Take Me Back a poem

TAKE ME BACK

Life is merely black and white
But with you it could be in full color!
Take me into your world of life
Make me amazed and full of wonder

Walking through the trails with you
On a warm spring day
With no cares in the world
You put a smile on my face

Stay with me and be my man again
Bring back those days of happiness
When life was just a dream
Waiting to be fulfilled.

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billybuc 19 months ago from Olympia, WA

Beauty in simplicity. Very nice work, my friend. Many truths here.


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schoolgirlforreal 19 months ago from USA Author

Thank you very much Bill.


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MartieCoetser 19 months ago from South Africa

Beautiful poem! Sadly, a couple gets only one chance to fulfill their dream. If it doesn't work the first time, it will not work the second time. Blessed are those who happen to be perfect for each other...


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schoolgirlforreal 19 months ago from USA Author

Thank you MartieCoetser, I appreciate your honesty.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 19 months ago from Riga, Latvia

Simply awesome. Really enjoyed this and passing this on.


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schoolgirlforreal 19 months ago from USA Author

Thank you very much Gypsy Rose Lee!!!


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dghbrh 19 months ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

Lovely work indeed. Shared and votes way up.


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schoolgirlforreal 19 months ago from USA Author

Thankyou very much dghbrh :)


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ahorseback 16 months ago

You speak for all of us collectively ! At least for those of us who truly yearn . I hear ya !


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schoolgirlforreal 16 months ago from USA Author

Thank you, Ed,

Sometimes it's hard

Thanks

Rose


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Perspycacious 15 months ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

A pure love whisper.


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schoolgirlforreal 15 months ago from USA Author

Perspycacious,

So it is! Thank you!

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