Storm/ Love poem

Storm/ Love poem

  My heart beats fast

When I think of you.

My mind goes cloudy,

I don't know what to do.

I close my eyes,

Your face I see.

My emotions go wild,

You won't let me be.

You rob me of all,

My waking hours.

I sense in you,

A strong drawing power.

My control is gone,

When you are near.

I think to myself,

How did I end up here.

When I see you coming,

I lose control again.

As I watch you leave,

My storm begins.

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kirutaye 6 years ago from London, UK

Lovely peom. Well written.

4elements 6 years ago

Thank you. I have been writing poems since i was 11 years old.

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bluejay900 6 years ago

that was great! you're an awesome poet

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4elements 6 years ago Author

Thank you have always enjoyes writing poems

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Mystique Scorpio 6 years ago from Edmonton Alberta ;)

really good...I'm actually feeling the samething about someone ....unfortunatly.

4elements 6 years ago

I know it sucks! but go one day at a time and everything will be as it should be!

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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you...

SO cute and so sweet. I'm an instant fan :)

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nighthag 6 years ago from Australia

again another gem of yours, full of emotion, loved it!

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Johnny Love 5 years ago

Tasting love on the winds of dreams I see in your eyes something painful but so beautiful. You have touched my heart again, and I thank you for the blessing you are.

4elements 5 years ago

Thank you Johnny I appreciate all the comments you have left. I hope it will continue as I will continue reading and commenting on yours. Blessings my friend

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btrbell 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

Perfect poem! Thank you!

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4elements 4 years ago Author

Thank you so much. I enjoy writing poetry the same as short stories. Thanks for the comment. blessings

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