The Beauty of a Poem

Beautiful... so lavishing
Created by imagination
Written with great determination.


Fantastic... so real
Molding our talents
Revealing our fears and dreams.


Caressed by inspiration
Kissed by satisfaction
Watered by creation.


Poems are real
Showing affection,
Loneliness and happiness.


Crazy sometimes
Poems make a good way
To start life.


They are mysteries
Of life’s hidden desires
If you make a poem,


You’re truly one of a kind!


Makes me wonder,
Can I write one?


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snowdrops 4 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

Nice words!


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christin53 4 years ago from UK

I can answer that yes you can definitely write poems I loved it :)

Voted up and sharing.


Larry Wall 4 years ago

"Makes me wonder if I can write one."

Most assuredly the answer is yes. You have a rare talent, you should begin looking at the next level and see if you can turn this hobby into a career. I think you have the talent for it.


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Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

You most definitely can write them M. Beautiful words as always and I love the message. Voting this up, interesting, awesome, and beautiful :)


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fjpteach 4 years ago from Humble, TX

So true! Love the "Kissed by satisfaction."


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Wow! I got a lot of lovely messages!

@Larry, you think so? I'm kinda 'don't know' how and what to write. Thank you so much for believing in me.

@Snow, Christin, James, FP, my heart says thank you for these very beautiful comments!


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

You are a great poem writer, like the one above is amazingly good.

Voted up and awesome, Joyce keep writing them out.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Wow, this is amazing! Thank you so much Joyce!


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sen.sush23 4 years ago from Kolkata, India

Unknown spy, I am sure you no longer need an affirmation. A very interesting and vibrant poetic description of poem! Voted up..hmm, so you have written one. :)


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Angela Brummer 4 years ago from Lincoln, Nebraska

I love the kissed by satisfaction! Wow amazing! I will share this!


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shalini sharan 4 years ago from Delhi

beautiful indeed


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myownlife 4 years ago from london

so much entertaining poem, always loneliness gives us creations, beautifully composed,


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Your beautiful words linger in the ear like a soft touch of a woman on one's skin, you paint pictures with words like some grand master, that teases and pleases the senses, you are a poet at heart, you are M.

Vote up and more !!!


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kj force 4 years ago from Florida

unknown spy..you just did one...loved the words from your world..you have a knack for " flowing words "..very pretty word picture...


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

and when we must part

I leave you this


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Sen, Sha, Myownlife, Kashmir, KJF, Mhatter,

thanks much guys! I appreciate your beautiful comments! Oh I loved it. thanks again! (and for the votes, hehehe)

Thanks for the Shared Angela!


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

You wrote a beautiful one my friend....


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi Ruby, that's soo sweet of you! thank you much much :)


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thecrazzykylex 4 years ago from Incredible India!

Two words: Simply awesome. Wish I could steal your creative mind. How do you make such enticing poems? Is it your brain or your heart or your imagination?


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Wow, i give you my answer in 2 words:

I'm Speechless.

:) Thank you so much for this lovely message. it was born by chance. :)


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jonmcclusk 4 years ago from Cinnaminson, New Jersey

This was both clever and fun, thanks for sharing this with us.


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vespawoolf 4 years ago from Peru, South America

Beautiful flow and word choices. You most definitely can!


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teaches12345 4 years ago

Poems are so magical in thought and able to transform a dismal day into bright ray of hope. Your use of words are excellent and shows your talent.


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CrazedNovelist 4 years ago from Hampton, GA

Always a pleasure reading your work. :)


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

The anser is yes - you prove your wonderful ability with this. Magnificient.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Jon, Vespa, Teaches, Crazed, Shining Irish,

thank you so much!! I really appreciate your beautiful kind words to me. Big hugs to you guys!


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Fennelseed 4 years ago from Australia

Absolutely, Unknown Spy and you have captured the essence of poetry right here in you poem. Poems do reveal so much about us but also provide mystery as every interpretation is different and is based on the readers experience. Lovely poem about poetry. My votes and best wishes and sharing!!!


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA

How cool your poem asked the question! And the answer is a resounded yes--you sure can! many votes and sharing!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Annie, thank you for the votes and Shared!

Poems are our bestfriends. we tell our secrets to them and they hide it on methaporical world of theirs. and those people with the same secret can understand. hehe


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hehe thanks much Victoria! thank you so much for the votes and shared. Oh you're so sweet.


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

"Beautiful... so lavishing

Created by imagination

Written with great determination"

Another great job M! Keep up the great work! :) An excellent way to describe a poem Voted up, awesome, and beautiful!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

hehehe thanks J!!


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

You are welcome M! :)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

J, :P

lol!


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

You certainly can!!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thanks so much Lesley!


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CloudExplorer 4 years ago from New York City

Another beautiful poem of your Unknown spy, very imaginative, and creative indeed. I also love poetry and your style is short and sweet, nice!

Voted up and just like the first one I read of yours, getting shared outside of this place known as hubpages.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you so much Cloud!! I really appreciate your kind words and shared ^;^


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rajan jolly 4 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

unknown spy, poems indeed show our longings, desires, happiness, sadness, fulfilment, emptiness, craziness, soberness, elation,dejection, freedom, captivity, imagination, reality, ..... In fact, a whole gamut of human emotions are captured by a poet in an intensity which is not possible in prose with so few words.

You have proved this here. You have a way with words.

Voted up, beautiful and awesome.

Shared it on fb and tweeted.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Rajan..what can I say..im speechless. This is very kind of you. So uplifting and so inspiring! Thank you much for the shared and tweet!!


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Voronwe 4 years ago

Nice poem. I like the ending especially...some /often writers walk between their vanity and insecurity, precariously balanced by these two forces. Also like "Poems are real', that's how I feel about the characters in my stories.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi Voronwe. thank you for the beautiful comment...oh my.my ears are growing already...


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PurvisBobbi44 4 years ago from Florida

unknown spy,

Anything from the heart of a person is beautiful to me. Your poem is lovely--- and yes I would guess you can compose and write about anything your heart desires.

Have a great weekend.

Your Hub Friend,

Bobbi Purvis


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi Bobbi,

Thank you so much for this kind message!

Hugs.


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Phelcky 4 years ago from Denmark

Ahh an awesome poem about the beauty of poems. I'm so glad that we have poetry to express ourselves. What would we do without it?


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QudsiaP1 4 years ago

In my stint on hubpages I must have come across hundreds of poems but never once did I see a poem explaining the beauty of poetry itself. What a wonderful idea and you have expressed it beautifully.


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JMCL162 4 years ago from New York

I really liked the tone and style of this poem. "watered by creation" is my favorite line. shared and voted up!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

@Phelcky, thank you again! poetry is a way to express feelings, especially the deep ones you want to hide. :)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

QudsiaP1, thank you for this very wonderful comment. I am so glad that you like it.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi JM, all my thanks for your very kind message. Thank you so much for the shared, read, and votes!


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Debby Bruck 4 years ago

Dear Spy ~ Looks like everyone gave you the answer you were hoping to hear. Blessings, Debby


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Oh thank you much Debby!


oceansider 4 years ago

I love your poem, well done M!

Helen


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi Helen! Thank you for the message!


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thecrazzykylex 4 years ago from Incredible India!

"Can I write one" How far I know, This question is definitely not applicable to someone called Unknown Spy, and also Snowdrops.

Great poem, again, Spy! Wish I could write such poems everyday.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

can i say thank you 100x? you really got me Kylex! (cute*) Thanks so much!


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bravewarrior 4 years ago from Central Florida

Yes, you can write a poem, Spy. And so, so beautiful! Keep 'em coming.....


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Whew!! brave, your soo sweet!! love you!


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bravewarrior 4 years ago from Central Florida

Backacha, Spy! :-)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

brave!! whew, nice to see you! :)


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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

You surely have one beautiful one here spy... wonderful poem :)


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whittwrites 4 years ago from the Philly area

You're truly one of a kind... I love that line because truly each of us is one of a kind. Great poem


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jhamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

You encapsulated all the feelings I have had throughout my journey with poetry, thank you. Jamie


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

To Rah, Whittwrites, Jamie,

All my thanks to you guys, I really appreciate your kind words.


Vincent Moore 3 years ago

Well Spy I would call this a poem, your not suffering from this phobia at all? lol Definitely a beautiful piece.


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unknown spy 3 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

hahaha you've made me l-o-l on your comment :)

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