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About Tanka

Tanka is a Japanese form of poetry which is older than haiku.  A traditional Tanka has 5 lines with syllables in each line of 5-7-5-7-7.  The poem should be organized into two separate thoughts so that lines 1, 2 and 3 can be separated from lines 4 and 5; likewise, lines 3, 4 and 5 can be taken away from lines 1 and 2.  For this reason, the middle line (3) is called a pivot line - it completes the first thought and also begins the second

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Thunderstorm Tanka

thunder broils, clouds loom

with bright electric flashes

like some of my moods

they grow darker through the day

then erupt with a fierce strike







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Stream Tanka

gurgle and bubble

playful water skips on rocks

dances with red leaves

Autumn sneaks up on warm breath

all will soon be ice





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Maryellen Farinas 6 years ago

These are great! Love the poems.


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Hyphenbird 5 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

These are just lovely and the photographs add to the reflections of the poetry. I enjoyed this very much.


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cvanthul 5 years ago from Florida Author

Thank you, Hyphenbird, for your lovely comments.

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