Rahul! I am sure I am grateful for your constant and beautiful support! Good morning!


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Isn't it? Thank you always exploring! So glad for your support!


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

So glad you can relate, thank you so much for the share! You are really a very inspiring writer and such lovely comments from you are really very pleasant and overwhelming! Thank you so much Debbie! Good morning! :)


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Thank you for such beautiful comments and also the share, Gypsee Rose Lee! Hope you have a great day ahead! :)


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Beautiful wonderfully descriptive poetry. Great style.


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Aww... thank you so much shiningirisheyes!


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epigramman 4 years ago

...to me you are love personifed in the written word - simply breathtaking I might add and poetry has a new princess - and it's you - lake erie time ontario canada 1:19am


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Oh Wow! Those are too great and beautiful words and I am not sure I deserve them, but I wish to thank you ever so much! That is so flattering and delightful! I am so very glad you liked it! Wishing you a great day up ahead, Christy! Madurai-India 2:11 p.m!


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

So very beautiful...

Voting up/awesome


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Oh wow! Thank you moviemaster!

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