Taken Away (poem)

(Let your imagination free)

What possible purpose is reason to me

Whose heart by a dream was taken away

To fields fraught with passion where wishes play

And whispers of kisses set my soul free


No limits just skies of things I can do

The music of winds is at my command

The pathways to wonder now close at hand

Those things which made sense are no longer true


Forever and never become the same

Those thoughts running wild are hard to maintain

I turn to unknown to help me explain

What had brought me here it once had a name


And as the man sank and followed his song

She poured one more drink and whispered so long

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kj force 3 years ago from Florida

Mhatter99...one wonders what thoughts go through ones mind..to make them do what they do..and sometimes not even they know the reasons...liked it very much..

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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Mh, the mind is that main battlefield for sure. When one thinks on one thought too long, then it can manifest itself in reality, which is scary, as to exactly what it is one is thinking no doubt!

Voted up +++ and sharing

God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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LisaMarie724 3 years ago from Pittsburgh PA

I really like the feeling of this, very deep. You have a great way with words.

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lrc7815 3 years ago from Central Virginia

MH, this one is so beautifully sweet. We are never really prepared for "goodbye" and yet it is inevitable. It is a reminder that if we have never experienced the rain we cannot appreciate the sunshine. It is life albeit painful. A sad and tender piece of work. Thank you.

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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

You have an interesting and wild imagination!

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carol7777 3 years ago from Arizona

Beautifully written with lots of emotions. Life is full of pain, heartache and love and happiness.

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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Sadness can certainly fill an ending relationship. Keeping the good memories helps to overcome.

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DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Beautiful write, Martin. You bring to life words of pain and disappointment. We have to believe that there is something

better that awaits us, lest we dream in vain.

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breakfastpop 3 years ago

Lovely and ad at the same time. Voted up, beautiful and awesome.

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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Another wonderful creation Martin; a truly talented writer and keep them coming.

Have a great day.


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thost 3 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

A very nice poem Martin. The blues are creeping in, so pour another drink. Will vote up.

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ahorseback 3 years ago

This is very nice , Talk about free verse ! awesome !....Ed

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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

This was a wonderful write, the depth of character is so symbolic.

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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful Martin. I could feel the pain...

Sammy 3 years ago

My mom and dad and my brothers and sisters all 10 of them died in the 2004 Tsunami when i was 11 years old and none cares

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