Take care! I Will Be Back

Cold winter...
Cold winter... | Source
Colder winter...
Colder winter... | Source
Coldest winter...
Coldest winter... | Source


When the snow starts falling

There's no turning back


We are captured in a room

With people we don't like


We are longing for the sun

To make us warm again


I'm afraid of my feelings

When the darkness is here


I'm stuck in this place

And it feels like forever


I'm heading to this place soon

Where the ground is white


I really feel captured there

Surrounded by darkness


I'm alone with my feelings

And nobody can imagine


How much I hate the thought

Of a long, dark, cold winter


Yes, I really hate it right now

Thinking of that season


I don't even want to hear about

Anything that's freezing cold


Except for that vanilla ice cream

I enjoyed eating with my family


In the middle of this day

That's warms and sunny


I'm packing my bags now

To fly away over the seas


To a far away destination

And I'm leaving you all


You are my HubFriends

Stuck on this wonderful page


Writing hubs all the time

But I won't read them


Until I return back home again.

And I will miss you all.


Take care! I will be back.

More by this Author


Comments 19 comments

mismazda profile image

mismazda 4 years ago from a southern georgia peach

My, my , my..what can I say..great poem..but is it a underlying statement that you may be leaving..if so..I hope not...anyway I love the poem..


Made profile image

Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

mismazda, I'll be back before the weekend. Don't worry! I could never leave forever. :)


xstatic profile image

xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

A nice farewell, we will look forward to more poems on your return!


Made profile image

Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

xstatic, I will probably be filled with new energy and poems when I return. Thank you!


Mhatter99 profile image

Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

Wow... thank you. Make memories.


Vinaya Ghimire profile image

Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

The words and the pictures both are so beautiful.


Made profile image

Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Mhatter99, I'm ready to make some memories. :)


Made profile image

Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Thank you, Vinaya. Those pictures are all taken where I live. Beautiful but freezing cold.


epigramman profile image

epigramman 4 years ago

...love the words and the images .... you are special - you are like one of God's angels Miss M .....and yes once again I refer this feeling to my lovely Sannel as well - something about the ladies in this part of Europe - so very wonderful are both of you ..... lucky me - lake erie time 6:39am


Made profile image

Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

epi, lucky you and lucky us. I'm glad we have met in HubVille. You know I appreciate all of your wonderful comments. :)


tillsontitan profile image

tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York

Beautiful poem...I don't like the cold either. I can only hope this "leave" you are taking is a vacation and look forward to your return.

Voted up and interesting.


Made profile image

Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Hi tillsontitan, I'm already back. I just went on a short vacation to Copenhagen with my family. Thank you! :)


girishpuri profile image

girishpuri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

amazing piece of poetry, keep writing, voted up.


Made profile image

Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Thank you girishpuri!


James-wolve profile image

James-wolve 4 years ago from Morocco

Where did you go on your short vacation


Made profile image

Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

James, I went to Copenhagen, Denmark. I haven't had time to write a hub about it yet.


James-wolve profile image

James-wolve 4 years ago from Morocco

Oh cool. did you enjoy it there


Made profile image

Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

It was a nice city, but I would have needed a couple of days more to see all I wanted. I'm probably going there in a couple of years again, and then I'll visit Legoland too with our two children.


James-wolve profile image

James-wolve 4 years ago from Morocco

cool it sounds a good place to visit:)

    Sign in or sign up and post using a HubPages Network account.

    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    No HTML is allowed in comments, but URLs will be hyperlinked. Comments are not for promoting your articles or other sites.


    Click to Rate This Article
    working