April-National Poetry Month - Poem 2

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Poem 2

Breezing through

Day 2

I am loose

As a goose

Rhyming verse, quite obtuse

Metering lines

Like Dr. Suess

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Trying, less

Lying? Yes

Thoughts arising

To and fro

Hangin', moving

nice and slow

Only 28 days

To go



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jhamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

On to the third! What a crazy 30/30. I cannot wait to read the ones to come. I may have missed your first going back soon. Jamie


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Ruby H Rose 4 years ago from Northwest Washington on an Island

This is great! You have many of us writing poems too. Yikes, I am behind schedule! Thanks for this wonderful idea. It is only day 2 where I live.


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Voted up and awesome, Joyce.


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

And on to the 3rd!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and funny. That was good keep going.


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Victoria Stephens 4 years ago from London

I like the idea of a 30 day poem chalange, good luck with it.x


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ananceleste 4 years ago from California


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

My lovely Ann,

I am falling in love with you,

or maybe it's your poetry,

thats so cool

it's just the way I like it

short and sweet , just like you

Are you taller than Scooby Do ?

And are you married and to who?

and call me.

Michael, so I won't be blue


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mckbirdbks 4 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

Clever and catchy. Nice work.


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

tappin' my toe, fer sure! I love Dr. Seuss! BUT....

That Cleaner Three,

Said he loved me!

Oh, how can that be?

Fickle - Clearly! (LOL)


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

is it possible to be

in love with three?

or more, or is it just me?

who throws words of love

to all the women I see,

shame on me!

You should know that

it is only thee

I should give my love so free

see.

.


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

I am so late with this. Hello Jhamann. Crazy? Yes.

I'm working on #6 today. Thanks for the look-see. AD


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

Ruby! I'm behind schedule to! Welcome to the club. Write on! AD


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

Joyce....help!


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

5 and counting


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

Thanks for the encouragement. I am surprised at how many people are doing this. We are all crazy. Thanks for votes. Ann Davis


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

I need luck...oh well I guess I need prayers. Thank you Victoria...Thank you for the comment. I see you are level 2. I am going to check out your profile.

Have a great day! Ann


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

ananceleste, what does that mean?


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

Funny and clever you are, Cleaner3. Thanks for the accolades!

Ann


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

Thanks mckbird...is your name Mike? I have seen reference to that, I think.

Always appreciate your comments.


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

Betrayal!!!! I feel the frost!

ImKarn, Loved this comment. lol lol.

Every thing will be allright as long as you keep tapping your toe! Fer sure!


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

cleaner3....you should sign up to be the next bachelor! Bet you could charm a whole bunch of bachelorettes!

Thanks for the comment! Have a happy day! Ann Davis

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