Take it Back

Just take it back

the taste of your lips

how it sweetens me up

when the spices pour in


coz baby I finally

made up my mind

to be untangled in you


me knows it’s so hard

it’s freaking so hard

coz every time I run away

my heart comes closer back at you


so baby, take it all back

the scent of your skin

how it lingers underneath

addicting me deep within


why can’t I just miss missing you

like at this moment

me trying a poem

or perhaps a song

I can’t help it

I know I should get you off my mind


coz baby I finally

made up my mind

to be untangled in you


can I just take it all back

what I said…


coz me knows it’s so hard

it’s freaking so hard

coz every time I run away

my heart comes closer back at you



**one boring day waiting for someone who’s obviously fallen asleep…Grrrrrrrrr


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carolina muscle 6 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

Take it back? ... Oh is this a sweet poem!!


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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 6 years ago

Ah, so sweet, blaise! :) Is it untangled or tangled? either way, eh? LOL


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

@CM - Hey! Thanks for the sweet comments :) Take it back..um and then not..haha

@Invictus - Thank you! Untangled at first then I wanted to take it back, what I said..hahah..I changed the video and song. My mood has changed and this one was my original pick for this..a good mash up ;) Sorry to kinda tangle your mind LOL


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA

I love that loving expression! Thank you blaise for presenting such a beautiful poem.


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Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

That was so , so lovely . Reminded me of a card I got for my husband years ago,. It said....OK , so I'm in love with you, and when I get hold of that cupid I'm going to break his fat little legs !!!! Love all your work. Thanks for sharing.


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I like the untangle bit, it has multiple meanings. We can get caught up in the love, get caught up in the person, caught up in so many strands of their personality that we do need untangling from time to time, if only to catch our breath or get our bearings. When someone is on my mind I simply find myself going to them.

I used to never find love when I needed it.

Stupid me - I stopped looking for it and practically tripped over it. What does that tell you?

Great hub, as usual from you, Blaise. Bravo.


poetlorraine 6 years ago

nice poem, a change of mind is good


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christalluna1124 6 years ago from Dallas Texas

Blaise,

This was really beautiful and touched me so deeply. Your poetry says so much about whats inside.

warmest regards,

Chris


Jared in Vegas 6 years ago

My high school sweetheart wore a very distinct smelling body spray. I don't know the name of the scent but occasionally I'll smell it and it reminds me of her. This poem reminded me of that.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

@Cupid - Thanks dear cupid! :)

@Dim - your husband is so sweet. You look so good together, Dim :) That cupid hit the perfect match I guess ;) Hey, you noticed there was another cupid before you in there? LOL

Thanks a lot for the wonderful comments. They boost me more to write ;)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

@Astra Nomik - Hey, Cath! Yep, tangled up and untangled in..You're one of a kind gem. I like your insights, sometimes I read 'em and I see inside of me. And with this one, you kinda unfolded it. ;)

Hahaha hell yea! It will trip you over and you'll fall hard enough if you ignore it. Say hi to CG :)

Thanks a lot moi friend!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

@Poet - I'm always glad to see you :) Yea it is sometimes ;) Thanks!

@Cris - Hi! How are you? Really?! I was not serious publishing it but anyway hit the button. ;) It always says what's inside..

I'm glad it touched you deeply. Thank you, Chris! TC

@Jared - nice meeting you. Ow, she must be someone really special ;) Thank you!


Justine76 6 years ago

untangling is one of the hardest things ever.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Yes it is, Justine. Can you teach me how? Coz the more I untangle, the more I get tied up..LOL


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BeccaHubbardWoods 6 years ago from Outside your window...

Sounds like a pop song. I enjoyed the way you wrote this. Much different from most other things I've read on here. Good job! : )


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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 6 years ago

yeah, I like this song better.. I like Rihanna.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

@Becca - nice meeting you! :) Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks a lot! :)

@Invictus - Hey! I so love your avatar though not quite sure what it is ;) hmm heavenly body? love the blue! :)

I like Riri, too. She rocks! hmmm, I'll try singing this one for you... ;)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MXG0bsE83Ec


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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 6 years ago

Hmm, interesting song.. wonder why you would want to sing it for me? Love is a 2 way street and it seems, I've been driving on a 1 way path...

I guess people can make what thet want from the avatar.. Glad you like it.. the image is soothing to me :)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

hahaha coz you make me smile when you share some songs. But this one I'm sharing, one of my faves from Riri..to rock Invictus ;)

Yup, it is a 2-way..where are ya going? I'm here if you want someone to talk to...though my mind is nowhere lately LOL

Yup very soothing :) Hmmm is that a pendulum? OK I'll stop guessing hahaha


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CiscoPixie 6 years ago from I'm in a world of my own, but aren't we all?

i take it back ;)

great poem blaise!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

teach me how.. ;)

thanks Pixie!


Justine76 6 years ago

Blaise, I have no idea, Im so tangled, that every time I try to undo the knots something breaks....

All I can say is eventualy, somehow or other, it does come undone.


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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 6 years ago

Haha, blaise! :) Hmm. about the avatar..your guess is my guess... LOL

Okay, I guess you can sing to me then. thanks for sharing.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

@Justine - something always breaks..yup, perhaps sooner or later it'll turn to what it's supposed to be.

@Invictus - really? Wow, we have d same guess! That thing is hypnotizing.. :)

Welcome! u spoil me with songs, I'll spoil u! :)


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Moulik Mistry 6 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

I loved its sing-song voice, very well done...


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

thank you MOulik ;)


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

I made up my mind - but there she is in that video!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Hahahaha yeah she sings for you, Mik ;)


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Deborah Demander 6 years ago from First Wyoming, then THE WORLD

I like your poetry. Especially the line untangled up in you. I like the way you turn a phrase.

Namaste.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Heya DD nice meetin you! :) Thanks.

Namaste


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Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

"one boring day waiting for someone who’s obviously fallen asleep…Grrrrrrrrr"

Hahaha... Just like someone I know.

Lovely poem, Blaise. Like always. :)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Oh yeah? Whoooo? hahahah

THANKS! Nice to see you Freya :)


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Angelme566 4 years ago

A boring day made you write so beautiful lines.. brilliant writer indeed !

Blaise got this kind of pic then hubpages told me to revise it..how is it in you ?


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

hi Angel. Wow thank you for saying that. You are a brilliant writer yourself :) You got this kind of pic? Those sexy feet? Got mine from Tumblr. Sometimes the pixels thingy make that revise warning.. Oh I wanna read that poem now you are putting that pic on.. :)


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Angelme566 4 years ago

Hi Blaise .it's no longer there ! HP told me to revise it ...so i delete that pic..so now they disable the ads..see there , title is tempting night , it's a haiku only.Thanks.


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

I read your Tempting Night. It's so seductive and tempting. You even got HP's attention hehehe I hope they retained the pic coz it suits the Haiku..word for word..line by line :) Have you contacted HP about the warning? I got few of those before too but I always explained about the hub involved..


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Angelme566 4 years ago

Oh we can air our grievances ? thought we can't..thanks for telling me Blaise..


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Yeah we can contact Hubpages Team if we feel like there is a mistake regarding the hub.. You're welcome, my friend :)


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

It's like an internal turmoil, you want it but you can't, you can but you don't want it anymore...the circle of love life...never ending push-pull game, but it's never boring that way, yeah? =) Love this one, great!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Now I'm thinking..what was really going on that time I wrote this LOL

Yes it's never boring :) Love your thoughts as always. Thank you Max.

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