That Sleek Satin Slumber.

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A night so filled

with sleek satin slumber.

Those dreams flowing

temptations glowing.

Enticing

inviting

are those seductive stars

crying out for that night

of sleek satin slumbers

dipped in moonlit passion.

Magnetically divine

are those moonlit paths

flowing

through senses so accepting!!!

Drawing us nearer and nearer!!!!

Temptations at their utmost

drawing out each

innocent

heart.

So near to indulging in that night

of stolen passion.

Heartbeats racing!!!

Senses quivering!!!

Moonlit serenade

caress each indulging

moment!!!!

Moving

so much nearer

to that moment of

surrender.

That sleek satin slumber

so near to that awakening

that pounding temptation!!!

So much nearer

to those

pastures

so new

so deadly

but

so craved for!!!!


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As sudden as a flash of lightening

a pain of sharp realisation

seeps through

each wanton

each so deeply

craving

sense.

A sobering

of dark regret ;

that deep regret

for what could have been.

Discarded into oblivion

as a

brighter slither

of light shines through

in such a cruel

deep

sharp

accusation.

Here advances

that new dawn

of tomorrow.

That sleek satin slumber

crushed

by the birth

of a sobering

brand new day!!!

Shatters each dream;

each temptation

each enticement!!!

To awake in discontent

so knowing

that the deep temptation

of my sleek satin slumber

was

now

ERASED!!!!!!

From within

into

OBLIVION!!!!

Is it always correct to shatter temptations???!!!

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I hope you all enjoyed this hub, in a totally different style for me.

Have a great day.

Eddy.

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pstraubie48 profile image

pstraubie48 4 years ago from sunny Florida

and the new day does come...the satin slumber real or imagined, a few stolen moments, and then the dawn...

i felt this as i feel as though i have been here.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so very much pstraubie48;your comment so appreciated.

Enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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btrbell 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

Wow! It is different for you! Amazing poem! Up and awesome!


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

what a beautiful poem to wake up to on a/Sunday morning in the Lord. Ohhh my sweet friend Eddy.. You have awakening in the lord He has given you such beautiful words or HIM. many blessings my sweet friend

sharing and voted up

Debbie


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James-wolve 4 years ago from Morocco

Really dont know what to say.That s so beautiful.Thanks for sharing.I voted up.


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Cyndi10 4 years ago from Georgia

Lovely poem; beautiful pictures!


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Janine Huldie 4 years ago from New York, New York

Wow, gorgeous and loving this different approach from you. Of course love all your poetry though and will take it any which wayI can get. Beautiful and am of course sharing all over and voting up too!!


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so very much btrbell;your comment so appreciated and enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much too Debbie and these words from you mean so much. You inspire me with all your work and for your friendship a great big thank you also.

Enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much also James-wolve and I also look forward to reading many more of yours also.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much Cyndi10;your words are truly appreciated.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

As always Janine your support and friendship means the world.

Have a wonderful day.

Eddy.


cleaner3 4 years ago

great write Eddi, you are able to write on any topic with a class that no other can match .!


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Pamela99 4 years ago from United States

I think his is a beautiful poem. It did feel like an experience I had before and I think you can probably be successful with any new style as you are such a talented writer.!


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

I really enjoyed your beautiful poem!


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Wonderful heart felt poem is so beautiful.

Voted up and awesome, Joyce.


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BlossomSB 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Satin sleek slumber! What an awakening from sibilant slumber to strong spurning of seduction. It was certainly different from your usual work, Eddie - so good.


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marcoujor 4 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

An exciting and loving read...I like when you go out of your comfort zone, eddy. It works for you. Voted UP and ABI. Hugs, Maria


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Wow, Is this a new you? If so, I like it. Satin-sleek- sumber..That must be wonderful to frolic in satin? Makes me think of the song, ' Slip sliding away ' Ha. Cyber hug my friend..


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Rosemay50 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

This is certainly different from you Eddy. A beautifully written poem and photos

Hugs


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

I have dived into that sea many times. Thanks for the memories.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much for these supportive words cleaner3 and enjoy your day

Eddy..


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you Pamela and here's to so many more hubs for us both to share on here.

Your comment is so appreciated.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much flashmakeit and enjoy your day.

eddy.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Your words so appreciated Joyce.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you Blossom.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Thanks for the supportive works Mar and here's to so many more for us both to share on here.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Great comment ;thanks Ruby.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Your supportive words so appreciated Rosemay.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

You are so welcome Mhatter99.


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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

You did exceptionally well with this style. It fits well the subject and delivers the intensity with strength. Great Job!


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Thnk you so very much rcrumple; your support is greatly appreciated.

Have a great day my friend.

Eddy.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Awesome Eddy. Your words like smooth satin flowed. Enjoyed.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much Rasma and have a great day.

Eddy


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midget38 4 years ago from Singapore

Whoo whoo. I could feel the passion in your poem as I read it. Truly tingling. Satin always signals temptation, a well chosen symbol here as well. Well expressed! I vote up and share!


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SkeetyD 4 years ago from Barbados

That was a great poem. I hope you write more


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so very much midget your words are so appreciated.

Enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you SkeetyD your comment so appreciated. I now look forward to reading your hubs also.

Eddy.


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LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

Wow, Eddy, this is really different! So romantic, or should I say sensual! Very nicely done, and flows so well..... Don't want to wake up, LOL, voting up and beautiful!


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CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

Hats off to you Eddy! I love everything on this hub from the title to the end.

Quite intense but that's how you leave an impact.

Love from the sky~


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teaches12345 4 years ago

I really like this different style, Eddy. Your opening photo swirled in with such passionate color to intensify the emotional draw of temptation. Yes, resist it. It's beauty will only lead to deceit the next day. Voted way up.


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kittythedreamer 4 years ago from the Ether

I really liked this hub, Eddy. Beautiful words and flow to this poetry. Voted up and beautiful!


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Fiddleman 4 years ago from Zirconia, North Carolina

Eddy, you're a genius and your skills at poetry are here so evident, a pleasure to read and the rhythmn and motion so vividly expressed.


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Cheeky Girl 4 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Ay Caramba! This is hot and amazing writing! Gets my vote! Cheers! :)


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much La Thing.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

So glad you liked this one Cris Sp and here's to so many more for us both to share on here.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

As always thank you so much teaches.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Thanks kittythedreamer as always your comment so appreciated.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Oh Fiddleman thank you so very much your words really do mean so very much.

Enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so very much Cheeky Girl and I now look forward to reading your hubs also.

Eddy.


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old albion 4 years ago from Lancashire. England.

Another very nice hub Eddy. Keep them coming, I feel something different here, I don't yet know what.

Graham.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so very much Graham and I think I am going through what is known as stepping out of my comfort zone. Now I have begun I shall have to carry on.

Enjoy your day .

Eddy.


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

Loved the sharp difference in emotions this evoked! After the first- i thought i needed a smoke(lol)..but - after the second - i felt...restless...dissatisfied..

frustrated...

very interesting, Eddy

sharing here!


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you ImKarn;each and every comment is always so greatly appreciated.

Enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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bravewarrior 4 years ago from Central Florida

Eddy, temptation is often what leads us to move forward and venture into the unknown. Without temptation, drive doesn't exist. We just need to recognize the many faces of temptation and make the right choice!


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales Author

So true bravewarrior ,you are so right and sometimes it is only with hindsight that we recognise some of these temptations for what they are.

We shouldn't feel bad ;we just learn an important lesson and move on.

Havea wonderful weekend.

Eddy.

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