Poem: Tempestuous Wind

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Tempestuous wind –

Unbeknownst Bliss,

Swirling deep

Moaned in ache

One day in dark.


The tender sensual touch

Embracing reticent Lover

In blowing wind

Arose before a heap

Across a timid lake

In sobbing waves.


Then like impatiently

Blew whispers clamorously,

Stroking on its shore

Perpetually and vigil,

Bursted into tears…

Rain… incessant rain!


~ Copyright © Surabhi Kaura 2015

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shprd74 15 months ago from Bangalore

Surabhi, Very Nice depiction of stormy weather. dramatic as weather is.

- Hari


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Surabhi Kaura 15 months ago from Toronto, Canada Author

Hari, thanks for appreciating, my friend! :)


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shprd74 15 months ago from Bangalore

it is drizzing in bangalore too.

I just got an idea after reading your poem, why not also write about different kinds of rain. Rain that come for 2-3 days non stop. rain that falls only in night, rain that falls when there is sunlight forming rainbows. May be you too can try.

- hari


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Surabhi Kaura 15 months ago from Toronto, Canada Author

It is raining cats and dogs here in Toronto!

Thank you, I would surely pedal my heart on that. Sounds galvanizing!


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Jodah 15 months ago from Queensland Australia

Good descriptive word depicting wind and rain, Surabhi.


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Missy Smith 15 months ago from Florida

Very pretty poem! :) LOved iT


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Surabhi Kaura 15 months ago from Toronto, Canada Author

Thank you, Jodah and Missy. I appreciate it.

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