Tender is the Night

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Tender is the night

With you

Breaking my dawn

Two birds in flight

We shine

Brighter than the sun

I look into your eyes

My thoughts start to wonder

Of past and present

And what's to come under

A sweet caress of loveliness

To my heart

You

A gentle blessing

That brought my soul

Into this passionate lesson

Of love and strength

What we can make together

Our love can stand

Beyond the test of time

Everyone can laugh

Say that we won't make it

Try and break us

Failing in spite

Only making us stronger

You have always been

My knight in shining armor

Nobody can take that away

Evil hearts

Can look for their prey

Jealousy coming in

From all corners

The strength of our love

Will always win

Leading our hearts at ease

So we can play

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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

You can just put them out faster than me , Huh?

I may have to move where you are, so I can steal a few of these awesome poems away from you. I really like this one.!!!" a sweet caress of lovliness" that is what you are. my lovely.

much love

Michael

P.S. read some of my new poems you will like them.

Yeah, where you been?


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sam209 4 years ago

I'm a sucker for romance so I have to acknowledge the beauty of this poem! You've got my vote!


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SubRon7 4 years ago from eastern North Dakota

One thing I like about your poems, Caroline--"really" like, is that you portray the sensuousness of your romantic words but still leave much to the imagination of the reader.


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tom hellert 4 years ago from home

C21,

And i thought it was nice...

TH


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mckbirdbks 4 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

A very pleasant read presented with such warmth.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Simply voted up and beautiful and so touching!


Sueswan 4 years ago

Hi Caroline

"A gentle blessing

That brought my soul

Into this passionate lesson

Of love and strength

What we can make together"

Beautiful. Love wins.

Voted up and away!

Take Care


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savanahl 4 years ago

I love your wonderful poem. Your words flow so beautifully. Voted up and beautiful.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Thanks Michael. I have been very busy, but will stop by soon.

@ Sam thank you very much for stopping by!

@ Thank you Jim, I try. :)

@ Tom thank you!

@ Mckbirds thank you!

@ Gypsy thank you!

@ Sueswan thank you very much. Take Care.

@ Thank you Savanahl!


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Sky9106 22 months ago from A beautiful place on earth.

Now I can catch up on all that I have missed , and as always you are still pushing out those beautiful love notes , finally I can take em all in my dear friend Carolinemd21...another beauty and loving my knight in shining armor....Bless.


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carolinemd21 21 months ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Sky9106 it is always great to hear from you my dear friend. I am glad you liked my poem. :)

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