TROUBLED THOUGHTS PAGE18

#18( " HAUNTING BEAUTY " )

Angels of Youth

There is a haunting beauty to loss.....

yes..... of losing ...part of the truth.

Truth of living and the costs as well

to lose someone of youth.

The child lost .... just misconception

isn't loss when there is no more.

And death too ....we never lose

children wait on a glimmering shore.

For once ... they should not say lost

only ...we'll see you once again.

Time is the only friend of death

soo long before our end.

But I will see you again my brother...

and I wonder have you aged.

There in the gardens of heaven

there where the angels rage.

I remember a boy of beauty and the

gentle curve of sneaking smiles.

Such a long straight line now

waiting in these living miles.

I will run to you first my brother

child ......so wait there just for me.

In the tears of joy that follow

the waiting will set us free.

Yes there is a haunting joy

in these many lost years .

But too......there is a reflection of

heaven ......in pools of fallen tears.

WRITTEN BY: AHORSEBACK A GREAT POET FROM HUBPAGES.COM

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COMMENT:" SPECIAL THANKS TO THE WRITER I'VE NEVER MEET IN PERSON FROM MY FAMILY & ME " !!! THIS IS MY FIRST DONATED POEM FROM THE WORLD OTHER THEN MY FRIENDS AND FAMILY. LOVE IS A GIFT AND WE SHOULD SHARE IT ALWAYS !SHARING IS CARING...

AGUSTINA GARZA ARELLANO (COPYRIGHT2010)

A DONATED POEM FROM HUBBER NAMED: AHORSEBACK

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ROMANCER OF LIFE 6 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii

Awesome! Thanks for sharing.


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ahorseback 6 years ago

Hey generalbrat, I wrote this partly for my brother 'Dougie' who was killed by a hit and run drunk driver in years past , when younger I always worried about forgeting his face or losing his memory . The truth is , we never forget, the memories only brighten with age while the sharp edge of loss dulls in time. You may dedicate this to all those gone before us. We will never forget . Good luck with your writing and in life . And stay well.


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generalbrat 6 years ago from california,usa Author

AGAIN THANKS FOR THIS BEAUTIFUL POEM I HOPE YOU LIKED THE TITLE IF YOU'D LIKE TO CHANGE IT YOUR ALL IN THE RIGHT TO ANY SUGGESTIONS COMING FROM YOU IS ALWAYS HONORED SORRY FOR YOUR LOSS I'M SURE HE KNOWS HOW MUCH HE IS AND WILL ALWAYS BE REMEMBER AND TRUELY LOVED BY ALL.. IT WOULD BE GREAT TO HAVE HIS PICTURE ADDED TO THIS POEM IN HIS REMEMBRANCE. ANYTHING YOU'D LIKE TO ADD TO IT IS FINE WITH ME AND THAT'S HOW IT WILL APPEAR IN TROUBLED THOUGHTS WHEN IT BECOMES A HARDBACK BOOK . I'M CONFIDENT IT WILL BE ONE OF THE WORLDS BEST MOST IMPORTANT BOOKS EVER!!!!!PATIENCE IS TRULY A VIRTUE... HOW YOU FEEL, HOW EVERY LIVING PERSON FEELS IS OF GREAT IMPORTANCE THIS MUST BE SHOUTED TO THE WORLD OUR MEMORIES WILL LIVE ON... WHEN WE FALL ON OUR FACE WE MUST FORCE OURSELVES TO GET UP AND ENFORCE OUR EMOTIONS TO MAINTAIN, REGULATE AND GAIN CONTROL OVER OUR OWN WAR WITHIN OUR LOST TROUBLED MINDS!

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